TH 1: ARSHI FF: A Silent Roar Chapters 1-5 /COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Horizon

Glad you posted it here faiqa. Intriguing start and look forward to the story to unfold.
Congrats on that first vm. Very aesthetically done.


Thnx Horizon😊

Glad you liked it.It will be fun unfolding this mystery...

I was excited for this VM , turned out nice and really happy you all enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Katelyn

Big congrats on becoming a FF writer, Faiqa! 🤗 Yay!!!! 🥳


The teaser is really intense and intriguing!! Everyone wants to know why they have been separated for 3 years. And the mighty ASR is unable to locate his wife. Wonder maybe she is using another name. Khushi must have had a very compelling reason to leave Arnav. Both are in so much pain! 😭

And the trailer is just mangifique!! The music is awesome and it has an epic feel to it!! I love the title of your FF as well!!

Looking forward read more!! Great job!! 👏 👍🏼 ❤️

Giving you an ASR wink!! 😉





Katelyn 🤗❤️

Love the Thank You gif...with wink

😆 I am going to be happy to please everyone with this revelation and if read Rhea , she is already worried about the ending and I didn't reach to the first chapter yet...so cute...
Mighty ASR is not so mighty after all...He is a human ,just doesn't realize it...

hmmm...no she didn't change her name...you are the only one I am answering this question...😃

Kate their love is folded in pain since from the beginning but they unveiled each other's love in such a way that no one can...and that is my tight grabber..for this story...

You are flooring me with everything...u r cute...😊

Thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Thnx Zariya 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Ipoona

ArshiH ... Congratulations on a brilliant start of your first FF and VM. Am eagerly looking forward to the story ... Absolutely loved the vm ... 👏 👏 👏 Lovely ethereal quality to the music ... Wish you much success with your new endeavor. Waiting for your next update.


Hey Ipoona🤗

Good to see you my friend...trying something new , lets see how it is going to unfold ...you liked the VM, me happy ...
I will be having fun writing it and exploring it with you all...

Thank you for being with me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: jdd1959

GREAT START...

VERY CURIOUS N INTERESTED 2 KNOW WHAT MADE THEM 2 STAY SEPARATED.
PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATED.I M SENDING U BUDDY REQUEST.
THANKS,,,,


Jdd😊

I am curious too , why their hearts want to stay far away yet together...Ultimate side of love...😊

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Suchi.R

Brilliant start.. would love to read more..


Thnx sachi😊

glad you liked the start
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: pup03

sounds interesting.. would like to know the reasons why arnav should stay away from her as khushi stated??? loved the prologue and vm teaser.. 😊


pup😊

That will be explored in this story and you will figure out with pieces of information in the form of clues here and there...Thnx for liking the teaser and the VM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: AdiGallia

Beautiful concept ArshiH,👏 quiet a gripping and echoing title👏⭐️

Congratulations and many thanks for translating at the same time because I am not good at hindi.
There must be a reason for this huge separation in between them and your trailer is telling a glimpse of this story.can't wait.


Hey Gallia 😊❤️

Echoing title...me love this term of yours...😊

You are very welcome, I will definitely be doing translations...no worries

This trailer is just the beginning...so sit tight and enjoy🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#89


Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

interesting...i would like to read it...


Thnx Arshikha😊

I hope this piece will make you come again and again..

Originally posted by: latha72

Very interesting start. Looking forward for the mystery to unfold!


Latha, 😊

I would be glad to explore it with you


Originally posted by: Galactica

Quiet interesting😊


Thnx Galactica😊
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: stg1

beautiful start! i like the imagery u have created, his anger and despair, her anguish every time she feels his pain reaching out to her. i am a total romantic and never wanted their separation in the show, i just wanted arnav to have to work a little harder to get khushi and her trust back! but i always wondered what would have happened if they had been separated so i'm glad ur central premise seems to be based on this. looking forward to seeing where u take this, and thanks for the pm 😛


Awww Saba 😊

I tried to portray them by remaining in the same norms of IPK and their characters...Khushi will be Khushi and Arnav will be Arnav in their traits but the story will be different...Separation ...I hated that too and always wanted ASR to win her the right way...but separation always bring more intensity into any relationship but ASR was afraid of this DISTANCE and separation and how all of this happened and why will be explored...

Thanks very much my friend...


Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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