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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

Arnav is finding out that there is more to Khushi than he thought previously.

Come on Khushi, prove yourself girl.👍🏼👍🏼

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Loved your update. Arnav will learn more about Khushi now.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Wow...that was such a gripping, fast paced update that I could not believe it ended. I could just have read on and on. Please update soon...I want to know what happens next. This story has so much potential.

I am so glad that Khushi may have an opportunity to make something of herself. She just breaks my heart with her valiant stand in the face of adversity that she has faced in life.

Arnav really knows his stuff and I love his working style.You obviously have a working background because all the business jargon was so right on the money.

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

loved ur story...its little different but still similar to our arshi...
continue soon...

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kutkut12

@kutkut12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

very good ...please update soon

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Wow !! I m eagerly waiting for next chapters

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tajygl

@tajygl

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Good update. You should make update a little more lengthier an also add some self talking of both the leads, that will help people understand the emotional side of the leads. The writing is crisp though.