A sadda haq DARK FF updated 6th chapter : The fifth mountain

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amulbaby06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey this is very interesting... so many mysteries... yaar pls update the next part & also pm me..

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: athena4
Res kiya hai jab complete hoga tab unres karungi😊 btw I'm first to comment😊
Unres
Aashima, ur both ff's are really amazing.I must say u have a very good vocabulary.
Btw who was that mysterious man??(reaveal soon ok 😉 ).
Updating my comment shortly😆 after u update whole chap*winks*
Parth is son of a caravan leader [:O]SO as parth has entered the story randhir is getting irked.Overall by reading the update ek baat toh clear hai ki u will read thriller/suspense/mystrey books!
And btw the map pic u tagged with this gives a real picture of the backdrop.SO there is a war approching😲 Anyway it was really AWESOME
JALDI update karna.
Sorry for soo.. much bak bak
Ananya❤️

oye i updated the post now update ya comment xD

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: priya1101
Res.😊

oye madam u better unres it SOON -_- u know na how much i love your BARE WALE COMMENTS Xd

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Srishti Sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It's really intersting... PM me when u update and then I'll give u a BADA WALA COMMENT as I know how much you love them...! :))

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: maths_geek

oye i updated the post now update ya comment xD

comment update kiya hai chal kar dekhlena!😉

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Priya sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: maths_geek

oye madam u better unres it SOON -_- u know na how much i love your BARE WALE COMMENTS Xd

Awieee...tum itna sweet kyun hain dear,Jaake dekho humne Unres kar diya.Aap bole aur hum na kare aisa ho sakta hain kya.😃

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanyukta_lolz
It's really intersting... PM me when u update and then I'll give u a BADA WALA COMMENT as I know how much you love them...! :))

aww sure DEAL made xx

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

THE FIFTH MOUNTAIN :

prologue (b)

i had never been in a desert before . it was like just like a ocean not of water but of sand. ... i saw randhir beside me .. his shirt , white originally was hard to recognize ... the blood coloured every square inch of it...

i took his head in my lap . his limbs were motionless ... he was still unconscious and if i were to make a bet i would have said he's dead .

but this wasn't the time to make bets ... he was dying ...

shit ! you can make it randhir ... i shouted without expecting a reply ...

wow he looks so cute when he is quiet so innocent just like a baby my baby ... i mentally slapped myself for thinking this stupid ... randhir needed a doctor right now .

if randhir survives this ... i'll write about us and this journey ... i really will ... i promised myself ...

these kinds of absurd promises you make when you are really messed up in your head and haven't slept for 50 hrs straight !

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well since he survived , here I am , sanyukta agarwal, writing about the chain of strange incidents that took place when we were stuck in the desert ..

(the story from here on would be narrated by sanyukta agarwal so enjoy

actually i think the story should go well if sanyu narrates it sorry it's just that am so unpredictable )

love

aashima

ps : i will upate part 2 soon ... tomorrow maybe

Edited by maths_geek - 11 years ago

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Avni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

res
unres

I am confused😕
the prologue was present story ?
i mean I am asking because in prolgue it was written that they lost yoyo ..😕
Bt in chp 1 yoyo was there😕
soo 1st chp was thier past travelling story ?
& frm now onwards the past story will be said by Sanyukta ?

Sooo many mystery...😲
I must say u r dng a great work yr 👏
Actually do you write any stories ? i mean buks ? 😊
Aweomeee Story!!!👍🏼

thnku for the pm n pme me for ur all updates 😊
Update sooon!!!!!

Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago