Arshi Story : Once Upon A Time..... chapter 3 up, PG 19, 16th June - Page 7

phew good to know it was in 1960s
and she isnt that young
well yes she is young
but at least now she is 14
wait she must have been just a kid when she got married
if he was 14 she was just ten
i know hard to digest for us right
but it used to happen
and for all we know still happens right
hmmm am glad he is trying to get to know her
and also said not to be afraid of her
that is cute
hope they will be okay together
ahhh its not easy for her to behave as he wants her to behave
when her mother has been teaching her something else
but loved their little interaction
he was sweet for sure
and that meant she wasnt afraid of him anymore
cheers for pm
look forward to this

the update was sweet...loved their convo on the terrace...

Awsommmiiieee itz so cute story...hehehe Arnav got all akward with his hovering in-laws lolz & said he won't cum back easily 2 save himslf..but we all knw whn he wud get chnc 2 cum n meet his Khoo-koo he won't let it go either no mattr how akward hovering in-laws r...Arnav Khushi 1st convo was so cute...da innocnt thing he said dat she can b hrslf around him made hr so happy, so sweet...i wndr wht she wanna give him? Btw now since he met hr & quite easily captured his heart...dey myt write lettrs 2 each odr, mayb not vry frequnt 1c but once in while...cud b cute 2 c...nxt chp sooon!!! Itz vry refeshing concpt sply da sweet-innocnt luv...

I just loving this story it reminds me of a old hind flick just like balika badhu. waitng to see if it is a flashback or a story in the present

Ahaa..Lovely update..

wow pooja... whr were u all this while...

how innocent! and arnav looks like a different species. wonderful update

Originally posted by: tanu3579

wow pooja... whr were u all this while...

it seems like u hv been writing professionally fr years... to me atleast..

loved every bit of it..

u knw i read hte first para 3 times... to see if its pooja or someone else the writer :) ... ( as if reading it wud hv told me tht 😉) .. bt the pt is... tht it was soo soo professionally n beautifully done.. tht i hd to read it as many times ... cudnt move ahead..

the entire set up... it draws a image infornt ...

the flow of the story... too too too gd...

the characters... r very cute i wud say... i mean arnav is nt being the typical male of those times... he is trying to b understanding n accomodating ...

khushi is being herself...

i love it whn she asks him if he means tht she shud b with him, like she is with her frnds...

i personally believe tht all relationships shud b based on frndship, more than anythg else... coz tht is wht can bring in the required honesty in it..

so tht line... was the star of the entire update fr me :)

btw.. chota tha... 😆

Originally posted by: sphobic

@ bold...thats where the story revolves, di (Am I revealing a bit much😆) As you can read...he had lost a battle, and had married because he was just 14 then, but now as a grown up...you will see him fighting for him as well as for Khushi...He is an educated male of those times, seen the world were men and women are somewhat treated equally...atleast compared to the society he leaves in...so his mindset is little different from the males he notices around him...as you have read in the para where he asks Khushi about her nervousness...

and yes I know chota tha...and surprisingly you are the first one to complain 😆

oh n the part abt sleeping under the stars... reminds me of my vacations at my nani/dadi 's place...

Originally posted by: tanu3579

everyone is being considerate... :) while i dont believe in tht... as far as a story is concerned 😆

i want to read more.. i didnt want it to stop there... i was curious to knw wht is she going to gift him.. considering they didnt really seem to knw abt his visit... so she definitely didnt hv time to mk or buy sthg fr him..