SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81) - Page 30

Originally posted by: MAHAK1234

Hey thanks a lot fr d pm

Ff ws really mesmerizing

Hehe .. i knew randhir won't let sanyu alone

She is quite naughty.. lol finally she trapped him

Umm.. but rd melting so easily

Personally i didn't want that intimacy at this stage

But its ok .. as u told that their relation won't be

Normal even after dis ..

Waiting fr ur next update

Update soon😃

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Yes she is quite bold and daring in this FF. 😆

Originally posted by: Piya1702

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m sooo late on commenting for this chapter......net was down the whole day yesterday!!!

Omggg...m still in the riverie...
reading this chapter,a moment came when i had stopped even breathinggg...such a high intensity chapter...wohooo u r so gud at describing the romantic moment...
moi very very eager for the next chapter!!!!😳

You stopped breathing? What's your reaction going to be during this new chapter? 😆 Thanks! 😛

Originally posted by: kri1

GODDD!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Oh my god. ohmygosh... This. AHHH! *SCREAMSINUTTEREXCITMENT*

That part that it isn't a matter of love.. and then let me tell you what it's about. God. that... gave me goosebumps and shivers. Why do write this so soo so well.

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Was that a surprise? Sorry for the ending... next chapter will likely be rated mature. So that's a hint of what's to come. And no, Randhir and Sanyukta's relationship problem will not be fixed this quickly.

I want to hurt you and give you a big big big hug.

Hurt you because 1) you ended it at a huge cliffhanger. 2) that you said it will not be fixed this quickly.. so I am assuming that you are still going to make it a bit rocky.

And hug you for just 1) an amazing chapter 2) making me blush the most ever in my life. ever ever ever. 3) and just because I love ya so much.

Let me know what you think!

What I think... I think that you're so perfect. And that you are one of the best writers here. and that you better better update the next chapter fast! I loved it yaar! Too excited!

Love Kri :) 🤗

Muah Kri! Thank you so much for the extreme fangirl reaction of the chapter - it boosted my ego a LOT! Hahahaha! Thanks girl! If you read this next chapter I don't know what your reaction will be. My terribly gutter mind is coming out and I was blushing without shame while writing it. Hahahaha. It won't be easy although the next chapter will make it seem like it will be. Yes I took a while to update because life kept me busy but I'm finally updating! Thanks Kri! <3

Originally posted by: SamC

Ohhh wow!!! Read all the parts in a go!!
A very talented writer!! Y did u leave the last chap at such a crucial moment!!! I hope its nothing wrong!! *fingers crossed*
Do pm me wen u update!! I hav already buddy you!
Love,
Samarpita. ❤️

Nah it's nothing wrong! I scared you guys for no reason. Thank you so much! 😃 By the way, for PMs please like the first post of the topic or I end up missing people.

Originally posted by: don girls

Wow
Just read all the parts and they are simply amazing
Loved it
At moments it was HOT
But made it into a superb storyline
Can't wiat to see what happens next
Please update soon and PM as well
Thanks

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Like the first post of the topic for PMs please or I end up missing people. Thanks!

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Heylo Saffi! I knew I had read this fic before! And then I remembered, I had read uptill chapter 7 during my lectures😆😆

This is the chapter that had *ahem-ahem* right? I mean here I was reading about sexual desires (in very humble words) and here the lecturer was droning on about male and female sexual organs... I was like, this fit in nicely🤣

That aside! I never doubted your ability to express emotions and character thoughts! I know exactly how capable you are thanks to your drabble collection!

I just wanted to say that the plot line is fabulous! It's realistic and emotionally connecting!

I love the Sanyukta and Randhir you have portrayed!

Please Update soon! And send a PM when you update! Pleaasseee😳

Love,

Pari

Hi Pari! Yeah that was the ahem ahem chapter just like this next one. 😆 Wow, what a coincidence haha. 🤣

Thank you so much for the awesome review! I'm glad you enjoyed this fic just like you enjoyed my drabble collection. Girl I forget people if they haven't liked the first post of the topic so please like that to ensure you do get a PM from me. 😛

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

I regret it not reading it earlier

Read all the 13 chapters in a go

I got too much in the FF that I forgot my surroundings

I am just mesmerized by your writing

You way of describing is splendid 👍🏼

The way you portray their thoughts makes your updates fascinating

You deserve a standing ovation for that 👏

And to top it of all, my favorite genre is Angst

So, you see I have another reason to love your writings

Next time you update mind sending me a PM!! Pleaasseee!!

Love,

Shefali

Thanks for reading it all at once! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! 😛 Pleaseee like the first post of the topic to get PMs or I might accidentally miss you.

Okay... now you need to post. I am having withdrawal symptoms! hahahaha!🤗 muah too! love ya!

Originally posted by: kri1

Okay... now you need to post. I am having withdrawal symptoms! hahahaha!🤗 muah too! love ya!

I'm posting now! Give me a few minutes. 😆

AAWESOME! I wanna be first! Just so you know... I am waiting and like refreshing this every 30 seconds! hahahah!