TH 1: ARSHI FF: A Silent Roar Chapters 1-5 /COMPLETED

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Roop_P
Arshi,😊
This is incredibly intense , they are married, madly in love, can sense from miles away and still have a wall of separation created by Khushi, seems like it.

SO much pain now question is why?😭 Really want to know the reason.He is sensing her, she knows his convulsive state but taking her Fate to stay away because he will be fine without her,interesting...I must say that.

Compelling Teaser and VM,👏

Please do PM me whenever you update, and hope soon😊

Awww Roop ❤️

Thnx , love the way you described their pain and love and feel and distress and ALL...

The question is the key of this story and it will be answered eventually ...Arnav and Khushi's love is not an ordinary love , form my POV it is Ishq and in that state you cross all the barriers , now if she is keeping one and still is unsuccessful then that shows they have crossed a milestone in this relationship...so what brought her to this edge to leave him...that is something...

Glad you enjoyed it...

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Soni 🤗you are a master of writing FF, I am definitely not but it will be a good experience...lets see
Thnx for liking the VM😊

and I was just kidding , don't be serious all the time...I was trying to make your laugh...

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Finally you managed putting it on a separate thread.😊

Simply thrilling start ,👏 bone chilling moments from both sides.If one side is burning then other is cindering with this distance in between em and determined to close this gap and he will if you ask me.

Three years , that are a lot for Arnav not being able to locate his Khushi if you ask me , a man full of resources couldn't locate her and that is raging him up.

Please do continue and hoping that will be soon.

Loved the VM , especially the music.👏

Edited by MehreenB - 11 years ago

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

OMG, di you finally have started FF, 🤗v🤗

our heartbeats are one now.Love you.

What a heart gripping start 👏 but why ? why did Khushi leave him?😭How come the great ASR couldn't find her?😡Why she left Lakhnow?Why is she accepting it as her Fate?😕DId Arnav do anything?😲

Now you have to update soon,please😛

AND you made VM, trailer is fantabulous⭐️

Every weekend ,I will be here first one.Paka😊

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Super start to the new FF! Arshi separated already, what went wrong? Waiting for the story to unravel.👏

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Horizon

@Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Glad you posted it here faiqa. Intriguing start and look forward to the story to unfold.
Congrats on that first vm. Very aesthetically done.

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Big congrats on becoming a FF writer, Faiqa! 🤗 Yay!!!! 🥳

The teaser is really intense and intriguing!! Everyone wants to know why they have been separated for 3 years. And the mighty ASR is unable to locate his wife. Wonder maybe she is using another name. Khushi must have had a very compelling reason to leave Arnav. Both are in so much pain! 😭

And the trailer is just mangifique!! The music is awesome and it has an epic feel to it!! I love the title of your FF as well!!

Looking forward read more!! Great job!! 👏 👍🏼 ❤️

Giving you an ASR wink!! 😉

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

ArshiH ... Congratulations on a brilliant start of your first FF and VM. Am eagerly looking forward to the story ... Absolutely loved the vm ... 👏 👏 👏 Lovely ethereal quality to the music ... Wish you much success with your new endeavor. Waiting for your next update.