Originally posted by: srahs
Well its sad u dont critisim (not refer author here) i am arhi ff sucker and i dont need to jistify my pov to anyone other then author.
I do respect your povz you should also respect mine.
I was utterly disappointed with ending when i checked later authors note two pages back she acknowledged this as many other readers had same.
Honestly when i start reading ff i dont expect fairytales coz i m not cheezy sort person i like ff close to reality but somehow or somewhere i just couldnt get through this.
Well if u count this as bashing then sorry to hurt you i just was being honest. Well anyway ill edit this for arnavini as i dont want to hurt anyone or fight here with anyone.
Honestly to feel anyones pain you dont have to be one among them. I felt very attached to story but i was very disappointed with ending...i will stick to this.
Thanku sarithalatha for helping me out with this to understand but when i wrote above it was in utter disappointment.
Sorry to all readers but i expressed my feelings as i dont want to create scene here or fight with anyone so ill take my comment back and edited it.
arnavini i dont want to hurt your di i haven't read her note in start if i had maybe my reaction would have been different.
Thanks
Hello Srahs:
First of all, thank you so much for spending your valuable time in reading my fanfiction. It truly means alot.
I read your earlier comment when I was in vacation, and I now see that you had edited your comment. I was planning to respond to you right away when I read your earlier comment but then I needed time to draft it. I didnt want to respond in rush.
Before I proceed to discuss my POV on the story, let me give you piece of advice. Feel free to trash it if you find even that along with my story as stupid. When you wrote your first comment, you wrote your feelings out, you wrote your heart out. Believe me I smiled reading it, I was not hurt, as I knew what I was getting into when I wrote this story. There was absolutely no need to edit it just because my readers, my friends or my well wishers asked you. Tomorrow even if my mom comes and ask you to edit it in the favor of her daughter, you dont need to because you expressed your true feelings and did nothing wrong.
Make no mistake, if you edit it, I might assume that you are regretting your words.
Coming to the story, I beg to defer with your opinion on my story. My story is not stupid, it certainly is not illogical. In your earlier comment, you repeatedly mentioned reading this story was such a waste of time from the chapter Khushi was molested. If you werent pleased with the track, you should have stopped right then and there. Writing is my passion and I write to entertain and not to waste anyone's valuable time. The fact that you kept reading one chapter after the other proves that my story kept you hooked to the roots.
My every story conveys a social message, or highlights the social issue of todays world. When I took up TVK, my main motive was to portray it close to reality. You also asked me what is Arnav's mistake in all this? I never portrayed nor showed it as his mistake. Repeatedly, I mentioned in my story that it was not any character's mistake. It was one's fate and how each individual acts to the circumstance. And one thing that I always make sure is to keep the characterization in tact. And again I have to disagree with your comment that I brutally killed Arnav's character and it is sad that you suggested suicide for him. He is the strongest person in the TVK if you understand the plot correctly. He is invincible, no matter what happened in his life, he always stood strong with his head high. In a way, Adi was defeated every moment Arnav loved her and was never able to hate Khushi for any reason.
Coming to my favorite part "the ending". I respect your opinion on it. But trust me whether there was be a sequel to TVK or not, that would be THE ending close to reality and I would never change a word of it. You may call me arrogant for saying that statement but I had to imagine myself a victim in order to write Khushi decision. After working with abused women, I couldnt think of better ending than that.
Lastly, I remember you mentioned that you discontinued my other story and read this because few friends forced you. Next time please dont take blind suggestions. If you are apprehensive, better to contact writer directly and learn the expectations.
No hard feelings. Feel free to disagree, and once again thank you for your honest feedback.
PS: And you are right about these crazy women, who jumped up for me. Fortunate to have such loving family on IF...
PPS: Lala, I read your comment as well, I wonder why you had deleted it.
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