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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kateyes
Congo 4 d new thread n update was nice⭐️

aww thank u...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Superb update!! Manvi is so nave.. She fails to understand his next move everytime.. Can't blame her though, Virat is very temperamental.. Liked the fact that he noticed she didn't change her bandage.. Jo bhi ho he cares a lot about her.. Precap sounds good.. Finally box ka raaz reveal hone wala hai.. Eagerly waiting for it.. Take care :))

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thank u meera...
Will reveal soon

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: seelisakuraa
 Loved's Virat's teasing section@his care.. Awesome update.. Continue soon  😛

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Awesome update...
Loved the part 120..
Poor Manvi she cannot stop het crazy husband...
Awww Virat change her bandage...
Virat is sooo sweet...
Love the last part...
Where Virat was saying about 2 punishment...
And Manvi got shy because she told him that he already give her one...
Interesting precap...
Update soon...
And how is your healt now??

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thank u o much dear for this comment...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123
AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI. LIKED IT VERY MUCH DEAR. ONCE AGAIN CONGRATS FOR 4 UR 5TH THREAD. UPDATE AS USUAL IS MINDBLOWING. LIKE VIRAT CARE AND HIS POSSESIVE NATURE 4 MANVI VERY MUCH. MANVI IS SO INNOCENT WHO DOES NOT NOT KNOW WHAT COMES NEXT IN HER HUSBAND MIND. BUT SHE ALSO TRULY LOVES VIRAT AND ACCEPT HIM FROM HEART. PRECAP SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING I THINK BOX MYSTERY WILL REVEAL IN NEXT PART AND I AM WAITING TO REVEAL IT.SO INSPITE OF U NOT FEELING GUD U UPDATED. THANKS 4 THAT. BUT PLZ TAKE CARE OF UR HEALTH.😊😊😊

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thank u dear...
Will updated soon
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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART-121
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Virat stood up from bed nd walk towards wasroom for clean his hands..
As maanvi saw him go inside wasroom she hurriedly took her dupatta nd wrap around her neck..nd long breath..with badly blushing..how can she say anything like that..?..nd in front of virat..uff..who always ready to saw his possasive nd passionate love..bold love..its not easy to send him for his recordings nd all..after their maariage..he cannt take his hands off from her..all knows he was not in favor of following any rules or outer world..he is man of his own world nd word..nd no one..means one one can go against that..nor maanvi want to go against his will..nd she always know that he never force her..not even in his anger..he cares as much as much he loves her..maanvi touched with his feelings nd love..
She was smiling nd lost in her world with standing in front of mirror..when virat come out from wasroom nd saw her tanding in front of mirror..taking slow steps towrads her he stopped behind her..as he stood just inch away from her..she felt his presence near her..she come in reality with sudden jurk..virat saw her through mirror..he bent his head little down with smiling..
Maanvi abt to turned bt stoped as he hold her from behind nd hold her hands in his hands near her belly..she gasped nd close her eyes as he place wet pasionate kiss on her earlobe..
She gluped..
V-pasionately..protectivly..nuzzing his face in her neck--agli bar se apni health ko le ke koi careless behavior nahi..samzhi?
Maanvi didnt responce as she is still in his effect..
Virat raised his eyebrowes as he didnt got his answer..
V-smirked..nd bit her skin slightl..making her lit hissed in his sweet torture..
M-ahh..shh...virattt...
V--samzhi??
M-haann..
Noded...
Virat pull little back nd make her turned towards him..
V-pull her close by holding her hip with his one hand..nd with one hand he cupped her head..fingers in hair..nd thumb carssing her cheek to lips..he smirked as he saw her parted her lips with his next anticipating move..he is such moster..for her everytime..hard to resist him..nd his crazy love..
M--v..vi..viratt...
V--hmmm...with jointing his head with her...
M--woh...woh...niche..niche breakfast...
V--shhh...tumhe achcha lagega main ye sab niche karunga tou...?..if yes...than come..
He abt to move back bt she stop him..
M--kya...nahhhiii..
She imigeatly open her eyes nd pull him back..close to him..
M--pagal hou kya?..waha mom hai..
She said innocently..
V-smirked nd pull her close to him..crushing her delicate body with his hard chest..noughtily..learning close to her lips--touuu...kya maine ye kaha ki main mom ke samne...
Bite his lip nd raised his one eyebrow...
M-open her mouth in o shaped..nd immigeatly look away--chiii...gande hou tum...pagal...
V--hahahha...laughed...
M-look at him with cute angry glare...
V-stop laughing..nd pull her in more tight hug--haa hoon..besharm..lekin sirf tumhare liye..aur tum..sirf mere liye..sirf mere..
He said in dark passionate voice..
M-smile at him..
He learned close to her face nd placed light kiss on her lips..she closed her eyes for moment..
She open her eyes nd see only her crazy virat..who always like surprised for her..
M-smile--yes..sirf tumhari..hai aur rahegi..maanvi virat ki thi hai aur akhri saans tak rahegi tou sirf apne virat ki..
V-smile widly..all this..what he want..only his maanvi..in his arms..who fully accept him as he is.his love..nd finally he getting what he want..without any fear..any presser..she confessiong this..
V-with full of passionate nd love--i love u...love u only...
M--cupped his face nd smile..assurng--i know..nd i can only love u virat..only u..i love u..
Nd she kissed on his cheek..without looking at him hug him tightly..
As she hug him with wrapping her hands around his neck..he too hug her back..nd pull her little up..
V-smile..nd place kiss on her neck..nd again hug her tightly..
Both just lost in each other..
With closing their eyes..
After some time..there beutiful moment broke bcz of virats phone ring..they opened there eyes with virat goaned with it..nd maanvi giggled..
Virat saw its msg on his phone with bit irritated face..which become serious bit..while maanvi step back..nd rolled her eyes with bit blush..when her eyes fall on clock..
M--shit...itna waqt hou gaya..
M-look at virat nd hold his arm--virat...chalo tumhe tumhe late hou raha hoga..chalo niche breakfast karlo..come..
V--maanvi woh
M-cut him off..nicly..with love--yeh woh kuch nahi..plz...chalo breakfast karlo..come..
She turned nd make him walk with him..she abt to walk out from door bt stopped as he stop walking..she turned nd look at him with confusion..
M--kya hua virat?..plz..chalo..mom kya sochengi..plz come..
She abt to turned bt stoped with his words
V-seriously--maanvi woh box kaha hai?
He asked imigeatly as she finish nd abt to move..
M-gluped..leave his hand..which make him more serious..he look at his left hand nd than her..
V--maanvi?
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sorry for late

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

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PRECAP
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M--almost pleaded--virattt...plzzz...dont...
V--angry bt still said camly--jao yaha se...
M--bt virat...
V--jao yaha se...
He now shouted loudly making her juped in fear..
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sorry for late

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago