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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Syed695
Amazing Update!!!!

Like dis crazy virat..n like d confession again. .but precap is confusing... he may ask her to leave do dat she doesn't face d anger again...waitin 4 nxt!!!:)

thank u dear
will make all soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
<font color="#33cc66">Nice update.. Virat seriously couldn't keep his hands off her :p.. Manvi is still so naive.. Precap is good.. Now why is he angry again?? Because of that box?? Waiting for the next.. Take care :) </font>

thank u dear...
U will know all this soon...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: panamaa
i loved it
but it was too short
but i know it is because of ur exams nd health
but it is awesome with lot of care nd romance
loved it
awesome di
update soon

thank u so much dear...
Will updated tonight...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: pritivirman
Awesmmm
amznggg
mndblwnggg
suprbbb update Part 121
Loved it..
but it was short...
Loved Virman romantic part...
cont soon...

thank u dear...
I will

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: VIRMANVIAN
thank you for updating di

no need dear
m already late

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Awesome update Part 121
Loved it..
It was short but nice..
Loved Virman romantic part...
Love how they express there feelings and love to eachother...
Nice precap.
Pleasee update soon this time..

thank u dearrr
updating today

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123
AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. I FEEL VERY HAPPY TO READ IT BECOZ U UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME AND IT IS MY FAV. STORY OF URS. UPDATE IS AS USUAL AWESOME AND MINDBLOWING. LOVED VIRMAN SCENES VERY MUCH AND THEIR TRU LOVE 4 EACH OTHER AND THEIR AGAIN AND AGAIN SAYING I LOVE U THE MOST. LOVES VIRAT POSSESSIVENESS VERY MUCH TOWARDS MANVI. YIPPIE I AM THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT IT. LIKES PRECAP VERY MUCH. NOW WHAT HAPPENED TO VIRAT. HE IS UNPREDITABLE. AND NOW BOX MYSTERY SOON BE REVEALED. SO UPDATE SOON .THANKS 4 UPDATING. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

thank u so much dearrr
i will tonight for sure

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART-122
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Virat look at his wrisy which she left nd step back with gluping..what happen to her..?..he frowned with confusion nd anger..how she left her hold on him..
V-firmly--maanvi...??
M--looking everywhere bt not at him..nervously..nd scared too..--h..h..ha..haan...
V-step near her--what haan?..maine pucha woh box kaha hai?
Looking at her with his frowen nd fiirmed look..
M-stammering--b..box..box...kon..konsa?
V-bit angrily--just stop all this...box do..
M--mere..mere pas nahi..nahi hai..
V-cleanching his teeths angirly now--maanviii...ye tumhe bhi pata hai ki ish room me bina meri permission koi servat nahi ata..nd morning me hi maine room check kiya tha...nd tum room me nhi thi...
M--main..main tou...kit..kitchen me ..
V--will u shut all this...
He cut her off..with bit loud shout..which make her jumed with shiver in fear..
Virat can see her fear nd try to hide someting..nd he is damm sure that is hiding that box for some serious reason..
He cought her wrist nd pull her inside room with banging door shut..
V-turned towards her nd try to ask calmly--maanvi...i promise main koi over react nahi karunga..
Hearing this maanvi look at him..her eyes almost gettin wet bcz of fear..fear for him..she is scared for his reaction..
M-innocently--promise??
V-gasped..look away for momment nd melted in it..placed his one hand on his hip with another hand brushed his hair..
Again look at her..
V-come near her..nd cupped her face..nd kissed on her forhead..bote closed their eyes..jointed his forhead with her--i m sorry...
He whispered..
V-continue--tum janti hou mujhse naa bardas nahi hoti..aur mujhse plzz kuch mat chhupau..main tumhe leke ab aur koi risk nahi le sakta..main sab thik kardunga..
She just shook her head slightly in agreed..
After few min..she opened her eyes nd pulled back..placed her palm on her..which make him open his eyes..
M--thik hai..pahele promise karo ki gusse me kuch ulta sidha kam nahi karoge..aur police ko sambhal ne doge..
V--maanvi..police isme kya kar legi?...itne saalon se woh kuch kar nahi pai..khule aam ghum rahe hai woh..
M--jou bhi hou..lekin tum kuch galat nahi karoge..kanoon apne haath me nahi loge...plzzz..dekho..woh bahot bure hai..bahot gande hai..plz..
Tears now sliping out from her eyes...
V--maanvi...tum
M--virat plzzz...main tumhe nahi kho sakti...tumhara har ek step..tumhe aur humari family ke liye khtra badhayega...
V--tou tum kya chahti hou?..main ase hi baitha rahu?..unko humari life se khelne du?
Now he again sounding bit angry...
Maanvi closed her eyes helplessly..she know he is right..he has to protect them..bt..she also aware with his temper..
V--sorry..lekin ye nahi hoga..
With this she open her eyes nd look at him again..
V--ek buri nazar dalne vale ki main jaan le sakta hoon..yaha tou usne tumpe haath uthaya tha..aur mere samne..mere ghar me..meri wife tak pahochne ki koshish...iski saza tou milni hi hai..
He declared..with looking in her eyes..
V-removed his hands from her cheeks..almost commanding--aur tum mujhe ab sab bataogi..
M--lekin virat in sab me
V-cut her off--aur kuch nahi maanvi..kiska kya karna hai woh main dekh lunga..box dou mujhe..
M-look down--box..box..
V--yes box..tumne open kiya use?
Maanvi noded in yes..which made him angery..
V--akele?
Again she just noded..
He tighted his jaw..fisted clutch angrily..
V--box..
He asked for box in one word..he didnt like her this step..he know she love him uncoditional..she caring abt him now..nd also she trusted him..than y..y she wann hide it..that must be something which made her scared..
She know now there is no opetion..she turned to her let side n broght box from her lower sealfe..in cupboard..
Virat saw her walking near him nd again stood in front of him..
With shivering hand she raised her hand towards him to saw him bt..he hurriedly took that box..
V--ye box me woh tumhe..tumhe msg nd gifts bhejta tha?
She just nodded..
V--code sirf use aur tumhe pata hai?
Again just one node..
V--code usi ne set kiya tha?
Again just nod..
V--code?
She gluped...she shivered again..how...
V--maanvi maine pucha code?
M--main...main khol..khol deti hoon..
She try to take box from him..bt he stoped..
V--code dou...
He asked now very firly..
That box is retengular..like small laptop..like sweet box..flat..which has alphabatical screen on it..she closed her eyes nd clutched her dress in her fist..
M-stammering badly..whispering in low voice.very low..--m..m..m
V-maanvi code batao...
He try to ask calmly..
M-opened her eyes nd look at him..nd shooked her head in no..makingg him bit worried..he can see many pains nd fear in it..
V-come close to her..nd hug her--i trust u..plz..mujhe use humari life se bahar fenkna hai..
M-still closing her eyes..tears sliping more from her eyes..hold his shirt near her chest for suppert--M..My..my slave maanvi...
She cried out it..nd clutched his shirt in her fist against his chest nd dug her face in his chest..trying to hide herself..sobbing...
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FOR MY BACHCHA...

