virman ss U are not alone Part 11 in page 33 completed......

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Posted: 11 years ago
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These is a short story about our virman and it's deals with true love but with lot of struggles freindship and misunderstangs and a happy ending.




U ARE NOT ALONE
PART 1
A engagement day,
Shika: Mamvi manvi whereis she? Mom did you see Manvi?
Shika's mom: No shika but i think she is downstairs.
DOWNSTAIRS
Shika: Manvi Manvi
Aunty: Beta i too want some cool drink.
Shika: Manvi you are here and i am searching you all around.
Manvi: Shika why are you here? You have to sit in you room naa.
Shika: Then what are you doing here? You are not a servant of these house.
Manvi: Harrey who told you that i am a servant. I am at my freind's engagement function and i am helping my family naa.
Shika: But Manvi
Manvi: No but Shika.
Aunty: Arrey i asked you a drink an dwhat are you doing there?
Manvi: Haa aunty i will bring now it'self.
At engagement hall,
Ladkewala arrived and he was surrounded with his friends and relatives. Soon Shika too came their with her friends and relatives but Manvi is missing.
Shika: Where is Manvi?
Mother: Please be quite Shika? Why are you making problems.
Shika: But i want my Manvi in my side.
Mother: Shika i am giving you the last warning now Manvi is here because you threatened as saying that you will not marry if Manvi is not here. Now enough is enough what your husband's family will think about you if they find that you have these type of friends. Please for our sake.
Shika:Ok mom but you are doing a mistake mom and without Manvi i am dead and Jeevan is putting a ring in a dead soul's fingure.
Mother: Shika...
Shika: Mom please don't raise your voice here.
At that time a cry of a little baby and a scolding sound is heard from back and every one's attention turned to them and every boy's attention where on the girl who is standing with a baby in her arms because of her beauty and the pride in her voice.It is our Manvi.
Aunty: Can't you walk properly? Are you not ashamed to bring these baby here? Oh what a girl you are? If i am at your place i will siucide or bury my self. But here look are you a girl?
Shika: Enough aunty what are you blabbering? Are you out of your senses?
Mother: Shika please stop it
Shika: Mom but
Mother: I said you
Manvi:Aunty excuseme can i take your five minutes pls.
Manvi turns to Shika's aunty
Manvi:I have a baby and i am proud of having him. Moreover that i am living my own without deponding anyone. I am alone in my life and i am not disturbing anyone of you i n my life. Then why should i be ashamed. Oh having a baby. I am happy with my baby and i am proud that i am feeding him with my own hands. iF YOU HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH ME YOU CAN GO FROM HERE and i will attend my best friend's engagement.
Every one stood their amused with her attitude and all loved her answers and Jeevan's friends too . Among them our here virat is surprised plus happy to see her because...
That will be reveal soon
Bye
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iluviratmanvi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yipeee
i m first yaar too gud pz dont

and thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress
Me second
*Unres*
Loved the update..
Awesome start
Totally amazing
Superb
Nice story
Maanvi a single mother
Loved her attitude..
Looking forward for more
Do continue soon
Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
Kicha111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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New story
Manvi hv'g baby
Do cont soon
Nd thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww..
Anu another story...!!!

Nice start...
Manvi is having a kid...

Intersting...
Update soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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new story wow wonderful start manvi
is single mother and seeing manvi
virat is happy hmm virat is the father
na manvi child and he left her some
mu update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story dear
Do continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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B'day or engagment??
Btw
update is good
intresting
ggod one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww one more wrk on virman. .
Its outstanding ..
Plzzz continue soon. .
Thanks alot for pm n new wrk on virman.
Keep rocking dear
Tc
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
but its bday or engagement
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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