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radhika007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Beautiful cant wait for the next chapter

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

New reader alert!

Another one here courtesy Geeta 😊...was given the link few days back but just got around to reading all the 3 chapter today.

Goes without saying that once i started with chap 1 i could not rest till i had caught up with all the updates.

I love your khushi...i love her never say die spirit...i love the way she puts her heart and soul into looking after her family, providing for them and to think that she has been doing all this relentlessly for the last 12 years or so. But still her demeanour doesn't reflect any bitterness...which is astounding.

It will be interesting to read how these two will find comfort and solace in each other.

Do you pm? If yes then please add me to your list. Thanks!

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IDatIF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Khushi in trouble

Lovely three chapters

Both are very hard working , really liked the Arnav's way of working

Very interesting ff ,continue soon

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

The first Merger , is it? Arnav s' words of hardwork merged themselves into Khushi s' system. She had the will. The knowledge. Just didn't know how to go about it. And after listening to him, she is trying to find her way up.

Though it was amusing to read her musings and the way she is trying to show that she is eligible for a promotion, it really made me happy.

The staff is conditioned to work in lethargy. Since Arnav is not a known name, they also didn't take him seriously. But he brought them on right track. I love him!

Update jaldi!

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Anamika100
I am so hooked on this story that I have even analyzed your update pattern and am predicting that based on history you will update on 13th or 14th and am still checking here twice a day just in case you updated. lol!!!!

I think you are right. I too have been analyzing. 😆

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

hey !!!

I have just embarked on this journey started by you...

I am intrigued by your writing...

Will comment as and when I complete the chapters that have already been posted...

The prologue gave out the pathos of 2 suffering people who desperately want to clutch on to some peace and happiness...

Good going..

Ok now that I have read all teh 3 chapters I feel that you are very good at this... I love the way Arnav's interest in Khushi is progressing and teh turmoli Khushi is going throughis very evident tooo. Just love the plot of the story...

Continue soon... Please accept my buddy request for PM on future updates !!!

Edited by headtotoe - 11 years ago