When I Was Your Man - Drabble Story - Epilogue - Page 42 (17) - Page 5

Ohhh my god !!!! Why would you end it like that ????lol ..you are killing me

OH MY GOSH! SAAAFFFIII DI!

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!

YES! IT NEEDED TO BE LONG!

YOU MADE US WAIT! RES.

Unres.

You are an amazing writer! I love all of your writings...👏
The last part... where she was crying...
It made me love this version of Randhir even more. This is so brilliant Saffidi. You don't even know how beautiful this is. 😊
Yes. You did a great job in making this longer. You hadn't updated in forever... So the fact you did but left it at a cliffhanger... 😲
update quickly...😉 we want to know what will happen😳😳
yaaar! can't wait for the next drabble! It's just sooo good!

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

Ohhh my god !!!! Why would you end it like that ????lol ..you are killing me

with this...its just too awesome..

Why you do this ? Please update soon

Aww thank you! I'll update very soon, don't worry! 😆 I'm so glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: kri1

OH MY GOSH! SAAAFFFIII DI!

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!

YES! IT NEEDED TO BE LONG!

YOU MADE US WAIT! RES.

Unres.

You are an amazing writer! I love all of your writings...👏
The last part... where she was crying...
It made me love this version of Randhir even more. This is so brilliant Saffidi. You don't even know how beautiful this is. 😊
Yes. You did a great job in making this longer. You hadn't updated in forever... So the fact you did but left it at a cliffhanger... 😲
update quickly...😉 we want to know what will happen😳😳
yaaar! can't wait for the next drabble! It's just sooo good!

You are way too sweet, seriously! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this story. I'll update this very quickly, don't worry about waiting for a long time again. I won't keep you hanging for the next chapter. <3

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Reserved

Waiting! 😳

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

This is so perfect.

It's heartbreaking and achingly beautiful, all at the same time. Randhir's Acceptance of everything that had happened was so beautifully put, that was what I loved best. Your words all but painted a picture of all the happenings in the four years that passed :)

Love this <3

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it! You have no idea what your comment means to me! 😳

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey! Read your series of drabbles and loved each one of them! So different to see a selfless Randhir! Please PM me when you continue?

Thank you!

- Arushi

Aww, thank you so much! Sending you a buddy request now!

Originally posted by: athena4

Res!

Waaaiting! 😆

you know very well to keep your readers in excitement & make read them d next part...
u ended this part in such a way yar...
please update asap

"You will regret it," Randhir told her, removing his arm from around her and looking directly in her eyes.

"I won't."

"You will."

This had to be the rebound phase. If it made Sanyukta happy, Randhir would willingly be her rebound, the person she used to get over Parth, but he knew that in the end, she would only hate herself for it. And he couldn't bear to see her hate herself.

"Randhir, I was thinking about it for a while. I want to move on."

Exactly. This was the rebound phase.

"Listen Sanyukta, I'm not going to be your rebound," he told her, forcing himself to raise his voice at her.

He wanted to be nice to her, he wanted to explain to her patiently why it wouldn't work, but Randhir knew that she would only attach herself with him more. So he made a split second decision to go back to being the old Randhir - the Randhir who she would fight with, the one who she would react to, the one who would cause her to feel again, even if what she felt was hatred, and maybe... just maybe the same Randhir she wanted once too before Parth came into their lives, the same Randhir who had once been too late.

Sanyukta lowered her gaze as tears fell from her eyes. "I'm sorry."

"You know what Sanyukta," he said coldly, feeling his own heart hurt with the pain he could see this was causing her. "I've been nice to you for too long. If you're so stupid that you can't even move on from someone who clearly used you until he didn't need you anymore, then I have nothing to say to you either."

He stopped the movie, feeling terrible as more tears fell from her eyes.

After a few moments of silence, she spoke up, "Randhir... did you... did you move on from me?" she asked hoarsely.

"Yes," he said simply, "But you're my responsibility now, so don't try and leave this place. From tomorrow, you're making us food and doing the laundry."

He just wanted her to fight back, but she was crying instead. Parth changed her for the worse. He took away the fighter from within Sanyukta, he took away her strongest quality. Randhir could feel himself detesting Parth for this very reason. He could feel himself detesting himself. He had been too late. Randhir knew that he would never have let the fighter in Sanyukta die.

"The couch is all yours, or you could share the bed with me. It's up to you," he told her, trying to sound smug, before he walked towards his room. "Oh," he said, turning back for a moment. "Just wanted to say once again, you owe me, so you can't leave. If you do, I will call your brother."

He saw her eyes widen with fear before he turned back around and made his way to his room, lying down on the bed, feeling extremely guilty for what he just did, but he knew that he didn't have bad intentions at all, and that made all of this tolerable.

I'm going to bring the fighter back, he thought to himself as he lay awake in bed. I will bring back the strong Sanyukta.