Mohabbat Hai Tumse (Samud - Arshi - IshRa) - Part 6 - Page 2

liked how Kabir became heroic n saved manvi.Saras,Kabir,Manvi were too good.What a twist t d end!Virat died bcz of Kabir?Manvi was waiting 4 kabir only 2 apologize 2 him 4 blaming him.I thought manvi waited 4 him as he was her lover once.but it was virat her lover.will Manvi get another lover?Or will kabir Manvi fall in luv?or will kabir find another love?Waiting 4 Arshi,samud scenes

Please more !!!!!! I love these !

wow excellent update loved it thank you for pm.

Part 4


Maanvi, was sitting on the windowsill, in her room, just looking outside and reflecting on everything that had happened to her.
Kusum: Maanvi
Maanvi: Kusum
They both hugged each other.
Ruhi: How are you? Are you okay?
Maanvi hugged Ruhi and sat her down in her lap.
Maanvi: I'm just a little shaken, but I'm okay now that you're here.
Kusum: So what happened. I mean...you don't have to...
Maanvi: No its okay.
Maanvi held Kusum's hand.
Maanvi: I was on my way to meet you, when I realized I didn't have money. So I stopped to get some cash, from the cash machine. Next thing I knew was, I was being dragged down this alley way. I tried to scream for help, but one of them covered my mouth.
Maanvi started to cry. As it all came back to her. Kusum passed her a handkerchief, to wipe her tears away, but Ruhi grabbed the handkerchief and wiped the tears away for her. Maanvi smiled briefly and then kissed Ruhi.
Kusum: Wasn't anyone around at the time?
Maanvi: All I could see, were a few people, but they were further up. The area was like virtually disserted. In a way it was my fault for stopping there in the first place.
Kusum: You were lucky Saras bhai was there.
Maanvi: Yeah, he risked his own life for me...me
Kusum: So what did you expect? You're his sister.
Maanvi: You know what I mean
Kusum: Listen! You said this to me, but you better not let him catch you saying this. It'll hurt him even more. You know how much he cares about you. He probably cares about you more than any of us do.
Maanvi: Yes but...
Kusum: Listen just shut up and try and forget about what's happened...enough buts or else I'll kick your butt for you.
The way Kusum was talking to her, it brought a smile to her face. Kusum was her best friend. She's always been there for her, through everything life had thrown at her.
Kusum: If you want I could stay over if you want.
Ruhi: And me too.
Maanvi: I'd love that. You'd better let Kumud didi know.
Kusum: She'll be fine with it.
Ruhi got up and ran towards the door.
Ruhi: I'm going to ask my mum if I can stay over.
Both Maanvi and Kusum laughed at seeing Ruhi leave the room like that.
There was a brief silence in the air.
Kusum: Erm...I...I've just seen Kabir downstairs.
Maanvi: I...I haven't had the chance to talk to him...honestly Kusum if it wasn't for Kabir...I don't know what would have happened...they were hurting Saras bhai and I couldn't do anything to help him and then he came...he just came out of nowhere...
Kusum felt guilty and felt she had to tell Maanvi the truth.
Kusum: Look Maanvi...there's something I need to tell you...
Maanvi looked confused at Kusum.
Maanvi: What's up?

At the same time downstairs.
Ishita: But whatever happened it was just an accident...how can you be responsible for Virat's death.
Kabir: I could have saved him but I couldn't, he was there because of me...It should have been me...not him...I've ruined Maanvi's life by...
Saras: You didn't ruin her life back then because it wasn't your fault but you did save her life today and today was down to you...
Kabir was looking away at the time as he was feeling too guilty reflecting over the past.
Saras: If you hadn't had turned up today then maybe Maanvi's life would have been ruined for certain and I would have been in your place blaming myself for not saving her...I did all I could to protect her and back then you did all you could to save Virat.
Saras placed his hand on Kabir's shoulder.
Saras: If you honestly still believe that it was your fault...then stand up and face it...then turn away and try running away from it...you're not alone...I'm with you...always...

