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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Part---125
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sorry for late... Bit health issue...
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Maanvi look at him with shock..nd also angry..
M-anrily--matlab kya hai tumhara?
G1--i m really sorry mam...aap gate se bahar nahi jaa sakti..
M--aur woh kyu?
G1--m sorry lekin sir ke order hai..aap tou janti hai unka gussa..
M-anrily look around..she realize what he did..10 times more guards nd securites...all r alert..nd loaded with weapons...
M-look at him--aur mummy ji?..unhe tou nahi roka?
Gr--mam...unke saath humare adami hai..
M--okay..tou mere saath bhi aa sakte hai..mujhe imigeatly kahi jana hai..so move..
She again abt to walk near car few guard come nd stood in between her nd car...
She angrily look at them..
M--what??...maine kaha mujhe kahi jana hai...
G2--mam plz samzhiye...sir ne specially aap ke liye mana hai...woh humari jaan le lengey...plz aap jaiye...plz..
M--kuch nahi hoga...main baat karlungi..now move...
She said furiosly...
G1--mam plz...hum viratsir ke order k aage majboor hai...plz...
G2--yes mam...plz...
Maanvi anrily turned her heel towrds house nd strome inside...
M-hell worried..confuse..shocked..tenssed..in mind--kaha hou tum..??...ye kya hai sab??...tum bina bataye..aur ye..ye sab...
Nd with all thoughts..
She again try to contect him..again nd again.. Nd again.. Msges... Call.. Voice msg... Nd all...
After hour..
She passing here nd there..left nd right in hall when she got msg from unknown number..
She is passing here nd there.. playing with her phone...lost in her thoughts nd fights..she jumped with jerk as her phone bipped on msg tone..
She hurriedly look at screen..expecting virat.. Bt no.. It not virat...
She saw some unknown number on her screen..
She got worried..
With shivering hand..
She open msg..
As her eyes fall on text..she fell down on floor with shock..fear..her eyes widen..mobile also fall from her hand..
She hurriedly nd imigeatly pull herself up nd stood up..nd rush towrds kitchen..
She open upper shelf... For that box..
Bt her surprise..nd confirmations...
That box is no more there..
Her eyes widen more.. Nd tears sliping from her eyse...
M-cried--virattt...
She slip down against platform of kitchen..sit on floor..
M--ky...kya...kya karu main?...kya...vi..virat...
She cried...
Her face sawing all fear nd scared for him..
She wipe her tears nd again rush up stairs..nd search for her phone..
She took her phone..nd again try to contact him..again nd again..
Bt no use..
She is getting mad..she aain go down stairs nd try to go out..bt again that guards stop her.. Even now they stood at every door nd windows..
She asked them to just let her know where is he?..he has security nd all... Bt they also hve no informations..
With numb nd helpness..she walk towards stairs..bt her body already gve up..she has no corage..or energy..
She sit on nearest chair..holding phone..in tight fist...
She looking at floor..praying to god..for saving her world..her virat..her love..her life nothing without her..
She again look at phone nd open that msg...
More tears...
** tach tach tach... Again...again mistake... Maine tumhe bulaya tha.. Aur tumne.. Us kamine ko bhej diya?... Koi baat nahi... Ab tou use uske baap ke paas pahocha ke hi tumse milunga...
My slave... Waiting u in my bed... ***
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She didnt know how to protect him.. How to contect him.. What he doing..????
????
Its all her fault..
How can she let her fool..nd leave like this.. She has to undersand him.. She already know abt his temple..
How can he do this ?.. How?...how can he decided all this by himself?...how??...
Her fear..her worried nd tensed feelings..now turning into anger..on him..on that beera..on herself..she angrily took her phone nd msged to virat...
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Agar tum sahi salamat dinner tak nahi aye tou mujhe kya hoga tum soch bhi nahi sakte...yaad rakhna..dinner time...8:30 pm...
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with that she left towards kitchen for prepar dinner..
She starts preparing dinner..
Bt in between she checking her phone every min for his rpl..
Bt no use..
After making all things.. She come out from kitchen handing last cleaning work to servants..
She just come out from kitchen nd abt to walk towards sameer room bt stop nd look at clock..its 7:45...
She bring sameer for dinner nd gve him dinner..just than she hear door bell..she turn imigeatly for him..bt no..its vanshika..she come nd joint them for dinner..
Maanvi gluping nd sweating..bt hide all that from others..
She look at time after platting food for vanshika...
Its 8:28...
She look at vanshika nd sameer..what happening all this..what if virat..vanshikamom..how she..she already lost her half world..nd now..nooo..u..u maanvi..how can u think this?..how?..nd abt virat?...how can u?...she slapped herself mentally for this..
Bt
bt he didnt come..
Nhi aya woh..
M-whispered in low voice--nahi aya...
She gluped in fear..where is he?..god no..plz save him..plzzz..plz save him..she praying with closing her eyes...
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for my bachcha...happy b'day... Make god al ur wish fulfil...

