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Posted: 11 years ago
Saffi! This one was SO exciting! Can't wait for the next one!
Please update fast :D
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Y U DO THIS, HUH?!
First, When I was Your Man and now...
Cruel. Thats what you are!
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Chapter Thirteen

In the next few days, Randhir behaved typically, and Sanyukta didn't even try to do anything, because she knew she had to save her plan for the weekend.Finally, after work on Friday night, as they were entering the house, Sanyukta smiled at Randhir, putting the first part of her plan in action.

NICE! See, this is so Sanyu. She knows Randhir too well. So she's sort of manipulative in that way.

"I'm going out tonight Randhir, do you want to come?" Sanyukta asked politely, keeping her tone neutral, already knowing his answer.

"No," he said, walking ahead of her.

"Fine!" she yelled out after him, trying to sound indifferent.

She knew he would come though. This time, he was not going to leave her alone and she was confident about it. She immediately rushed to her room to get ready for where she was going.

I love this. Again... she knows him way too well.

Sanyukta went in her closet and rummaged through her clothes before picking out the dress she was going to wear tonight. She smirked. There was no way Randhir would be able to be so controlled today.

Are... always talking about being controlled😉 and all! Hahahaha!😳 I blush so much while reading this... hahaha! you naughty girl!

She wore the dress and did her makeup quickly before looking at herself in the mirror. The black v-neck dress fell loosely to the middle of her thighs. The thin sleeves hung off her shoulder, wrapped snugly around her arms. It showed quite a bit of cleavage too. The back was lower than normal, but still covered a fair bit.

That's one sexy dress! hahaha!

Finishing off her look with bright red lipstick, she let her straight hair hang loosely over her face.

Feeling nervous at the pit of her stomach, she picked up her heels and walked to Randhir's room.

"I - I'm going out... to Soundhouse, alone," she said dramatically, knocking on Randhir's door. "If you want to, you can still come."

She heard the door unlock from inside. Standing up straight, she put on a calm expression on her face, composing herself. What would he think of her going to a nightclub alone dressed like this?

As soon as the door opened, she gulped nervously. He looked her up, down, and then back up causing her to blush. Was he checking her out? SoSo Obviously?

HAHAHAHA! He was checking her out! Hahahahahahaha! I love this!

"Um... I'm going," she said, about to turn around, but he grabbed her arm.

"I know what you're trying to do Sanyukta."

"Oh yeah? You had the option to show me around, but you didn't, so now I'm going. By myself."

"A night club of all places? It won't be right for you to go there alone," he informed her.

"Then why don't you come to with me?" she asked him, a smile reaching her face.

"I'm not coming with you, because I know what you're up to. I told you it's unsafe. You're a grown woman, decide for yourself what you want."

Awh. This is so true to. I love how you just haven't put that Sanyu knows him well. Randhir knows her equally and knows that she is trying to manipulate him into coming again.

And with that, he closed the door on her face. She felt tears reach her eyes. She tried so hard to dress up nicely and impress Randhir, just so he would go out with her, but he didn't see that? He didn't care at all about hurting her feelings.

"Okay fine," she yelled from outside, banging on the door once. "You're right. I will do what I want. I'm going to the nightclub Randhir. Your decisions don't affect mine!"

Then she turned on her heel and left the house.

She knew what she was doing was stupid. Nobody went to nightclubs alone. They usually went with a group of friends. Being alone was unsafe. As she bitterly walked into the club, she wondered why she was even afraid. She could take on a few guys by herself.

Aree. This characterizes her so well too. She will stubbornly go there because she is so affected by him.

As soon as she entered, she regretted it. A lot of boys pushed against her trying to grind. That's so disgusting. But I am so sure that it is true. She pushed through them and made her way to the washroom, where tears fell from her eyes. She was in no mood to even be here. What was she trying to prove? And to whom? Randhir didn't care whether she was here or not, and she didn't even want to be here, so why was she here?

With shaking hands, she picked up her phone and dialed Randhir's number. He picked up on the first ring.

She hurt him so much. She hurt him in the past, and she was probably hurting him now. He didn't want to be near her because of her own mistake, and she was just scratching his scars by trying to force him to take her back. Maybe she needed to leave him alone.

Awh. This melted my heart. She is seriously so sorry. 😭 I am tearing up. Literally. I don't usually tear up on this kind of stuff. But yaar, the way you just write... Either way... it just touches my heart.

"Randhir," she said, before he could say anything. "I'm sorry."

She hung up the phone and walked out of the bathroom. As she walked through the crowd, she felt a boy try to grope her. Turning around, she slapped him.

"How dare you?" she yelled through the loud music.

The boy looked pissed off as he looked at her.

"You don't belong in a night club," he replied with anger, charging towards her and grabbing her arm. "Watch what I do to you now."

She was just about to kick him where it hurt the most, when she felt a comforting hand on her shoulder from behind.

She didn't even have to turn around to know it was Randhir.

He pushed the boy off her and held on to his collar. "Listen to me," Randhir said through gritted teeth at the boy, "If you come near her again, I'll personally break all of your bones. Don't say I didn't warn you."

So... beautifulll... awh! She knew that it was Randhir.

Then he let go of the boy in a single movement, and grabbed Sanyukta's arm. "Come with me."

He lead her to the side of the club and held on to her shoulders protectively. "What kind of silly logic do you have?" he asked, nearly yelling, at her. "You're out of your mind! Going to a nightclub here alone."

Sanyukta, who was deeply touched by Randhir's presence, tried to control her smile.

"Why - why do you care?" she asked, trying to show him attitude, but feeling really guilty about it at the same time.

"You know why I care dammit," Randhir said angrily, shaking her shoulders. "You know why."

I love this part so much. I don't think you understand the mixed feelings that are in me right now. I am tearing... I am so excited... I want to slap both of them... I want to hug both of them... and I just want both of them together... this... this... is... is...is... sooo... perfect.

"I know," Sanyukta breathed out, feeling safe and in complete bliss with him in front of her. "I knew you wouldn't let me come here alone."

"Let's go," he said, looking away from her.

"No, let's dance Randhir, if we're here anyways," she whispered. "Please?"

"Sanyukta, let's just get out of here!"

"I'm not leaving until you dance with me," she said stubbornly with a pout.

Randhir sighed, giving in, as she smiled inwardly, her heart leaping when he grabbed her hand and took her on to the dance floor.

She held on to the sleeves of his shirt tightly while he wrapped his arm around her waist and held her against him protectively. They swayed on the dance floor for a few moments, looking into each others eyes. Sanyukta rested her head on his shoulder, her lips brushing over his neck. She felt his arm grip her even more tightly.

AWH! THAT PART... gave me shivers. He wrapped his arm around her waist... gah! That's got to be so perfect. Yaar... His arm gripping her more tightly... can this get any more sexy😳😳😳... it's making me blush!

This small action made her smile. What she was doing was probably wrong, because despite knowing of her effect on him and his wish to stay away from her, she was trying to get closer to him, but she couldn't control herself.

Controlling themselves... ahahahahah! you had to bring it in!😃😆😳😆

She knew, from the bottom of her heart, that if he accepted her back, she would never hurt him, so she kept doing what she did. She knew that his true happiness was with being with her, and she wanted him to realize that too.

She removed her head from his shoulder and looked into his eyes again. He moved one of his hands up to stroke her cheek gently, seemingly mesmerized by her as well. His finger swept across her cheek before moving down to trace her lips.

God. This. is. so amazing...😳

She closed her eyes, feeling her heart start to beat faster as he leaned down and let his lips linger a few millimetres away from hers. She clutched his sleeves more tightly as his lips brushed over hers gently.

Her chest was pressed against his, and she could feel his heart beating as strongly as hers was. Entangling her hand in his hair, she pressed her lips on his with passion. Her other hand found his cheek as he deepened the kiss, opening her mouth with his.


Suddenly she wanted to get closer to him, as close as was humanly possible. Her body was burning with desire and she could feel Randhir's desire on her body too. His hands ran down her back, holding her against him.

I am speechless. But yes. You just made it perf. And I asked some comments before can it get any sexy... and it just now did. I am so lost for words right now... Ahhh. Awhhh. FANGIRlING... A LOT.😳😃

It was all too soon when Randhir broke the kiss and turned around, leaving the nightclub. Frightened by his change in behaviour, Sanyukta ran after him.

"What are you doing Randhir?" she yelled outside the club.

"Get in," he ordered, opening the back door of the car for her.

She entered and scooted over so Randhir could enter the car beside her.

"Home," Randhir told the driver impatiently.

Sanyukta glanced at Randhir, unsure of what it was he wanted or what he was even thinking. He placed his hand on her leg, making her body shiver with excitement. She moved as close as she could to him and placed her hand on top of his, lacing her fingers through his.

If the driver wasn't there, she was sure that they would have crossed all their limits in the car itself. A part of her was glad that the driver was there - even though she was getting restless too - because teasing Randhir was fun.

I DONT THINK I HAVE EVER BLUSHED THIS MUCH BEFORE.😳 OH MY GOD.

Once they reached home, Randhir took her hand and lead her straight to his bedroom. He locked it behind her and started to place kisses on the exposed part of her back and shoulders. She bit on her lip, holding back the moan that was on the verge of escaping.

HOLY CRAP! I AM BLUSHING MORE... Oh my god. this. is. 😳

Then suddenly he let go of her and turned around, folding his arms.

