Mohabbat Hai Tumse (Samud - Arshi - IshRa) - Part 6

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<font size="7">Main Characters</font>



<font size="6">Gautum Rode as Saras Vyas</font>


Age : 28


Saras is a successful business. Always puts his family before everything
else. Always wants Danny to join the business but he rarely listens. He wants
Danny to take his life seriously for once, whether it's settling down with one
girl or joining the business. But Saras still loves and cares about him.



<font size="6">Varun Kapoor as Danny Vyas</font>


Age : 24


Danny is the younger brother of Saras. He doesn't take life seriously.
Believes life is too short to waste. He's always surrounded by females and
loves them all. He can't help being with other girls. Till he meets Kusum.



<font size="6">Barun Sobti as Arnav Singh Raizada</font>


Age : 28


Arnav is Saras's close friend and business partner. Strong on the outside
and soft on the inside. Despite making it clear he has no space for love in his
life, deep down he is in search for someone who would love him for himself and
not for his wealth.



<font size="6">Ashish Kapoor as Kabir Vyas</font>


Age : 26


Kabir, doesn't have any interests in life or happiness, especially after
what had happened in the past which left him with no choice but to leave as he
felt it was the right choice at the time. Has a soft spot for Maanvi as he
cares about her a lot.



<font size="6">Karan Patel as Raman Bhalla</font>


Age : 27

Raman is a complicated person, who thinks he's far superior to females. Till
he has to deal with Ishita after he moves in next door to her, under certain
circumstances also ends up working at the same place as her as well. Starts to
grow a soft spot for Ishita's daughter Ruhi.



<font size="6">Jennifer Winget as Kumud Desai</font>


Age : 27


Kumud, always wants to make something of herself in life. At the same time
she's on the look out for that one person who would steal her heart away. But
her main priority at the moment is making something of herself. Till one day
she meets Saras Vyas.



<font size="6">Shiny Doshi as Kusum Desai</font>


Age : 23


Known for her hot temper. She shoots first and asks questions later. But she
loves her elder sister Kumud more than her own life. For her, her own sister's
happiness means the world to her.



<font size="6">Sanaya Irani as Khushi Kumari Gupta</font>


Age : 27


Khushi is a accident prone individual. Always wants to help people but ends
up making the situation worse. Works as an assistant to both Saras and Arnav,
mostly Arnav.



<font size="6">Nia Sharma as Maanvi</font>


Age : 23


Maanvi is normally a mischievous fun loving individual. She always wants to
see those around her happy, regardless if it will hurt her or make her happy,
as long as others are happy. Deep down she is hurt over what happened two years
ago because of an incident. Is close friends with Kusum and regards Kumud as an
elder sister.



<font size="6">Divyanka Tripathi as Ishita </font>


Age : 27


Ishita is Kumud's best friend. They have been friends for more than 10
years. Both live together, like sisters. Ishita is also a single mother to
Ruhi. They share everything with each other. Love hate relationship with Raman
Bhalla. In a way she is a complete slapstick.



<font size="6">Ruhanika as Ruhi</font>



Ishita's daughter and the apple of Ishita's eyes. Also regards Kumud as her second
mother. Shares a close friendship with Kusum and Maanvi. She thinks she's a
grown up already.


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Part One



It was a warm and beautiful day in Mumbai. There was hardly any air in the atmosphere. Maanvi just wiped away the sweat running down her face as she had just come back from her daily jogging rountine.
Maanvi: Morning bhaiyya
Saras had just sat down at dinning table reading the morning newspaper.
Saras: Hey Maanvi, how was your jogging?
Maanvi: Tiring bhai, its really hot outside.
Saras looked away from his newspaper and just smirked at Maanvi.
Saras: Yes but it's a beautiful morning though isn't it.
Maanvi: Yes that is true.
Maanvi smiled back at him.
Saras: Are you going to have some breakfast?
Maanvi: Yes, just give me 5 mins, I'm just going to have a shower.
Maanvi made her way up the stairs towards the her room, when Saras stopped her.
Saras: One minute Maanvi, while you're up there can you get that lazy so and so out of his bed.
Maanvi laughed, as she knew he was referring to Danny. She paused for a minute and had a cheeky smile on her face as an idea came into her head.

