A sadda haq DARK FF updated 6th chapter : The fifth mountain

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Samyuktha Krishnan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

OMG... y wud parth do that???????????? 😕 but anyway good goin.. building up the suspense pretty well eh.. interesting.. very interesting.. jaldi next part update karo...

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sandra22
OMG... y wud parth do that???????????? 😕 but anyway good goin.. building up the suspense pretty well eh.. interesting.. very interesting.. jaldi next part update karo...

i'll update this part soon ... check after an hour .. sorry for inconvenience

love

aashi

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Mariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Aashi... it was brilliant. Just like this, want yo see the story progressing. Hope they sense danger before its too late. Continue soon... lots of love xxx

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farheen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

omg 😲

it was too gud yaar👏

this story is getting more n more interesting👍🏼

eagerly wating for next part

update soon dear

n thanx for the pm😊

Edited by fairy2410 - 11 years ago

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samridhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

But this is supposed to b ch. 2 na??

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Samyuktha Krishnan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

nice... good goin.. thanks for the pm 😊

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Finally i ma able to comment...😊

it was wonderful

but parth a murderer?

and randhir so immature? can't he see snayukta's fear?

Wanna see how it progress...really in love with the concept and story...

please update soon

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: jeenia128
Finally i ma able to comment...😊
it was wonderful
but parth a murderer?
and randhir so immature? can't he see snayukta's fear?
Wanna see how it progress...really in love with the concept and story...
please update soon

this story is from sanyukta's POV so what she thinks she writes ... it doesn't mean that randhir is immature ... that's only what she thinks

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Priya sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Wowww Aashi,this part was a treat to read dear.
I must say,the story is progressing fast and that too it's also very interesting.Kudos to u dear.😃
I am totally and trully in love with this story.
Right from the starting,everything was perfect and full-of suspense.
OMG...Parth is a murderer?
I want to know what happens next?
Continue soon dear.

Lots of love.
Priya.

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: maths_geek

this story is from sanyukta's POV so what she thinks she writes ... it doesn't mean that randhir is immature ... that's only what she thinks

so i think he is helping her to get relaxed an as usual will help her with attitude...😊

but please update soon...

waiting eagerly