SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81) - Page 32

Originally posted by: kri1

res... OKAY I AM FIRST! WHOOP! WHOOP! now let's get to reading!

unres

I WAS FIRST! THAT JUST MAKES ME FEEL 10 times happier! OKAY MY REVIEW IS NOT MUCH... because you literally made my bolti band. because it was just too hot... okay! read now!

Hahahaha you were literally refreshing this fic a million times until I posted! You had to res first! 😆

Hahahh! I think this was just brilliant. Esp the part where Randhir is like you wouldn't regret this will you. HOLY CRAP. I THINK I HAD AN EPIC EPIPHANY. HE IS SO FORESHADOWING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT... grrr. I hate you. naw. I love ya. I already have a feeling that I know where this is gonna go. But I will leave it to you to make it amazing! hahahaha! Anyways... You'll kill me. THIS WAS AMAZING... yeeahh...I love ya. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! You're going to make me go crazy with suspense.

Originally posted by: gujjupari

"Res"... Let me just turn off the heater while I go read this update🤣

Originally posted by: moonkmh

this is totally hot ❤️ but i love the emotional build up for the environment..

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Waiting! 😆

Originally posted by: gujjupari

"Res"... Let me just turn off the heater while I go read this update🤣

UNRES'ed!

The way you express those convoluted and unsaid emotions at the start was just brilliant! It's was amazing! Her want and his sadness and then he giving in! It was just beautiful!!!

I. can't. even. deal. with. my. feels.

And then came the *ahem-ahem*... I must say Saffi, you are one heck of a writer! I mean WOOOW! You have literally ticked off every genre of writing in my mind.. Angst checked. Romance checked. Erotic checked. Feel good checked.

Have you written comedy before? If so please PM me the link! I would love to reaaad! You are such a talented writer!

While reading the *ahem-ahem*, I turned off the heater and took off my sweater and it's like 8 degrees here... Even my laptop was heating up!

Randhir was such a caring little partner! And that "What do you want Sanyukta?" line was just an awesome stroke☺️! BUT (there is always a but isn't there?😆), he didn't respond! That means, "I adore/care for you... but there is something still worrying me at the back of my mind"??

Update real soon Saffi!

Love,

Pari

PS: Me has liked the first post😃

Originally posted by: don girls

OMG
hOT
HOT
Update
Love it
Love their heart to heart convo at the beginning
Can't wait for the next part

Originally posted by: Craziness123

Safffiii...

Dude I loved it...

It was in one word HOT...
In two words SMOKING HOT...
In three words SUPER SMOKING HOT ...

N soo on...

I mean god I was blushing so bad... I'm literally red right now...
N U Missy, it's because of u...😳

But I can't help but notice that RD dint reply to her I love you...

I hope it isn't something bad...!! Cross Fingers And Toes..🤣

Update ASAP...

Just dieing to read more...

Love
Guess My Name..😆