TH 1: ARSHI FF: A Silent Roar Chapters 1-5 /COMPLETED

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@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Good start !!! khushi is in Pune and arnav is looking out for her.. well in past also he had found her lets hope he will find her once again.. loved the start..😃

thanks for pm 😊

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

wow beautiful update loved it.

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Very intriguing update.

So many q's waiting to be answered. Will wait for you to unfold!

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

ArshiDi❤️

So He did something, I was right. Now Khushi is in Puna and kind a away from her hurting heart .He calls her ,are you listening Khushi, you made me cry di😭

She is spreading joy but her own heart is somewhere else.

You are sadistic di.This is painful😭

But you are cheering me up yes, office days and her madness.😆 can't wait,but wait I have to wait whole damn week .not fair

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

i just came across it...
The prologue is really appealing...
It has actualy pulled me to read the ff...
Nd so i read the 1st chapy...
Loved it...
Plz do pm me nxt...

Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

👏 di it was lovely

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but little call confusing no probe

it will get clear as story progress

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Adigallia Rodriguez

@AdiGallia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

ArshiHamesha❤️

First complaint, you forgot to PM me.

This is getting better and better,His own actions are reaping the consequences but doesn't seem those are attached to Khushi because no matter what he won't do anything to sabotage his relationship with her up to the mark of separation of this level.Something has to be the trigger, no clue yet except that earring near the poolside .

She is Puna, second clue, why not in Lukhnow, something has happened in Lukhnow and that made them to leave their home.I am anxious to know that part.Definitely attached to his past, may be I am wrong but trying hard.

Your story is a riddle and must say hooking me up.

I read a lot of stories but those are not mysteries, This is different.

Please don't forget to PM. .😊

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

Me first 😊

Loved it, ArshiH!

Two things I love right off the bat!
1. Looks like there is an office track to this story, which I really would love to read!

2. I really love this glimpse of a Khushi who is independent and resilient, in a dignified way - reflecting her pure essence of spreading happiness and sweetness to others inspite of her own grief.
(I loved the cute, Sanki Khushi who tried to run mithai business from the garage, but very much disliked the over the top Khushi of the Mrs.India track.)

Will come back to edit my post with my comments, soon!

- IS

Thnx IS 😊

I am thrilled to know that you like the office days too...yes our sanka devi is ready to do some damage to the mighty ASR and his pride to lose himself for her.SHe is independent , as I always wanna see that , yes hides her own pains for spreading smiles for others...

I never liked after remarriage so forget it

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: siva2901
wow beautiful starts
i really loved it
your writing style is amazing
keep going dear
its damn interesting
will be waiting for your pm eve sat
Take care
pls continue sooon

Siva 😊

You are flooring me with your words, Really love hearing that it is worth to try.

You found it damn interesting and I found it intriguing for myself too...Lets see how I will explore this journey and with this kind a encouragement I will do much more.

Thank you😊