SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Randhir will forgive her right. Hope so. Any way nice twist. love the update and waiting for the next update.

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Sonali Shivkumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Oh my god !!!

look who is backkk

yayyy !!!!!!

2 chapters in a row

this is definitely a treat for me !!

damn so much happened in these two chapters

loving it !!

keep going

thankfully she didnt marry sameeer

so hope for sandhir :)

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

did i mention that i love you ???

okay i did

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: jhumki1977
amazing,,,i just love all the shades of Randhir that you create...PM me when u update again.

I try to PM everyone but I usually miss those who haven't liked the first post of the first page of this topic! Make sure you do that, and you'll 100% always receive a PM from me when I update!

Thank you! =D

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: kri1

Team Saffi!!!!

Okay, there are two parts to this. first, reaction to the 😳 sweetest reply yet and second, on the chapter.

Part 1

"Kri, it has been declared now that YOU are undoubtedly one of the most brilliant reviewers on this forum. Your review was so intense yaar. 😆"

Speechless... I am promoted to a brilliant reviewer! Yaaar *khushi ki aansu*

Haha! Thanks Saffidi! Hehe... I just love Sandhir and reading... and both of it combined is cherry on the top.

Really?!?!!? You wait for my reviews... 😳 (you have no idea how huge my smile is) 😃😃... yaar, *khushi ki aansu* hahaha! no, seriously, that was the sweetest thing! you wait for my reviews and you feel like not posting because you want to see my review! AAAWWWHHH! 😳😃🤗

"You'll get to know soon, but Randhir doesn't even believe it. 😆 They haven't done it yet, but they WILL eventually... LOL. If that makes you keep reading the fic, then I'll tell you right now that they will have sex some time in this story. Okay, I gave away tooo much. "

^ THIS PART! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!😆... this sounds like I am a creepy😕 person! ahahahah😆!
But naw yaar, what I meant by that part about them doing it... is that Randhir was in so much pain. I felt like that if they would have done it, then he would have those memories at least. That's what I meant!!! hahahaha!😆
But then I said, you kept it real though. Because honestly, any girl would want that her boyfriend be responsible in those types of situations and tell her that it's dumb to do it just because she doesn't want to loose him or whatever. So I basically reasoned it through and thought, 'no the way you kept it was best because they are real and if none of the separation happened, the way Randhir handled it was the way it should have been. And since your writing is perfect, you did it that way!😃
But no yaar, making them do it isn't what keeps me reading this.😲... you know that too! 😆... It's your awesome writing yaar!!!! 👏👏👏

Hahahaha! You said team Kri!!! *khushi ka aasu...* ahahahah! This is adorbs! 😳😳

Part 2

WWWHATTT! SANYU?!?!!? She didn't get married! YAYAYAY!
You know, deep down... I felt like you wouldn't have made them get married. It's just too heartbreaking. And deep down, you also know that I would have killed you! 😆

But yaar, Sanyu's choice of her mom over Randhir was tough. And Randhir's gonna understand it. Eventually!😉

GOSH GOSH GOSH! This just revealed the purpose for the climax... it all makes sense yaar...

you smart gal. every small detail that you wrote in the last chapter is somehow conveyed and proven wrong in this one. 😉😲 you knew exactly how each of those details would play in this chapter...

That's a sign of a perfect writer!👏👏👏

YAAAR CHAPTER 10! NOW NOW NOW!

Okay, Team Kri,

I'll reply part by part too.

Part One:

It's great you commented on this chapter quickly because that means you'll get the next chapter soon. I love that you love Sandhir and reading, because it gives me more incentive to write more Sandhir, because that means there's always one guaranteed reader! Yeeeup, I wait for your reviews which is why I said it was a good thing that you reviewed this chapter fast! Maybe a bad thing for me though, because I have to write it... oh no... haha just kidding. I was itching to write the next chapter, but last night it got too late. 😳

HAHA omg, Randhir would have the memories of sleeping with Sanyu when all he wants to do is forget her?! That would be intense. Well... he'll be able to turn to those memories soon, if he gets hurt again. Maybe it would be good for Sanyu's memories. 😆

I'm glad you liked that part from like... 3 chapters ago, and I'm glad you keep reading this fic! You're just the sweetest, most adorable, best reviewer in the world! 🤗

Alright Team Kri, replying to Part Two now.

Part Two:

Oh I needed to dodge your bullet so I didn't let her get married. 🤣 No but seriously, I didn't want this fic to get overly complicated with her marrying Sameer, it wasn't necessary. 😆

Yeah, I know right, I think it's a very realistic scenario, where people listen to their parents about who they should marry, but Sanyu regretted her decision really quickly and tried to contact him. Right now, Randhir doesn't want to be associated with "coward Sanyukta" anymore, so let's see what changes that. 😆

You flatter me SO MUCH! You're the perfect reviewer. I LOVE YOU! Chapter 10 is coming soon Team Kri! 🤗

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: kri1

THERE IS NO IDEA! HAHAHAHAAH! 😆 ... i'll kill you! hahaha! jk! but you know it!

No he doesn't have a wife or family, now spare me. 😆

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: ammi22
Randhir will forgive her right. Hope so. Any way nice twist. love the update and waiting for the next update.

This fic has a happy ending, so probably. Thank you! 😛

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty
Oh my god !!!
look who is backkk
yayyy !!!!!!
2 chapters in a row
this is definitely a treat for me !!
damn so much happened in these two chapters
loving it !!
keep going
thankfully she didnt marry sameeer
so hope for sandhir :)

Thank you thank you thank you! I love reading your views on the chapter! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yes, SanDhir all the way! 😆