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Chapter 12.

I looked at her and quickly diverted my gaze seeing her looking at me. Why was she doing that? And on the top she was smiling all the time. This situation was becoming uncomfortable. I shifted in my seat and heard her chuckle.
"What is so funny?" I spoke rudely, Infact was trying to hide the irritation.
" Nothing. Why do you have stern face all the time?" She stated and asked, holding back her laughter. And I noticed that. It was irritating. For god's sake, I am not here for a vacation. I have to focus. Neither she was funny nor I wished to laugh.
" No. There is nothing like that." I replied curtly, shifting my attention back to driving.



" You need to let it go" She muttered under her breath, looking at him. And her heart stopped beating when he looked at her immediately as if he heard what she said.
"You know I love Rains" She chided, expecting him to join in the conversation. But he was not responding to anything.
" I like Rains because you can let all your emotions flow...That refreshing delicate scent of wet soil..."She continued and was by now annoyed to core on seeing him pay no attention to her. And this was it. She hated being ignored. This journey was hell boring, plus she was with him, who couldn't even talk straight to her, forget about smiling and gossiping.
"Stop the Car" She announced, placing hand on the steering. And he looked at her. Astounded. She gave him a sharp look and stepped out of the car. And he was left aghast.


I saw her step out of the car. Not that I didn't wanted that but it wasn't safe for us to step out until we leave the city safely. I opened my mouth, all prepared to shout at her but then I stopped. I stopped after watched her play with rain. Twirling, giggling, jumping merrily. Not that she was looking beautiful, Yes she was. But those were the things which I missed doing. I knew I'll be losing myself in this game...Perhaps I lost myself long back. And now there was left a lifeless body of mine...with emotions which never had any value in front of the evil plays of fate, and was being played every now and then in the hands of destiny, running after life and for life every time. Reyansh inside me died on that very spot when I was lying unconscious in that ominous room, accused for the crime I never did. I gasped, overcoming from those ugly thoughts and looked at her. I turned off the engine and lowered the window glass. It seemed like Reyansh was calling me, pleading me to hold him back. And after almost 10 years I felt like going and hugging my old self, who have seen the most horrendous past, had spent the painful nights in jail, cried after the torturous assaults of drunk policemen. A tear drop rolled down my cheek, surprising me, bringing me back to the harsh reality. I opened the door of car and walked towards her.
I wanted to shout and scream at her but I was helpless, She was like Reyansh who loved to love everything. And this time I simply couldn't stop her. I liked control. I needed the control coz I know what'll happen when I lose it.



I stopped her by pulling her towards me, grabbing her petite waist. She looked at me with her big eyes, filled with curiosity rather than shock or fear and it made me even more restless. I am a bad person and you should be afraid of me, I have no heart Kria. Why are you not scared of me? I wanted to say but my lips were glued. She was making me lose every pinch of control and command I have on my emotions. I could feel her heart beat fast and faster with every second. Her beautiful eyes gazing intently into mines. Her body wet and pressing in my equally wet form. This was not good. My insides were shouting for the losing control but I couldn't respond to it. This lady was dangerous for me, even more than a bullet. I looked at her face and what happened next was not at all under my voluntary actions. I cupped her face with my left hand and my thumb grazed her lips, rubbing those water droplets. It seemed like time stopping flowing, the sound of Rain hitting the ground no more reached my ears. All that existed was us both and I lost all my control like a sand. And then I saw her close her eyes in anticipation, making me step back as reality hit me hard. This was not good... for both of us. I turned around, running hands through my hairs. I looked up at the other side of road and was left shocked. My fear came out to be true. It was not safe for us to step out at least in this city. I quickly pulled out my gun and aimed at the suspected person hiding on the other end.