Maanvi slowly made her way towards Danny's bedroom. From the ceiling to all the way down to the floor, the room was covered in posters of girls.
Maanvi: When is he ever going to sort himself out?
She slowly crept upto his bed and screamed really loud in his ear.
Instantly Danny woke up and looked really angrily at Maanvi.
Danny: What are you playing at? Why did you do that for?
He threw a pillow at her as she ran out of the room.
Maanvi: Saras bhai told me to wake you up.
Danny: Oh really, I suppose he told you to scream really loud in my ear.
Maanvi: Well you are awake aren't you, now come on get downstairs.
Danny: Let me go back to sleep.
Maanvi: No! Danny you have to get downstairs
Danny: Try and understand Maanvi, Priya is waiting for me and you know its not right to stand someone up, especially on a date.
Maanvi: Danny, you are honestly just too much...!
Danny: Just give me 10 mins, I'll be downstairs. Try and understand, Maanvi.
Maanvi started to lose her patience with Danny, as he was just getting too much, day by day he was getting worse.
Maanvi: Look bhaiya is waiting downstairs for both of us, so hurry up and I'm going to have a shower, so you better be downstairs, when I get out.
Danny: Yeah...yeah whatever
He just pulled the covers back over him and went back to sleep.

After the shower, Maanvi felt a whole lot more relaxed. She got changed and headed downstairs towards the dinning table. As usual Danny wasn't there at the dinning table. She just stood there and sighed. Saras just smiled at Maanvi, as the way she was looking at the table and then up towards the stairs.
Saras: Forget about him Maanvi, he'll come down when he wants. Its no use forcing him. Lets have breakfast.
Maanvi: Yes but bhai, he needs to learn, something has to be done.
Saras: Something will be done, don't worry. You know what he's like, it'll take time.
Maanvi: Yeah I guess so, but he needs to take life more seriously.
Saras: Forget about it. Just have some breakfast.
Maanvi: Any news from Kabir?
Saras stopped eating and shook his head.
Saras: No Maanvi, he's in a world of his own. Since what had happened, he blames himself...but...
Maanvi had a guilty look on her face as she remembered all the things she had said to him and how she held him responsible over what had happened in the past
Maanvi: I shouldn't have hurt him like that, he did everything he could to help...he was hurt and then I hurt him even more
Saras: He needs time to get over this. He knows we are all here for him...I know that one day he will return.
Maanvi: Yes but I just wish he'd contact us to let us know he's fine and give me the chance to say sorry
Saras: I'm sure he's fine...after all...we all have a loving and caring sister to take care of us. So what if we're not related by blood, our relationship is a lot more than that.
Maanvi smiled at Saras, but he noticed that a few tears started to form in her eyes.
Saras: Maanvi, stop crying. Or I'll take back everything I just said about you.
Maanvi: It just seems like everytime I try to be happy something always keeps on dragging me back...I've already lost two people in my life who were close to my heart one still lives in my heart and my mind and the other I don't know where he is.
Saras felt really helpless seeing Maanvi cry.
Saras: Don't worry everything will be fine soon.

Suddenly Danny's bedroom door opened up and he made his way down the stairs. He still had his pyjamas on. He seemed kind of sad, as he made his way towards the table. He kept on rubbing the left side of his face. While at the sametime he was mumbling to himself.
Danny: Don't know who the hell she thinks she is, doing that to me, infront of everyone.
Maanvi quickly wiped her tears away as she didn't want Danny to see her like this. She managed to bravely put on a smile on her face.
Maanvi: How did your date go with Priya, in fantasy land?
Danny: It went great
Saras: She slapped you didn't she
Danny just looked back at both Saras and Maanvi. They were both laughing at him.
Danny: No she didn't
Maanvi: Really
Maanvi was surprised, that Priya or whatever her name was didn't slap him, because everyday Danny had been getting slapped by every girl he'd been dreaming of.
Saras: So what's with the long face then?
Danny: I was having a great time with Priya and then Neha came out of no where and she slapped me.
Both Saras and Maanvi just burst out laughing at Danny.
He just sat there staring at the table, while rubbing the side of his face.
Saras: Now who is Neha?
Danny: A girl I know...
Maanvi: She must have slapped you pretty hard, because that was in your dream and you still feeling it now, in the real world.
Saras: Danny, why can't you stay with one girl and settle your life, or else a day will come when you will fall in love truly and your past may mess up your future.
Maanvi just couldn't stop laughing at the state Danny was in. He looked terrible. It was like as if he had just woken up from a nightmare.
The phone started to ring. Maanvi got up to answer it.
Maanvi: Hello
Saras: Who is it, Maanvi?
Maanvi just turned around and walked up to the table. She placed her hand over the speaker of the phone.
Saras: Who is it, Maanvi?
Maanvi: Neha
Instantly Danny fell off his chair and onto his backside
Edited by Sujalthegreat - 11 years ago
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nice cs.nice cast.The first chapter was light hearted n sweet.Danny is so funny.Saras,Danny,Manvi bond was cool.What rly happened btw Kabir & Manvi?waiting 2 meet other characters.In d show Ruhi is Raman's daughter,here Ishita's daughter.nice change
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

nice cs.nice cast.The first chapter was light hearted n sweet.Danny is so funny.Saras,Danny,Manvi bond was cool.What rly happened btw Kabir & Manvi?waiting 2 meet other characters.In d show Ruhi is Raman's daughter,here Ishita's daughter.nice change



Figured a change is needed lol
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Very nice, really liked it. Please do continue as we have no writers left, n this work of urs is very very good. looking fwd to more chapters.

Thanku 😊
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u made changes in this ff.i guess sneha's character isn't there in this ff
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Part 2


Saras and Maanvi, just couldn't stop laughing at Danny
Maanvi: Relax...it's just Kusum.
Danny just looked at Maanvi and then at the state of himself. He was really angry. Maanvi just stood there smiling at him. Without even saying anything he ran after Maanvi.
Maanvi: Kusum...I'll call you back...okay...bye.
Saras couldn't stop laughing at the sight. Maanvi ran upstairs and locked her bedroom door, while Danny was coming after her.
Danny: Maanvi one way or another I will get my revenge.
Maanvi: Oh really, well its not that easy to get back at Maanvi
Danny: Maanvi I will get you for back.
Maanvi: Yeah yeah whatever
Danny strutted towards his room and got changed and then went out. He didn't even bother to finish off his breakfast.
Saras: Maanvi, Danny has gone, you can come out now
Maanvi unlocked the bedroom door and looked around to make sure.
Saras: Really he has gone.
Maanvi realized that he'd gone, as soon as she heard his car leaving.
Saras: Why do you always pester him?
Maanvi: When was the last time he was serious about any relationship.
Saras: I have full faith in him, a day will come when he'll realise his mistakes. If we force him, he'll never learn.
Maanvi: I'm just worried that when he does realize it, it might be too late.
Saras: It will depend on the circumstances. Fate will decide what will happen. Not me and not you.
Maanvi: I guess so
Saras: Anyway you seem to be getting naughtier everyday? What should I do with you?
Maanvi shrugged while you had a grin on her face.
Saras: What have you got planned for today?
Maanvi: I'm going to meet up with Kusum, she said she wanted to do some shopping.
Saras: I'm going to the office. Enjoy yourself. Do you need some money? Lift?
Maanvi: No bhai. I've got some.
Saras: Are you sure?
Maanvi: Yes
With that Maanvi, hugged Saras and then picked up her handbag and left. Saras just stood there, smiling as he saw Maanvi leaving. He thought to himself, that how lucky he was to have a sister like Maanvi and a brother like Danny, who both love him and care about him so much.
It felt great seeing them like this, always laughing and arguing. Every time he'd think about them it would make him laugh. But then he thought about Kabir He hoped that Kabir would come back soon.
Saras: We just need you back Kabir...come back soon.
Saras also quickly got changed. He got into his car and headed off to his office.

Meanwhile at the office all was not well. As a staff member was getting shouted at.
Arnav: What the hell is this? Where is that file? I asked you to leave it on my desk as soon as you've checked the quotation and now you're telling me you don't know where it is.
Out of nowhere Arnav felt someone tapping on his shoulder.
Female: Sir, I have the file.
Arnav turned instantly making the female jump back. Causing her to drop the file onto the floor and the papers scattered everywhere.
Arnav: Khushi! What - the?
Khushi's eyes widened in shock as she saw all the papers scattered on the floor and then at Arnav.
Both then knelt down to pick up the papers, but accidentally banged their heads against each other. Both got up while clutching the areas where their heads collided.
Khushi: Is this Laad governor's head...a head or a rock?
Arnav: What?
Khushi's eyes widened again, whilst hoping Arnav hadn't heard her.
Khushi: No...nothing
Arnav stormed into his office. Khushi sighed with relief as Arnav hadn't heard what she said. But then she noticed that the papers were still on the floor. She quickly knelt down and picked them all up and put them back into the folder all neat and tidy. She then made her way towards Arnav's office and then hesitantly knocked on his door.
Khushi: Sir - can I come in?
There was no answer.
She knocked again.
Still no answer.
Khushi then opened the door herself only for the door to accidentally hit Arnav in the head again. Without saying anything else she quickly handed the file to Arnav and then left before Arnav could react.

On his way to the office Saras stopped his car, after seeing Maanvi's car parked near an alley way. Her handbag was on the floor, just outside the door. There was hardly anyone around the area. He instantly got out of the car and ran across the road. He picked up the handbag and saw Maanvi's ID card.
Saras: Maanvi! Maanvi!
Maanvi: Bhai!
Saras heard her screaming for him. It was coming from the back of the alleyway. So he ran down the alleyway.
Maanvi: Bhai save me
Eventually Saras found her. He was shocked at what he saw. Maanvi was crying and she was surrounded by 5-6 guys.
Saras: Maanvi!
Gang Member 1: Who the hell are you? Get out of here.
Saras: Look I just want her
Gang Member 1: Why is she your sister?
Saras: Yes she is
Gang Member 2: So what are you going to do, if I touch her.
One of the gang members touched Maanvi and she screamed. Saras then grabbed hold of the guy's hand and punched him in the face. Another guy attacked him and Saras kicked him. The fight went on for quite sometime. Maanvi tried to run, to get some help, but it was no use. The gang got in her way. Eventually they started to over power Saras, as there were too many to handle, while he tried to keep them away from Maanvi. They got Saras down onto the floor. Maanvi tried to push and pull them away from Saras, but they were too strong for her to handle. She slapped one of them. In a rage of anger, that member, slapped Maanvi in retaliation, causing her to fall back. But as she fell back, someone caught her. She looked up and saw who it was. She was shocked. Her eyes were full of tears, as that person wiped them away, with his fingers.
Edited by Sujalthegreat - 11 years ago
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Arnav-Khushi scene was funny.Lilked it.Saras Manvi in trouble.Who held Manvi?Is that Kabir?Is he back?thx 4 d quick update.keep giving regular updates
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nice update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Part 3




Maanvi: Kabir!
Gang Member 1: Who the hell are you?
Kabir didn't say anything back, instead he took his shirt off and put it around Maanvi.
Kabir: Go and sit in the car.
Gang Member 1: She's not going anywhere.
Before he could even touch Maanvi, Kabir grabbed his hand and kicked him in the stomach, causing him to fall backwards, against the others. They also fell as well. Kabir then went up to Saras and helped him onto his feet. They both smiled at each other. But then the gang members surrounded them.
Kabir: Maanvi get away from here.
Maanvi: But Kabir
Saras: Just go, we'll deal with this.
Maanvi ran away from there. One of the guys ran after her. Kabir couldn't catch him, as others grabbed hold of him. Saras got them off Kabir. Kabir then grabbed hold of a long piece of wood leant against the wall and threw it at the legs of the guy who was running after Maanvi causing him to fall down. Kabir grabbed hold of him and just kept on pushing him forward. The guy tried to get away from Kabir, but Kabir wasn't having any of it. There was no way that he could get away from him. He tried one last time to get away, but Kabir pushed him so hard that he fell onto the ground. He looked up and saw most of his friends were down on the ground beside him, crying out in pain. One was getting still getting beaten up by Saras. Kabir grabbed hold of the guy and was about to punch him. But Maanvi stopped him.
Maanvi: Kabir stop! They've already had enough. Just look at them.
Kabir: What about him? He hasn't had any special treatment.
Gang Member 1: Look just let me go, okay I hardly did anything. I'm sorry just let me go.
Kabir: Why should I, they've probably forgiven you, but not me. You hurt Maanvi and you hurt Saras bhai. Do you think I'm just going to let you go.
Maanvi: Kabir just let him go. He's on his own now. Just like I was, just like how bhaiya was, when he fought them. If you both beat him up then whats the difference between us and him.
Kabir: Well atleast slap him Maanvi.
Maanvi: No he isn't worth it.
Kabir let go of him, but then Saras grabbed hold of him.
Saras: You're lucky, we're letting you go and its because of her. Now next time I catch you anywhere near her, I don't care even if its by coincidence...no one will be able to save you...understand!!!!
Then Saras pushed him to the floor and the guy got up and ran away.
Maanvi looked at Saras and ran up to him and hugged him tightly.
Saras: Hey Maanvi, they've gone now. Everything is fine now
Maanvi: I'm sorry bhaiya, because of me...
Saras: Don't ever say that. It wasn't your fault. I'll go through this again, if it means saving you.
Kabir was about to interrupt. But then stopped and was about to walk away.
Maanvi: Kabir...
Maanvi went up to Kabir and hugged him as well.
Maanvi: Where are you going? You're not going anywhere...I won't let you...I missed you a lot.
Saras: We all did...where were you going to go?
Saras was about to hit him, but then hugged him.
They all smiled at each other and then left.

Meanwhile Kusum was waiting outside her house, for Maanvi. But she didn't turn up. Kusum was getting worried. Then Ishita came out of the house, with Ruhi.
Ishita: Kusum what are you still doing here?
Kusum: Don't know didi, Maanvi should have been here by now, but she hasn't come yet...I've got a surprise lined up for her.
Ruhi: Have you tried phoning her?
Kusum smiled at Ruhi
Kusum: Yes, but I can't seem to get through.
Ruhi: Try phoning the house, she might not have left yet.
Kusum: I've already done that, that's why I'm worried.
Ishita: Ok look, I can wait with you if you want.
Kusum: No didi, you might as well go.
Ishita: OK look phone them at home once more, then we'll see.
So Kusum dialled the number again. The phone was ringing. But this time Saras answered the phone.
Saras told Kusum everything that happened with them, while she listened over the phone.
Kusum: Is she okay though?...I mean are you both okay?
Saras: Yes she's fine, she's upstairs resting, why don't you come over? It'll make her feel better.
Kusum: Yes I'm coming over right now.
Ishita looked at Kusum. Tears started to form in Kusum's eyes and she looked really worried.
Ruhi: Kusum didi...whats happened, is everything ok?
Kusum: Maanvi...Maanvi was attacked earlier on today by some guys.
Ishita: What is she okay?
Kusum: Yes she's fine, Saras bhai just said that she's resting.
Ishita: Okay look, I might as well come with you.

It didn't take long for Ishita and Kusum to arrive at the house. The first person they saw was Kabir. He was just coming down the stairs.
Ishita: Kabir?
Kusum: Kabir, how are they?
Kabir: Well they both are resting. But I think...
Ishita seemed a bit surprised over Kusum's reaction to seeing Kabir, she didn't seem at all surprised to see Kabir back.
Ruhi: Can I see Maanvi didi?
Kabir: Yeah...go on, she could do with the company.
Ishita stared at both Kusum and Kabir to see their reactions and yet nothing showed, it was like as if everything was normal. Kusum and Ruhi went upstairs to see Maanvi. While Kabir just looked up and then pushed his hair back and then just sat down.
Ishita: Are you okay?
Kabir just nodded his head.
Kabir: It just feels strange being back after all this time...after what happened...
Saras: Nobody blamed you for what happened...Maanvi said what she did because she was hurt and angry at the time.
Kabir: But she was right...it was my fault
Saras: Look at me...
Kabir hesitantly looked at Saras
Saras: What happened wasn't your fault and as far as Maanvi is concerned, if anything she's been looking forward to you coming back as much as I have...She's been waiting for the day...for the chance to say sorry for everything she said to you...Believe me.
Kabir: Why should she be saying sorry for? I'm the one who should be...
Saras: Kabir...
Kabir: It doesn't matter what anyone says...the truth is that, it was my fault that Maanvi lost her love...it was my fault that Virat died and this is something I have to live with.

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