Back upstairs.
Kusum: I met Kabir a couple of weeks ago...
Maanvi's eyes widened.
Maanvi: What?!...Why didn't you tell me?
Kusum: I wanted to but...
Maanvi: But what?!
Kusum: I met Kabir coincidentally when I went out of town with Ishita didi and Ruhi...he tried to ignore me and walk away but I confronted him and tried to reason with him. He kept on going on about how he couldn't come back because he felt so guilty over what happened and that staying away from everyone was his punishment.
Maanvi started to feel guilty over hearing about what Kabir had said.
Kusum: He even made me promise him that I wouldn't tell anyone about him. But I told him he was being selfish...he wasn't just punishing himself...he was punishing all you guys by putting you all through this and that if he even cared about any of you or even had any self respect he'd come back to his family...people who care about him a lot...I even told him about you forgiving him and that even you were waiting for him to come back and that if he cared about you...that to stop putting you through all this...to come home.
Maanvi: That's why he turned up
Kusum: I guess so... I couldn't take it anymore that's why I was going to surprise you by taking you there to see him, but then this happened.
Danny: Maanvi
Maanvi: Danny...you come to get revenge for earlier on
Danny: Yes...come here
Danny stood there with his arms out. Maanvi went up to him and hugged him.
Danny: I'm just sooo glad that you're safe.
Maanvi: No you're not
Danny tapped Maanvi on her head.
Danny: You know me too well, silly.

kabir is so guilty.poor him.but liked everyone supporting him.Manvi is grateful 2 him now.hope everything gets sorted out.i liked kusum very much in this update

Nice updates
Kabir is back so glad
Poor guy is stopping feeling so guilty
Hoping Manvi can reassure him
Loved how he came to their rescue in nick of time n made sure none of those creeps got their filthy babes on Manvi
Looking forward to seeing what's comin next
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

Part 5


The whole day went peacefully. Kusum and Ruhi ended up staying over. Ishita went home. Danny, Kabir and Saras were downstairs talking. Kusum was taking a shower. While Maanvi and Ruhi were drawing pictures.

Danny: Have you spoken to Maanvi?
Kabir: No...I don't know what to say to her...where do I begin?
Saras: Go and talk to her...sooner or later you will have to...why not now? Get it over and done with. You will feel a lot better...believe me.
Kabir looked at both Saras and Danny. They both nodded their heads. Kabir hesitantly made his way to Maanvi's.

Maanvi was trying to get to some things on top of her wardrobe, when a box fell down and some photos slipped out. She knelt down to pick them up, but then she stopped at two photos and both bought tears to her eyes. One was a family picture of her with her parents and the other was a picture of her and Virat. She loved Virat more than her life.
Kabir: M...Maanvi
Maanvi turned and saw Kabir standing outside her room. Kabir saw the pictures in her hand. He was about to walk away.
Maanvi: Kabir...wait
Kusum came out of the shower room and saw Kabir. Kusum felt awkward standing in the room. It was the first time in years that both Kabir and Maanvi had seen each other.
Kusum: Ruhi...let's go downstairs
Ruhi got up and left the room with Kusum.
Maanvi: Kabir...please come inside
Maanvi put the photos down and went up to him. She grabbed his hand and pulled him into the room.
Kabir: Maanvi...I...
Maanvi: Kabir before you say anything...I'm sorry...at the time I was hurt and upset over losing V...V...Vir -
Maanvi's voice started to breakdown as she could feel a lump forming in her throat.
Kabir: Maanvi...
Maanvi: No Kabir...let me finish...
She sat down on her bed, while Kabir was still standing.
Maanvi: I remember thinking why me...why did it happen to me...what did me or Virat do to deserve sooo much pain and I was so angry because Virat was taken away from me...felt like my life had been taken away...like I was lifeless and...and...I held you responsible for it...I was sooo blinded at the time that I didn't realise what I was saying and who to...Kabir sometimes in life we tend to take out our pain and frustration at those who are close to us because we know they won't take it to heart...they won't say anything back cause they know why we say it...So how could you take what I said to heart and leave everyone...how could you...
Kabir sat down beside her. Even he had tears in his eyes.
Kabir: Maanvi...At the time all that was going through my mind was the whole incident...you lost the love of your life and I lost my best friend who was there for me always...
Kabir picked up the photos that Maanvi put down on the bed behind them.
Maanvi: You were always my bouncing board...other than Kusum, you're the other person in my life I could talk to and share all my problems with...
Maanvi held the picture of her and Virat.
Maanvi: You were the one who brought Virat into my life and I...
Kabir: You had every right to do and say what you did...You were hurt...seeing you hurt...it hurt me more then I already was...I felt like I had let you down and failed as a friend...at the time it felt like the right choice...leaving and everything.
Maanvi: But it wasn't was it...I realised what I said was wrong and I went looking for you because I needed my best friend with me and all I found was a note saying you'd gone...the one time I badly needed you...I...I...hate you...I hate...
Maanvi hugged Kabir and cried and so did Kabir.
Maanvi: I hate you Kabir...I hate you...
Kabir pulled himself away from Maanvi and wiped her tears away. Maanvi held Kabir's hand.
Maanvi: Kabir...promise me you won't leave again and you'll stay here.
Kabir managed to bring a smile on his face.
Kabir: I promise...I'm here to stay now.
Maanvi looked away from Kabir and noticed Saras, Danny, Kusum and Ruhi standing there with smiles on their faces. Kabir also turned to see them and smiled as well. For the first time in years he felt relieved. It felt like a big burden had come off his mind and soul.

finally Kabir Manvi open up.it was so emotional.their hug was so emotional.he promised that he'll b there.she got his best friend back.loved d dialogue very much.it was very touchy:

Part 6


Meanwhile back at the office Arnav was sat down typing away at his desk. When his phone rang.
Saras: Hello Arnav
Arnav: Saras...You didn't come in today...everything okay?
Saras: Yes...well...
Saras told Arnav about everything that had happened earlier on during the day and about Maanvi and Kabir patching everything up.
Arnav: At least Maanvi is okay...seriously happy that Kabir is back and in the nick of time.
Saras: Me too but most of all I'm happy that Kabir and Maanvi have patched up...anyway how has your day been? Did I miss out on anything today?
Arnav: No...nothing major...but that nutcase needs major surgery...
Saras: Who Khushi?...What did she do now?
Arnav: What didn't she do? Messing up an important file and assaulting me...
Saras: Assaulting you?
Arnav: Yes, our heads collided as we went down to pick up the file...Seriously Saras I'm telling you...this Khushi...
Khushi was about to come in but then she stopped outside listening to Arnav.
Khushi: Who is this Laad Governer bad mouthing me to...I make one small mistake and he's started...who does he think he is...
She leant closer against the door to hear clearly what was being said, but she failed to realise that the door wasn't properly closed. As she leant against the door, the door opened and she fell onto the ground.
Khushi: Arrrggghhh!!!!
Arnav looked all shocked at Khushi.
Arnav: What the - ?
Saras: Arnav...what's happened? What was this noise?
Arnav: This noise was Khushi...I'll call you back later.
Khushi got up onto her feet, but then she felt a slight pain in her wrist.
Khushi: Ouch!
Arnav: Khushi...What were you doing?
Khushi looked at Arnav angrily. She wanted to say all sorts to him but tried sooo hard to keep herself calm, as Arnav was her boss.
Khushi: I came to tell you that tomorrow's meeting has been cancelled, how was I supposed to know the door was already open...
Arnav didn't believe her as he looked at the door. He walked towards it and was about to close it but then stopped.
Arnav: Khushi, Can you come over here?
Khushi looked a bit confused.
Khushi: I hope his intentions are okay? I hope he's not going to try anything...no Khushi he's not like that...just leave Khushi...run Khushi run...
She slowly started to make her way towards the door, whilst twiddling with the front of her dress between her fingers.
Khushi: Why is he calling me over there?
Arnav walked Khushi out of the office and close the door, leaving it slightly open. He then turned towards Khushi and saw that Khushi had closed her eyes and was looking all nervous.
Arnav: Khushi!
Khushi jumped as she opened her eyes.
Khushi: Yes...
Arnav: Knock on the door
Khushi: What?
Arnav: Just knock on the door
Khushi hesitantly knocked on the door, whilst looking all confused.
Arnav: So you've knocked on the door...now tell me how did you manage to fall through the door way...unless...
Khushi's widened in shock.
Khushi: So you're calling me a liar...even though I'm working for you...it doesn't give you the right to accuse me of lying...I'm not like you...bad mouthing me...and...
Khushi immediately stopped mid sentence as she realised what she'd just said.
Arnav had a wry smile on his face.
Arnav: How did you know I was bad mouthing you?...unless you were eavesdropping my conversation...
Khushi didn't know what to say. She just stood there all confused. With thoughts going around in her head.
Khushi: What did I do? Khushi now you're stuck...nothing can save you now...think Khushi...think...
Khushi: What proof do you have I was listening? You're always bad mouthing me, everyone knows it...I meant in general...you're always bad mouthing me...and judging by you're reaction...you were bad mouthing me just now on the phone...weren't you...
Arnav was speechless as he didn't know what to say.
Khushi: I'm going now. It's time for me to go home. I'll let this slip this time now.
Before Arnav could stop her. She left...running out the door.
Khushi: That was a close one Khushi...you managed to get away.

The next morning, it was raining and slightly windy as well. Maanvi and Kusum were making breakfast. Ruhi was stood on top of a stool helping Kusum. Kabir came downstairs before Saras and Danny. He noticed the girls making breakfast all smiling, laughing and joking around.
Kabir: Fate took this happiness away from me in the past and now I've got the chance to make things right...I'm not going to lose this chance again...
Maanvi: Kabir...
Kabir smiled.
Kabir: Good morning and what are you ladies doing?
Ruhi: Can't you see we're making breakfast...we've got sooo much to do...
Maanvi: Ruhi...you are seriously too much at times.
Kusum: We just thought we'd get the breakfast ready for a change.
Kabir: You guys...and breakfast???
Maanvi: Why...can't we make breakfast???
Kabir: No...no...I didn't say that...What's the reason for making the breakfast anyway?
Kusum: So we need a reason, to make the breakfast now do we?
Kabir: Not really...it's just that I don't want to risk food poisoning...
Maanvi: Food poisoning?
Kabir: Yes...Maanvi don't get me wrong but it's too risky for me...you guys and breakfast...
Maanvi: Kabir!...Right out...out I said
Maanvi started pushing Kabir out of the kitchen.
Saras: What's going on here?
Maanvi: Bhai...just make sure he stays out of this area or else...
Kabir: Or else...
Maanvi looked at him angrily and was about to hit him.
Danny: Maanvi...don't take it the wrong way...but Kabir is right...
Maanvi: Right that's it...
Maanvi was about to storm after the pair of them to tear into them. But then Saras stopped her by grabbing her and pulling her back.
Maanvi: Bhai let me go...I'm not going to spare either one of them.
Kabir and Danny ran upstairs before Maanvi even got the chance to get her hands on them.
Maanvi: Bhaiyya why did you stop me for?
But Saras just stood there staring at her and smiled at her.
Maanvi: What?
Saras: Are you happy now?
Maanvi: Happy?
Saras: You know what I mean
Maanvi nodded her head.
Maanvi: For the first time in years I feel kind of relieved...however...
Saras: However what...something missing???
Maanvi: Yes...I want a bhabhi now...
Saras: Bhabhi...Danny isn't even...
Maanvi: I'm not talking about Danny...I'm talking about you
Saras: Me...
It totally caught Saras by surprise.
Saras: What...me...no way?
Maanvi: What do you mean no way?
Saras: Just look at me...Love just isn't my thing.
Maanvi: Why...I mean you're good looking, you have a good personality and...
Saras: That's enough buttering up from you...If love is written in my fate then it will happen, but as far as I'm concerned at the moment, love just isn't my thing, can you honestly see me being romantic...I'm happy as it is.
Maanvi: But I'm not bhaiyya...you've spent years looking after us...always putting us before everything...you too need happiness in your life and that can come with a life partner
Kusum: Bhaiyya...Maanvi is right...Everyone needs love in their life and that means you...
Saras: Like I've said lets leave it to fate...If love is meant to happen then it will...
Saras quickly ate his breakfast and headed out of the door.
Outside the rain had stopped but it was still slightly windy. Saras got into his car and drove off. While he was driving all he could think of was, what had happened overnight, this time yesterday...things were different and now, while at the same also thinking about what Maanvi and Kusum had said to him. But his thoughts were distracted by this white dupatta flying across his front screen. Saras automatically stopped the car and got out. He picked up the dupatta and looked around. He saw this female covering her face, from the wind, heading towards him. The wind started to calm down. So the female moved her hand away from her face, really slowly, first Saras saw her eyes, then her nose, then her lips. Her beauty just knocked Saras over. Saras just stood there rooted to the ground just staring at her. At the same time the very words that Maanvi said to him. earlier kept on going through his mind over and over again.
Maanvi: Happiness can come into your life from a life partner too...

arhi scene was superb.funny fight.kabir danny manvi scene was cute.saras met kumud.loved dway u introduced kumud.description was nice