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART-123
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slave...
Slave...
Maanvi...????...
His maanvi...
???
If is possible...his teeths must be crushed in minor power..with his rised nd burning anger..
She can feel his body stiffed nd also his anger..starts running in his nerves..his chest raising in anger..as he trying hard to not hurt anything around her...
She hug her more tightly nd wrapp her arms around his neck..
She know she need to be strong..its not new for her..bt for him..
Its strome..strome building up inside him..which can destroy even him also...she lifted herself little up nd hide her face in his neck..
Still he is not reacting..not moving..only his body reacting..he is like mentally killing them..specially that creature..
How...
Bt no...
Its not time to think how...
Its time to saw result... To pay back...
Bcz of them...
Maanvi was away from him 5 years...
Samar get that life...
Maanvi tolrate all this...
Just bcz of them...
He never gve damm right to anyone related to maanvi... No one means no one...
He was all lost when he didnt realise she hugged him more tightly..
After some time..he blinked nd lowered his eyes to side..as her warm nd hot burned tears touched his skin near his neck..nd hide in his shirt's collar..
He closed his eyes nd opened after some time..
He bring his phone out nd msged something..again placed on pocket..
He move his hand towards her head..nd cupped from back calmly..trying his more than best atlest...
Maanvi felt his touch..she opened her eyes nd loosen her grip around his neck..bt didnt pull back..as she scared..to see his anger..to let him go..she know..he is out of mind..he will kill him for sure..nd she didnt want him to see as murderer..no..she didnt want this..so she keep hugging him..
He also know her this actions...
He look around nd again look at her..he bend little down nd scupe her in his arms..walk towards bed..gentally he placed her on bed..nd sit with her..she is sitting near her..his one hand around her waist holding near him..her arms still around his neck nd face hiden in his neck..
He again took his phone nd msged to her cheef cook to send breakfast in room...
In next few mins they r at door with all food..
He already told them to directly entered in room nd without raising their head just place troli near bed nd leave imigeatly in msg...
Nd they did what he orderd..
As they left room..
Virat took plate from troli nd placed in front of him..
He look a side..her body is not shivering as much as before..
She felt his fingers brushing her hairs gently..
She waited him to say somthing..
Bt no..
He just make her gesture to pull back..
She remove her arms from around his neck..bt still her palms resting on his sholder..
She look down not at him with bit scary face..nd also..scared with his next step..
M-gluped...try to say something..bt no words supporting her..---v..vi...v...v...vo..vi...vi...v...vir
nd now before she complete his name atlest he pleased his finger on her lips..
She look at him up with lots of courage..she gluping as her eyes matched his gaze..
She is too surprised..nd more confused..to see his blank face..no expressions..nothing she can find in his face..what he up to do?..no...its must be turning into big devaster...she become panicked bit..she want to ask bt stoped as his free hand gently...wipped her all tears..nd clear her face..placed all tress behind her ears..
She just looking at him...stunned..
After that he pull little close that breakfsat plate near him..he took first marsole of paratha in his hand..
Nd deep in curd bit..
He raised his hand towards her mouth..
She look at food in his hand than him..
Still stunned...
After min..
He shook his head slightly in nooo...nd place food near her lips..
Blink once with assuring nod..
She blinked for few more time...
He again noded slightly..
She parted her lips nd with that he push food in her mouth..nd closed her mouth with raising her chin..
She underatand he want her to chew..nd she did..slowly..slowlty...
Nd in that time..he too take paratha nd placed in his mouth..nd take another for her..
Both just looking at each other..
Bt...
Diffrence is that...
He is blanked..nd unable to read..
While
mannvi is confused nd scared...
He feeded her nd himself too...
In slow speed he made their breakfast finish..
Nd again placed plate in tray..he made her drink juice..as she looking too pale..
After all that..
He made her lay down on bed gently nd cover with duvet protectily...
He gesture her to rest..
Resting in his arms...
On his sholder..
He didnt gve chance to any conversations...
Nd she also can feel to be silant for now...
She too gve up nd sleep in his arms...
He kissed in her hairs on her forheeads sevrales time...
They rested their for long...
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for my bachcha

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago