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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. LIKED IT SO MUCH. LOVED HOW VIRAT CONTROLS HER ANGER WHILE TALKING TO MANVI ABOUT BOX. MANVI ALSO TRULY LOVES VIRAT THAT SHE WANTS THE WHOLE THING IS TO BE HANDLED BY POLICE AND HER VIRAT IS SAFE OUT OF THESE THINGS.LOVES VIRMAN CONVO VERY MUCH. END WAS MIND BLOWING. CODE OF BOX IS SO HURTFUL FOR VIRAT. FEEL REALLY BAD 4 MANVI . NOW WANTS TO KNOW WHAT WILL VIRAT DO NOW AFTER KNOWING THE CODE. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Superb update!!!!

Dark past of maanvi unvielin...hope dis doesn't affect deir relationship d worse way...!!!

Waitin for next!

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Awesome update
Aww poor manvi
Loved it
Update d nxt part soon

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bubbles666

@bubbles666

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

oh no
now what virat is going to do to him
im sure virat will defo kill him.
maanvi's situation is so pathetic
he is saying maanvi as his slave
update soon di
pleeease

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

part 121 and 122 is nice both are love
each other what in that box update soon

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

diii as always u are awesome nd loved each and every lines of there convo

but really sad for manvi

how dare he put such cheap code in that box

but i know virat will clear every thing fast

nd these angry young man should control his anger infront of manvi

ootherwise she wil get heart attack soon

missing samar beta

update soon😊

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pritivirman

@pritivirman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

awsmmm
amznggh updt...
poor manvi...
cont soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Superb.. Loved how you built up the suspense.. Abhi next update jaldi kardo please.. I'm so eager to know why was Manvi reluctant to show him the box?? Aisa kya hai usme.. Awesome update.. Waiting for the next.. Take care :))

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

di... nice update

i loved it

but wat is that code

oh. i hate that man

love these virrman

update soon

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Part-124
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she struggling bit more after stugggling 5 min..to get that same warm..that protective arms around her..her palms tighted her fist..to hold him..bt again her dispointment..she can only felt that soft metterss..she didnt find his hard bt gental muscles..his warm yet stiffen skin..
Her eyebrows frowned..
In next moment she opened her eyes with jerk..nd pull herself up in sitting possion..panically she look her right side for him..what she is missing..it turned into truth..she somehow know this..
Where is he?
Panickly...she look every where in room..he is not in room..she checked bathroom..balcony..everywhere..
She hurriedly turned towards watch..its already 4 pm...she get worries...how can she sleep this long..nd why no one come here to wake her up..?????...
With all this... She hurriedly rush out from room...looking for him..
She hurriedly come down from stairs...she roamed her eyes everywhere..
While she found..vanshika nd sameer on dinning table..
She hurridly walk towards them...
As she walk near them..
Sameer's eyes fall on her..
He excitly stood up from chair nd rush towards his di...
S-rush near her nd hug her tighhtly from waist--Diii...
Maanvi taken back with it..bt hug him back..nd moved her fingers in his hairs..
S-raised his head with breaking hug---aap thik hou??
He ask bit worriedly...
M--haa ...haa..main thik hoon kyu?
S---ufff...rockstar bhi naa..dara diya mujhe...pata hai humne naa aaj ka football match jeet liya...main wahi batana chahta tha sab ko..lekin rockstar ne kaha aap ki health thik nahi..isliye rest kar rahi hou..
M-ohhh..
She realise... That he is up to do something...
She look at vaanshika...
M-try to ask normally--mummy ji...virat kaha hai?
Vanshika also walk near her.
V-smile--dont worry...woh abhi abhi studio gaya hai...koi importand call aya tha use..
M--call?
V--haa aur usne kaha hai kuch recordings hai so use ane me der hou jayegi...tum khaana khaalo..aur haa...kaha hai apna aur uska bag pack kar lena...
M-confused--bag pack??..par kyu?
V-smile nd abt to say something bt stop..as sameer come to explain situation...
S-dragg her towards hall nd made her sit on couch--arey diii... Main bachcha hu ya aap?
M-look at him questionly nd than vanshika...who walk near her...
V--yes sameer..lagta hai aap ki maanvi di...bachchi hi hai...
Hearing this sameer giggled..
M--mummy ji ye...
V--relax maanvi..main tumhe aur virat ko ghar se nahi nikal rahi...actually virat tumhe honeymoon pe le jaa raha hai...
She said with bit teasing tone..
M-shocked..surprise..hell confuse now--honeymoon...??
She almost scream nd stood up...
Making both sameer nd vanshikamom surprised..
S-teasingly--diii...ase kyu chila rahe hou??..honeymoon pe jana hai...bhoot vali movie nahi...
Nd laughed...
Vanshika also shook her head with smile...
V--maanvi... Dont worry... I m sure... Woh kuch time tumhare saath spend karna chahta hai... Abhi mujhe bahar jana hai.. Tum apna lunch karlo...aur raat tak packing kar lena...warna u know naa virat...??
She again said in teasing tone..
S-supporting her--yes yes di...u know naa him... Woh aap ko bina bags ke hi le jayenge...
Nd winked at her..
M--sameer???
S--ups...ok ok sorry... Pata hai main aap douno ko bahot miss karunga...
Nd he hug her...
S--lekin main happy bhi bahot hoon... Aap achche se enjoy karna...
V--haa maanvi.. Aur sameer ki fikar mat karna.. Use main achche se sambhal lungi.. Aur arti bhi tou yaha aa rahi hai mujhse milne...
M--maanvi just nodded..
S--chalo di main mujhe naa home work karna hai..aap khaana khaalo fir main aap ke saath thoda time spend karunga okay?
M--okay..
Nd with that he left happily..
V--haa plzz khaana khaa lena..varna virat ke gusse ko sambhalna mushkil hou jayega...okay..?
M--ji...
V--good...main evening tak aa jaungi... Rest karlo..thik hai...
M--ji...
Nd with that vanshika left for her meeting with inder vadhera related some buieness issue...
Maanvi who still in shocked..hurriedly went back to her room nd starts calling virat..bt again making her more worried..his phone is sawing bussy continuesly...
She tried more than hour to contact him..bt all fail..
Finally..she got rpl from him..
** maanvi do eat nd rest...will meet in evening...dont worry abt anything...lov u...take care**
she again try to call bt no use...
She msged him..bt after waiting more hour..she didnt got ay rpl..
Now her confusion..questions..making her more worried and scared..
She decided to visit his music company..
She took her mobile nd purse...
Without waiting for anything she ordered servants to take care of sameer nd hurriedly rush towards door..
She abt to go near car bt her gurds stop her...
Gurd1--sorry mam..aap car nahi le ja sakti..
Maanvi look at him with shock...

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for my bachcha...
Happy b'day jaana...

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago