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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm loving the concept :)
I can't wait to read more
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Upi di u r fabulous
just amazing
thankfully i came across this drabble series and it was worth reading
starting lines they just took my heart away
they way u potrayed kria's fear
reys character i loved it
i loved the way story is progressing
the flashback was beautiful
do pm me when u update

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Awesome updates...really loved it...it is very intresting...waiting for next update...continue soon...pm me whenever you update...
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lykd all the updtes
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lykd all the updtes
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[A/N: First of all, I am extremely sorry for being late. Actually thing is I get distracted easily. So this time reason was JDJ and KR Romance 😆😳
So lemme come back to topic. Yeah! Another chapter to add up the suspence. You gonna HATE me after this. But I assure something Hot is coming up very soon 😛 😆
PS- Flashbacks used in last chapter (read Ch 4) were just to point out the similarity, Many of you must have felt so, no?
PPS- Yes, Rey is playing double game. I am telling this just to assure you guys that he is a perv. So partyy! 😆 ]



Chapter 5


Her body shivered under the cold water pouring all over her. Maybe something needed to be sorted, perhaps Rey knew much more, it was evident from his eyes..His deep-dark eyes. This simply cannot be a business matter. And it was obvious to doubt him. In fact this whole situation was questionable.


With cold water droplets caressing her burning mind, she was trying to link all the happenings which lead her here. -- Sudden announcement of her wedding. Shivam's odd behavior during pre-wedding days, He was being too good to her which he was never. In fact Shivam never give a shit to anything if its not profiting his money. And yes...Kria was not providing him any of such kind, But has the property papers on her name. And if Shivam was after it, he must be knowing about it too. That property was useless, with unfruitful land, away from the city, no industrial benefits, nothing. Then why was Shivam after it? That too all of a sudden? He is a smart person. And so seems to be Rey. There have to be something which she don't know. And for that she have to keep a check on Rey.


She turned off the shower, stepping out hugged in her bath robe. She silently pulled out her bag and slipped into her cream colored simple dress, which perfectly suited her honey-kissed skin. And while zipping her bag, her attention was caught by that piece of paper. Those hints...Or maybe a game played by someone in which she was mere a prey.
She opened it, again. The same feeling of horror overpowering her mind.

" Your Dad loved you so much. Perhaps he paid a big price of his kind nature. And the one who asked him to pay the price is someone you know.
-Your Well-Wisher"


She quickly closed the paper, wiping her forehead, inhaling more and more air. This was one of those notes which she was getting from past one month, and this one knocked her world down just a day before her wedding, strengthening her belief to find her Dad's murderer, giving her a final push to escape from her own wedding . Is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? Perhaps not. All these situations are linked with each other, and badly needed to be sorted out. And the process started from Rey.


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She crept to the door of his room, put her ear to the wood and listened hard. He was not there, not anywhere in whole house, providing a perfect time for her investigation. She raced inside his room before she lost her nerve. She shut the door behind quickly, her heart hammering in her chest. She took a brief look at his room, It was clean, perfectly lit. She took slow steps towards his study area which was attached to his bedroom, Strange it was, for the first time she was seeing a study room and bedroom Merged! And the place was filled with books- So many books. So this Guy loves to read books? Sounds Interesting yeah! But this wasn't the time to check out his collection. She got to find something which strengthens her doubt on him.
She turned around, distancing her eyes from the book collection to his table which was filled with documents, pens, charts, stamps, paper weights, books etc. Nothing doubtful. She walked ahead to the end of the room from where the light was entering, the light of setting sun, orange-red, bathing whole room with a different sensation, Of disappointment.


She let out a deep breath, turning around and checking out the documents kept on his table.


The scrape of a chair against planked floor resounded from somewhere in the house and halted her. Dear God someone was here. Coming this way. She glanced up and then down. She couldn't make it back to her guest room. The only place she could hide was...Rey's bathroom. She quickly piled up the documents and in the process a small paper slipped out from one of the files. She bend down to pick it up and was placing it back in file, but something caught her attention. Something familiar. It was the picture of her dad.

Her world stopped then and there. She didn't knew what to do or how to react. The voice of doors opening resounded again, alerting her about someone's presence in the home. This is not good. This is so not good.


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[A/N Continues- I'll update jaldi, I shappath! 😳 😆 And say thanks to Snigs who pushed me for writing this drabble or else I would have been basking in sun with my laziness. 😎 😆]
Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
res😆
Unres.

This is Unfair n Cheating

You ended it on a mystery note again😆

I Hate You for this..😆

But 🤗 for keeping the suspense element.

Kriya trying to make a sense from all the happenings was really good.

And she checking out Rey's room in his absence..

That pic of her dad :O

She will be caught by Rey or he might have known she would check before itself😆

Update soon! :(

I am happy and not happy at the same time!😆😆
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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res,kar sakti hu na..😛

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unres..

Omg...this was wow...

too mysterious...

Kriya ke mind mein doubts...

then checking his room...

aur dekho wo aa gaya😆
Rey aa gayaaa :P

Awesome update
Loved it

nxt part jaldi de ...

kab degi ...mujhse wait nahi ho raha

Edited by khusbooluvarsha - 11 years ago
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Unres'd.

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