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I opened my eyes after sensing him no more close to me. I was disappointed a little and was confused why I was feeling that. I wanted him to Kiss me? Again? But then his next action left me in horror. He pulled the trigger and shot a man. And I was shocked to see his this side. How dumb of me to not expect this from him...after all he was also one of them. He ran towards the dead body and was searching for the man's ringing cell phone.
"Hello? Vo milli? Kiske saath mai hai vo? Bolo Dammit" I heard the other person shout on phone. The voice was familiar. It was Shivam. I saw Rey crush the phone under his feet and he looked at me. His eyes...they were different now. No more they possessed any emotion any human emotion.
"Get inside the car" He said with the same stern face. I took some steps back as I watch him check the pockets of the dead man. I turned back, my gut filled with an unexpected fear. It's true, I don't know Rey at all.
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[A/N- Haha, Nai Nai.. I am perfectly fine. You must be shocked as this this third Update for today. 😆 Do tell me how was it. Personally I enjoyed so much writing this particular chapter. And it was long too, Of 1K. Longest chapter of this drabble. 😆

And one request _/\_ Please koi Pms bhej do :(

Much love :* ]
Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
resss 😛

unresss


eee *jumps*

how much i loveee these kinda dark stories *_________*

i am actually like *______* right now...

eee... the sudden change in emotions which i see in Reyaansh... goshh... i cant help but fall for him more n more after every passing update

that one moment when he wanted to be old Reyaansh...was beautifully written...👏

that rain moment was beautiful...serene...romantic...

i wanted a kiss...hashhh... 😆

so this shivam is really keeping an eye on them... urghhh kill him... 😛

okay honestly...i frigging loved this chappyy!!!!

amazingly amazing... 😃

Loved eettt!!!!

Edited by Effacious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres!

Loved all three chapters!😊
I just love the way you describe everything...it adds a mysterious side to everything!
So Rey was framed for Kria's dad's death...there started the journey of innocent teenager turned goon!
Kriya trusts him...gr8 but he's truly mysterious...wat exactly does he want...who was the actual culprit!
Shivam or Shivam's dad??? hell curious to know!
Loved the last chapter...his hearts's battle between the real Rey and the tough one...beautifully written!
Do continue soon
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I loved all the 3 chapters.

I am LOVING Rey more and more.

I like the way you are making Kriya react to Rey's behaviour.

Rey's characterisation is bang on and perfect.

You portrayed his feeling and emotions so perfectly<3 :*

RAIN SCENE WAS ^_^

I liked the moment where he actually was amazed with her not being scared of him.

Loved all the 3 chapters.

The story so far is beautiful and perfect😃🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks a lot upi for tripple dose...'

well i m loving rey...
the way you are potraying is character is way to awsome...

gradually they are coming close...

love it dear..

well thanks snigs for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I cannot describe how amazng dis update ws..dat whole sequence in d rain ws sooo sooo amazng..n dis stry is getting more n more intresting..plz plz update soon..i jus cant wait to read more on dis stry
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I too thought him as a villan. Koi baat nahi, I love villan and hero's mix. Just like in ddej. I know, you don't know about it. Neway. Thanks. Thanks alot. To refresh my memories. Waise bhi I love the dark past, mysterious, crime like stories.
Do continue yrrr. I am eagerly waiting for it.
Love u.
Nikki.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waise to mene chap 10 n 11 ke liye pahle hi comment kar diya he
N for chap 12
It was awsome
I mean rey loosing control
N getting closer to kria was so beautiful
But nai wo apne sence me aagaya wo bhi galat time pe
But than rey firse villen ban gaya
N he shoot that person
I likemthis rey so much
Mystrius dark hot caring so amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the rain romance ^_^
But then they had to part and the kiss didn't take place
3 updates in 1 day, uppi di ur on a roll today :P
I love how rey turns soft and then again gets his dark side out leaving kriya confused. update soon
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...

loved all the 3 chapters...

Amazing...

this story is damn interesting...

enjoyed each nd every part of the update...

Waiting for the next part..

update soon...

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