Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 102

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Anu179 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii Deepti,
This is one astoundingly intense, totally out of fathoms ...immensely gripping, and brilliantly written story. Two equally head strong character Arnav and Khushi, so similar yet so apart falling in love...a very pure love, going through so much pain, for reasons beyond their control. The freshness in their blossoming love was as much palpapable as was their pain during their separation/ misunderstanding. Your explanations/ note at every twist were very enlightening, though some were very difficult to digest...reality at times is very bitter...I bitterly cried when Khushi was atrociously demeaned by that beast...and when she finds out that baby is outcome of rape...my heart bled for her...Bless Aman, Nani, NK n Bua too...they were like an oasis for both Arnav and Khushi along with the readers. I'm so very glad to have found this story, and thank you so much for having faith in your readers and leaving it on the forum.
Hopping on to the sequel...need some light moments and romance after all this intensity...Thank you so much once again for this awesome read...xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read the entire story altogether and I want to say so much. Bt ri8 nw at this moment I m crying like anything at the end.
I take pride in Arnav's love, bas !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaarnavsr

I read the entire story altogether and I want to say so much. Bt ri8 nw at this moment I m crying like anything at the end.

aawww u r crying..😭😭 for me u r so lucky that u r crying now n khtmmm.. bt we cried in instalments per update..😆lol...😉 even we r crying till now coz WRITER is DAMMNNN TOO GOOD...
now read FIGHTING FATE and then SEX BETWEEN HEARTS...

I take pride in Arnav's love, bas !!
apney JIJU pe chance nahi maartey..😡😡😡 bad manners..hehehehehe😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
As much as my eyes are sore of reading and crying, I m happy that there is a ray of hope with sequel and I cant stop jumping to read that ri8 nw !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Yeah ri8 and I cant agree more. EVery chapter is a roller coaster ride of emotions



And jiju *jaw drops open like khushi infact more than that*

Nahiii *screaming louder than sanaya did in the show*

No way, not even in my wildest dreams !!! Hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh that was a freaking awesome story
Very emotional one
Will read the sequel now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Deepthiya, Thanks once again for giving the links to your stories.
I have read so many so many stories on IF and handful of them will stay with me till Arshi stays with me, which I hope is for a long long time. This story, TVK-I read in all last week and just could not stop.

Did I love it-no, not really. Did I think I should stop-No. I know you had pre-warned that this story is not mushy and romantic, but its funny how you also said that this story is not gonna have a"mature stuff" and as I finished it, I felt, this was by far the most mature story I have read. It was dark and mature. No other ways to describe it. I felt angry at times about the decisions the central characters took and also sad at what life kept throwing at them. I kept wishing for some peace for them and dreamt a simple romance but it kept getting more complicated and heartbreaking. There could not have been another end, thats for sure. They both were too broken for anything else.

You write about topics which are not easy to understand, yet you do a beautiful job threading them together in your story. I am gonna absolutely read Fighting Fate, mostly to give Arnav and Khushi, the dream couple in my head, to have some sort of closure. To be them, to be what they epitomizes to us.


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Posted: 10 years ago
super fabulous
full of heart touching emotions
and fabulously and beautifully written ff
this is the first ff that really left me emotionally drained and even with the sad ending and arshi apart
it feel simply right andcorrect
love ur writingstyle
hats.off to ur way of writing
simply awesome
and
truly i m feeling short if proper words to praise ur ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi , I know it is too late to appreciate your story..
i came across this story last week and read it..
Such a lovely and same time sad story...

i was very upset the way Khushi life changed and how she faced it boldly by separating her from Arnav..

As you said in your last chapter author notes it is reality and khushi decision is correct as she always believed to give importance to child than to others..

but as they say every story ends in good note.. i want you to continue its second part. I am not sure if it started..if i will search for it and read..

Great writing yaar!!!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi,,,please consider me as huge FAN of your writing...no words to express my feelings for both the stories. 👏👏👏

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