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Part---126
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sorry for late...
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Maanvi gluped..she know now clock will also..ready to increase her fear..she clutched her dress in tight fist in fear..from last few hours..she oushing her fear nd all behind her anger nd stubbon behavior..she didnt know why nd how she behaving after knowing that virat is in danger..she never think how her life saw her past like this..nd her past will haunt her present..her family..that person who is crazy behind her..if he can broke every single bone of that person who can even dare to touch her or look with his dirty eyes..any wrong word..tha..than..how..nd what..??..he ups to do...?...no...what he done?
In single one min..her mind race back all that..she turned her head towards clock slowly..like filmy slow motions..she look at clock..only 30 sec left to reach at 8:30..she felt her heart beart increased..
She abt to broke down when she heared sameer's voice...
Rockstarrr...
Hearing this...she felt her blood froze...
Nd in next moment...she heared one another... Voice...
Vm--virattt... Ye kya hua tumhe?...
Worried nd tensed voice...
She felt vanshika walk towards door hurriedly... Her back still facing towards door...
Her all body muscles become freezed..all her nerves dried...
She ddidnt hear anything after that...
Her mind shut..with all horrible nd fearfull thoughts...she scared to turned..turn to face reality...
To face what is happoing behind her back...
Y sameer scream like this...?
Why vanshika mom rush towards door with worried look...?
Y?...
She didnt want to know...
No... She didnt...
How?
Why?
Whom?...
Y always god do this...?
Why?...
She just want to erase this moment...last few days... From when her past entered in their life...
Nd all...
She abt to fall on ground bt stopped...
She turned back with confusion nd surprisly as she heard sameer's laugh..he laughing...
As she turned..she felt her legs become weak nd gave up..she sit on chir with thund..
He...
He...
He is...
He is safe...
Safe...
He is safe...
Standing...
Standing in front of her...
Looking at her...
He is safe...
She look at him from head to thoe...
He is all messy...
Full of mud...
His shoues..her trouser..his black shirt..
Even his face..nd hair also...
He move his fingers in his hairs...nd look at vanshika mom..
V-firmly..seriosly--mom..main thik hoon..its just aaj baarish thi nd meri car mud me fas gai thi...stop ur kbc...nd u..
He said looking at sameer...
V--stop laughing...
S-controling on his laugh--bt..bt..bt rockstar...aap..aap ye..hahahha...dekho tou..bilkul woh american movie k hero lag rahe haou...hahaha...
Vm--achcha bas...virat tum jao..aur clean hou jao...aur sameer chalo apna dinner finish karo..
S--yeah...fir mujhe rocksta ke saath khelna bhi tou hai..aur apni shopping list bhi deni hai...right rockstar?
Virat noded in it..
Vm--achcha woh le ayega..chalo tum dinner karlo..aur virat plz...go...
V--again noded..
Sameer walk towards his chair nd starts eating..while virat nd vanshika walk towardss table..
Maanvi who sitting on chair..looking all this..virat who walking towards stairs..now his eyes only on her..who now looking down..staring at one place...he just looking at her..bt she is not sawing any reaction..nor action..he reached at top nd turned towards his room..
Just than vanshikamom said..
Vm--maanvi ek kam karo jake virat ke kapde nikal do..main yaha dekh lungi...fir use dinner karva dena..
Maanvi turned nd look at her..nd noded slightly..
S--yes...tab tak main apni list bana lunga...i m done with dinner..di..aunty main room main jaa raha hoon..rockstar ko achche se khila dena okay...
He said innocvently nd walk towards his room..
Maanvi stood from chair nd walk towards stairs with slow steps..
Vanshika sensed something wrong in her from past few hours..bt she know its between them..thats y she send her behind him..she too finished her dinner nd send back to her room..ordering all servants to clean all things nd go from there...
On otherside..
In bathroom standing under water..both hands leaning against wall..his eyes were closed..floor is all over muddy nd gray..
Maanvi walk inside room nd ound him in bathroom..
She walk towards wardrobe nd bring his towel..nd night t-shirt with pent..placed om bad..she is working like robotic..no expressions..nothing..no reactions..she last time look at door before leaving the room..
After hour..
Virat walking down from stairs looking for her..
He already missed her in room.she was not there..he look around nd turned towards dinning area..she walk near table..
Where he find her in kitchen..warming food..
He again looking at her like..he trying to read her..to see any reaction..quesion..out brust..atlest anger?...bt nothing he could manage to find..he abt to walk towards her in kitchen bt stoped as she walk out from kitchen with tray in her hand..
She placed tray on table nd placed plate against his chair..without looking at him..
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for my bachcha... Lov u jaana... Stay happy nd healthy...

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Awesome update part 123...
Loved it...
Love how Virat was controlling his anger...
Its really nice to see that Manvi tries to make Virat relax...
And the best thing is that Virman understand eachother without words...
Awww the part where Virat give Manvi to eat was really sweet...
But what will Virat do now???
He will not sit silently...
I really miss the little Rockstar Sameer...
Update soon..

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Part---127
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Virat cleared his throat with looking at her..with worried nd questioning eyes...
He was waiting from last 5 min for her one single reaction..for his one look...for her eye contact..bt no..she is not in mood to gve him damm one expression..wich made him furious nd irritate..
He saw her placeing food for him on table..nd guesturing to sit by pushing chair bit back..
He look at her face nd than chair..with claming his anger nd fustrations..he walk near his chair nd sit with pulling chair near table with attitute..
As he take place..maanvi push plate near him getly..nd starts pouring water in glass for him..without making any eyes contact..
He looking at her countinuesly..
He gluped nd take breath to not loose his temper..bcz some how he know its his fault..he should recieve her call once..he sould hear what she want to say..bbt...
Now this is not time for all this..
He look at her..nd raised his hand to touch her nd start convo...
V--maanvi tum...
Bt stopped as she turned nd walk towards vanshikamom's room..making him damm confuse..he push plate away slightly with anger..nd leaning back on ccchair with move his finger in his hair..
He look away angrily nd after some time abt to stoop up from chair nd walk bt stopped as he saw maanvi and vanshika mom come out from room nd walk towards him..
Vm-as they walk near him--arey virat...ye kya?..mujh laga tum aur maanvi kal honeymoon jane se pahele kuch waqt saath bitana chahte hou..
As his mom said all this virat look at both maanvi nd vanshika one by one with more confusions..
Vm-continu--agar mere saath khaana khana tha tou time se aa jate..humm?..chalo koi baat nahi...main khiladeti hoon..aaj tou woh bhi apne haath se...
Nd smile broadly...
V-shock--what th??...mom...aap...
Vm--sarmao mat chalo...ab..chalo..
Nd again make him sit..
Virat look at maanvi with cute angerly look now..here he wwant to talk..ndshe?..she made him eat like this?..oh...grewat...
He glare at maanvi who walk towards kitchen nd bring some etra food nd placed on table..while other side vanshika starts her job..
Maanvi already told vanshika that she will done with sameer in that time..nd after that she will peck their bag...so she walk towards stairs..
Virates eyes never left for sec to her..to find one single expression on her face..
On glase..bt no use...
He saw her walk towards sameer's room...
After 15 min..
V--mom..bas...mera hou gaya...plzzz..
He said with making face...
Vm-smirked--i know..
V-frowned--kya?
Vm--ki aaj achanak mera beta sudhar nahi sakta..
V--mommm...
Vm--tujhe kya lagta hai?..main nahi dekh rahi teri aur maanvi ki ye difffrent behaviors..
Virat look down..bit guilty nd numb..
Vm-made him look at him--dekho virat...maine maanvi ko accept karte waqt usse kaha tha ki use ye sabit karna hoga ki woh sach me tere layak hai..aur usne ye kar dikhaya hai..
Virat smile slightly..
V--she is best mom...
Vm-shook her head in yes--yeah...mere bete ko sidha sirf wohi kar sakti hai..
V--mommm...plzzz...
Vm--achcha..main baat ye hai ki..main janti hoon ki aaj achcnak tera mann nahi kiya hai main tumjhe khilau..lekin kya karu..ye moka jane nahi dena chati thi..bahot saalon baad maanvi ne mujhe mere woh khubsurat pal loutaye hai..
She had tears in her eyes..
V--i m sorry mom..
Vm--yes...sorry...lekin mujhse nahi...maanvi se...jao...manalo use..
V-just noded..
Vm-stood up from chair nd brush his hairs--good..
Nd turned to leave bt stop nd turned..
Vm--aur haa..
V-look at her..
Vm--maanvi ne kuch khaaya nahi hai..lunch bhi thik se nahi kiya tha..use khila dena...
Without waiting for any rpl she walk back in room..
Virat look up towards sameer's room angrily nd try to clam himself..he also dont know..he is angry with himself for sure bt now her nd all..usss...anger...
On otherside..
Maanvi spend some time with sameer nd made him sleep nd told him to talk to virat in morning..
She left room after placing kiss on sameer's forhead nd protecting him with duvet..
She walk towards her room nd made bed clean nd all..
She walk towards wardrobe..nd bring bags..
She placed bags on table near sofa..nd starts bringing their clothes nd imp stuff..
She starts packing..
Almost packing is done..
She check once wardrobe to make sure..
Just than she hear door unlocked..nd someone entered in room..she didnt react nor gve any expression nor ear..she close all clossest nd walk towards sofa with some stuff..
Virat who just entered in room with food..saw her walk out from clossest area to table..he walk near her..where he placing stuff in bag..
He place food on table nd look at her..whol done with her pecking nd closing chains..
V--khaana...woh
bt before he continue she turned nd placed bags in corner of room..
He gluped his all reactions nd try to make her talk first..
He walk near her for talk bt again she ignore nd took her night dress from side couch..
She abt to walk towards wasroom for change bt stooped.
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for u my jaana... Happy always...

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Part---128
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Thats it..
Virat cannt bear a bit her ignorance nd here she behaving like he is not in room..nor his present effecting her..
He didnt want her to change bcz of all this carp nd wann be happy thats y he doing all this nd she..how dare she..
Maanvi just open washroom door nd step inside bt turned back with jump as she heard his slammed door back with door..
She look at him..who glaring at her with firing gaze..which increase more to see her still blank expressions..he want to hear something from her..to react from her..how much she making him worried nd restless she had no idea..
She saw his fists clenched as if he ready to punch something..she is burning in pain..nd she also not know how to react..what to say..
Both waited for sometime..to hear something from other one..bt no one say a word..
He know she will never gve up..nd he also know that he cannt control more..she is his breath to live nd she behaving that way..its like both talking though eyes..
Maanvi didnt want to talk not she is in condition to react..
She turned nd starts walking inside wasroom..
He become more angry..
She placed her cloths on hanger nd starts washing her face..ignoring him totally..
He know somewhere he was wrong..bt..this..this is not done..not done maannvi..his inner anger screammed..
On other side..maanvi woh splashing water on her face..to decrease her exhaustions..she really feeling tired..she never want life this..she always dream abt simple nd happy life..here her past present nd future all messed up..nd whom she loved most treating her like this..
She know if she face him more she can never control on herself..
She opened her eyes nd try to take her night dress bt by mistake dress fell on floor nd get wet..
She took towel nd without looking at him walk out from washroom..
She walk towards closset with wipeing her face..she stood in front of one clossest..before opening it she closed her eyes for moment nd gluped..she feeling weakness..physically nd mentally both..
She take breath nd abt to open her eyes bt in next moment she didnt know what suddent happened..bt she found herself turned with jerk nd slammed her body with closset door..
Her eyes flew open nd found him against her..pressing her body against clossets..he is not drunk bt yet he is definetly not in full senses..
Virat removed her dupatta from her neck nd started kissing her all over her naked skin..
She gasped..his lips burned her cold skin..maanvilooked at him with her half open eyes..to find him kising her with full of passion..she should stop her..bt she couldnt..her hands were lifeless..like unable to move..
Virat trailed his lips from her jaw to her neck..till her cleavage..
She is only feeling buring sensation..virat move down his hands to hold her waist from both sides while licking her skin..with sending strange sensation down her body..
She again try to move her hands..bt nothing was working..
Nd in next moment..she felt him pressing her more..nd whispering near her ear..first words in whole day..to her..
V-possasivly..anger mixed with aggresive--u r mine...never forget that...dare to ignore me...
Nd with that he bite her skin hardly making her scream..
M--aahhh...virattt...
Tears slip from her eyes...she didnt cry bcz of pain..bcz she know this is not real pain she feeling..she is feeling hurt bcz of his act which he doing from morning..
Still her body is not reacting..
He pull himself bit back..nd look at her..
V-with resting his head on her..husky..angry..possasive..possasive..restles..immparient..holding her firlmy by waist more close to him--kabhi mat karna asa..never..
She guped her tears..with closing eyes..
V-almost demanding--ankhey kholo apni..
She shook her head in no..clutching her fist on ur dress..
V-tighted his jaw..nd clenching his teeth on her reaction..
Nd in next moment he left her nd drove away from her..
She opened her eyes with jerk as she hear sound of slaming vash on floor by him..
She only looking at floor..
V-throw neared vash on floor angrily--whattt...
He screamed...
V-look at her who looking at floor not at him..still..turned towards her--what huu?..what u want me to do?..tell..what?
He said with pulling her near to him..
V-roared angrily--to leave that b*** ??... To ignore his f*** act..??..tel...
He shouted...
Making her shivered..
She gluped.. Nd move her eyes towards table where he placed food for her..
She walk towards couch nd sit in front of table..virat's eyes followed her..with confusion..he frowned as he saw her eating her foor silently..her eyes buried on plate..no expressions..again..
He abt to walk towards her angrily bt stopped nd his anger replaced in softness nd worry..
She suddenly starts coughing..
He rush near her..nd rubbed her back..
V-hell worried--maanvi...maanvi relax...
He get panic to see her coughing baldy..
V-take water from table nd try to make her drink--maanvi..paani..maanvi..
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for my bachcha... Very very very happyyy b'day...

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pritivirman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

awsmm part 123
amznggg updt
likd it so much
wtng for nxt

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

part 123 is nice now what he will do
and what thing having box update soon

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sandhYA_123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. PART 123 IS TOO GUD. LIKES HOW MANVI LOVE CHANGES VIRAT ANGRY BEHAVIOUR. NO DOUBT HE IS ANGRY BUT HE CONTROLS NOW IN FRONT OF MANVI SO THAT SHE CANT HURT. SURELY HE WILL GIVE A SEVERE PUNISHMENT TO THAT CULPRIT WHICH SHOWS FROM HIS ACTIONS THAT HE TYPED SOME MSG. BUT LIKES HOW MUCH HE CARES MANVI. TO FEED FOOD TO MANVI IS GOOD SCENE. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

wow another amazing update

virat improved a lot for manvi

impressive...

but wat he will do now...

update soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Superb updates.. Virat's emotions are very well portrayed.. Though Manvi tried to calm his anger but his silence is quite scary.. He is planning something big for sure.. Liked how he took care of her even when he was furious.. Manvi changed him a lot.. Nice to see the understanding between them.. But where did he go now?? And he made sure that Manvi couldn't go anywhere.. But why?? And that box is still a mystery.. Eagerly waiting to read more.. Loving it.. Take care :)