"This isn't right," he said.

Sanyukta's mouth fell open, disappointed. "This is not right? What do you mean this is not right?" she yelled, forcing him to look at her. "I love you, you love me. It's completely right."

AWH!...

"Sanyukta it isn't a matter of love," he yelled back, looking at her with fury in his eyes.

He grabbed her shoulders with force and pushed her against the wall, his face close to hers.

"What is it about then?" she whispered, feeling her knees go weak, and finding it hard to even talk in his presence - especially when he was so close to her.

"Let me tell you what it's about," he said angrily, holding her arms tightly.


GODDD!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Oh my god. ohmygosh... This. AHHH! *SCREAMSINUTTEREXCITMENT*

That part that it isn't a matter of love.. and then let me tell you what it's about. God. that... gave me goosebumps and shivers. Why do write this so soo so well.
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Was that a surprise? Sorry for the ending... next chapter will likely be rated mature. So that's a hint of what's to come. And no, Randhir and Sanyukta's relationship problem will not be fixed this quickly.
I want to hurt you and give you a big big big hug.
Hurt you because 1) you ended it at a huge cliffhanger. 2) that you said it will not be fixed this quickly.. so I am assuming that you are still going to make it a bit rocky.
And hug you for just 1) an amazing chapter 2) making me blush the most ever in my life. ever ever ever. 3) and just because I love ya so much.

Let me know what you think!
What I think... I think that you're so perfect. And that you are one of the best writers here. and that you better better update the next chapter fast! I loved it yaar! Too excited!

Love Kri :) 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh wow!!! Read all the parts in a go!!
A very talented writer!! Y did u leave the last chap at such a crucial moment!!! I hope its nothing wrong!! *fingers crossed*
Do pm me wen u update!! I hav already buddy you!
Love,
Samarpita. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Just read all the parts and they are simply amazing
Loved it
At moments it was HOT
But made it into a superb storyline
Can't wiat to see what happens next
Please update soon and PM as well
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz plz plz update this. are u busy these days??? no upates from you from last 2 days😭

waiting...waiting and waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heylo Saffi! I knew I had read this fic before! And then I remembered, I had read uptill chapter 7 during my lectures😆😆
This is the chapter that had *ahem-ahem* right? I mean here I was reading about sexual desires (in very humble words) and here the lecturer was droning on about male and female sexual organs... I was like, this fit in nicely🤣

That aside! I never doubted your ability to express emotions and character thoughts! I know exactly how capable you are thanks to your drabble collection!

I just wanted to say that the plot line is fabulous! It's realistic and emotionally connecting!

I love the Sanyukta and Randhir you have portrayed!

Please Update soon! And send a PM when you update! Pleaasseee😳

Love,
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
I regret it not reading it earlier
Read all the 13 chapters in a go
I got too much in the FF that I forgot my surroundings
I am just mesmerized by your writing
You way of describing is splendid 👍🏼
The way you portray their thoughts makes your updates fascinating
You deserve a standing ovation for that 👏
And to top it of all, my favorite genre is Angst
So, you see I have another reason to love your writings
Next time you update mind sending me a PM!! Pleaasseee!!
Love,
Shefali
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty

Omg Omg Omg !!!!!

Why did you end it like that !!!!
I am more into this ff than I am into the show...
Ohh god what's gonna happen ????
What is Rd hiding ????? Shit...
Please update yaaa...
And the scene was sooo awesome...sanyu's idea of going to the night club and randhir following her ..
Goshhh


Where do you get these brilliant ideas from ???
Next chap is mature... Oooh can't wait !!



Hahahaha well I am flattered! Thank you so much! He isn't hiding anything. 😆 I'm so glad you liked it and think of them as brilliant ideas. I come up with random things. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ParamHolic-

Did u just stop there?

Such a cliffy..but u gave us a hint..😉
I can read the next part No? i'll turn 18 next month..so i can read it think 😆
Coming to the update..
As usual it was Fabulous ..
Sanyu dressing up for RD and ..RD staring at..i mean checking her out 😳
He said her NO..Oh! he knows her so well..
Sanyu realized wat she is doing with RD and hence called him and apologized..
But wat sanyu thought aint wrong ..She knows he loves her..
She just needs to get his trust back..
They did THAT ☺️
Update the next part soon..
Love
Neha 😃



Yes I did just stop there. 😆 It's next month already - posting this on July 1st for you! 😆 Read at your own discretion is what I'll say. 😛 I know some 20 year olds who aren't ready to be exposed to this stuff and I know a lot of corrupted 15 year olds who this won't affect (me being one of them a few years back), so I'm just going to put a read at your own risk warning in the next chapter.

Thank you Neha! <3

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