virman ss U are not alone Part 11 in page 33 completed......

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Nyc uodate
Great work
Trying to like bt sawing error sorry

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: nidhiagarwal
awesome yr
cool
samar is virman son
like it
count soon
and plz do pm me

ofcourse i will pm u

nd yes samar is virman's son

i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123
AWESOME UPDATE PANAMA. LIKED IT VERY MUCH. SO NOW MANVI AND VIRAT R GOING TO STAY IN A VILLA THAT IS VERY CLOSE TO EACH OTHER. SO VIRAT GETS A CHANCE TO REMOVE HIS MISTAKE. FLASHBACK IS SO GUD. SAMAR IS IS CUTE REALLY MUMMA'S HONEYBUN. SO NOW WAITING 4 THE NEXT. UPDATE SOON. TAKE CARE.😊

yeah virat will get a chance but our manvi is tooo stubborn too

i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Awesome update.
Loved it...
Now Virman will stay togheter in a villa...
They will be close..
Love the flashback..
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM..

i will update soon

nd now they will stay close

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: aditidixit20
👏 AWESOME DEAR ANU LOVELY UPDATE , PLZ DEAR UPDATE SOON 🤗

i will update soon di

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
aweaom update anu
really loved it
but i am confused with manvi's behavior toward virat
and this making me more eager to know the truth
so plz update soon
thanks for the pm
take care

truth will be revealed soon di

nd manvi is too stubborn di

nd i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: priya_nishal
awesome update sissy.
love it
samar was cute momma's boy
nnw virat can c his life, by staying neare to them
bt y manvi doesnt show any hatred towards him.. and wat wld hav happend??
flashback was good
so zain and manvi were friends..
and virat was her senior..
interesting dear
update soon na anu

yeah di samar is mamma's boy

zain and manvi are good friends

nd i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: niki795
Awesome update
So now manvi and virat stay in close houses
The honey bun part is cute
Nice flashback
While reading I remembered one movie
R u South Indian... Just got a doubt
Nice update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

yeah i m south indian from kerala

thanku somuch

nd i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: GOOGLU
Wowww. ..superb update dear. ...
Love samar ...mumma 's honey bun...hahaha. .
Again shikha was outstanding ...she is the best frnd..
Zain also in the story. ...
But love his bonding wd mannu...
Love flashback part. ..
Abt present. ..
Virat's conditions made us also restless..wt happened in past ???
Egrly waiting for next chapter n past revelations part. ..
Love jeevan 's understanding behavior. ..
Mind blowing update dear. ..
Keep rocking dear
Continue soon. .
Thanks alot for pm dea. .

ur comments always makes me happy dear

nd i love to read ur comments too

yeah samar is mamma's honey bun

nd flasback will reveal everything

nd i will update soon

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

PART 4

After the song end Manvi opened her eyes and she saw everyone is clapping their hands and every one is praising her sweet voice. She become happy and her gaze fell in a place where Zain is sitting and smiling at her.

Principal:Manvi your sound is amazing and you have a great future dear.

Manvi:Thanku sir.

Manvi went back to her seat near where Zain is sitting and they both smiled to each other.

Manvi:Thankyou so much.

Zain:For what?

Manvi:For helping me to free from my tension.

Zain:Then what are best friends for. Rite.

Manvi:Are you serioues you and me best friends.

Zain:Why not ?Any problem?

Manvi:No and i am happy to get you as my best friend.

In other side our Virat is really flat on seeing our Manvi and hearing her voice.Actually Virat didn't belived in love at first sight concept and all but now he started to not started he fell in love with Manvi in first sight and our poor Manvi is aware of it. She is enjoying with Zain her best friend.

Outside the campus,

Seniors started their work means ragging not a serious ragging but they are making fun of their juniors.

But our Virat is not intersted in these and he is only thinking about Manvi .

Then a gang member of Virat called Zain and Manvi.By seeing them together Virat felt jelous and anger. (At that moment if he can he may kill Zain.But our Zain have a looong way to go.)

Friend 1:Why are you together?

Zain:Who are you to ask that?

Freind 2:Your seniors and we have every rite to ask u .

Zain:Who gave you the permission.We have our own parents and no need of external care.

These make Virat more angry but when he looks to Manvi's innocent face he completely cool down and she hate dishum dishum i mean fighting. And Virat can feel her fear by looking her face . When he looked toward her hand his blood boiled uncontollably because her hands are engulfed with Zain's hands with fear. But he controlled his anger.

Virat:Hey cool down. Tell me your name.

Zain:Ok I am Zain .

Virat(Looking toward Manvi):I am Virat and you are Manvi rite.

Manvi:Ye.. yes.

Virat:Hey don't scare and your voice was so sweet and awesome.

Manvi:Thank..Thanku Virat.

For first time Virat love his name. For him a name was only for identity but now when he heard his name from her he unerstood that names are not only for identity it is for some one special to call you as special by mix of sweet and magic.

Virat:Ok bye guys you two carry own.

Zain:Thankyou virat for your sweet behaviour.

Friend1:Hey Virat what happened to you?That Zain is over smart and you leave them free from our cage.

Virat:Hey shut up. I don't want any thing to know about Zain but i want my Manvi safe and happy. But i think in future these Zain will become a head ache for me. But i will get what i want by hook or crook.

Friend2:So great Viraat singh Vadera loves Manvi.

Virat:Shhh...It's a secret and i will reveal every thing soon to her because i don't like waiting...

Bye