SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sanyu really disappointed me.. She reallyy... I knw she luvs her mom..bt hw can she even think that randhir itni jaldi sab bhool jayega??
Btw awesum update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Sanyu really disappointed me.. She reallyy... I knw she luvs her mom..bt hw can she even think that randhir itni jaldi sab bhool jayega??
Btw awesum update



Thank you! Yes Sanyukta thought that Randhir would easily forget four years of pain after all of this. Sanyukta hurt him a lot more than she realizes. She thinksthat just by apologizing, it'll be alright, but she'll now realize how wrong she is. Randhir might have loved her a little too blindly in the past, but he won't be so easy on her now. 😆
Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg itna kuch ho gaya...

Lekin don't tel me ke rd move on kar gaya


Has he a wife and family...

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update yar but late update... :( so emotional i cant see like that both sandhir...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg itna kuch ho gaya...

Lekin don't tel me ke rd move on kar gaya


Has he a wife and family...



LOL move on? Wife? Family? Thanks for the idea. 😆 Just kidding. You'll see soon. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima209

amazing update yar but late update... :( so emotional i cant see like that both sandhir...



Late? I updated in one day this time! 😛 Thanks! Don't worry, they'll sort it out eventually.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing,,,i just love all the shades of Randhir that you create...PM me when u update again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just loved ur ff.. Awesome it is..😃
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar



Kri, it has been declared now that YOU are undoubtedly one of the most brilliant reviewers on this forum. Your review was so intense yaar. 😆

On a serious note, thank you so, so, so much! Reading your reviews always brightens my day. I always look forward to reading them, everytime I post. Sometimes I want to refrain from posting a new chapter when I'm on a posting spree just because I want to wait for your review!

Yeah, some parts of this FF can be quite filmy (just because I can't help it man), but I try to keep it as real as possible. Has Sanyu kissed Sameer? You'll get to know soon, but Randhir doesn't even believe it. 😆 They haven't done it yet, but they WILL eventually... LOL. If that makes you keep reading the fic, then I'll tell you right now that they will have sex some time in this story. Okay, I gave away tooo much.

Thank you! TEAM KRI! 😳


Team Saffi!!!!

Okay, there are two parts to this. first, reaction to the 😳 sweetest reply yet and second, on the chapter.

Part 1

"Kri, it has been declared now that YOU are undoubtedly one of the most brilliant reviewers on this forum. Your review was so intense yaar. 😆"

Speechless... I am promoted to a brilliant reviewer! Yaaar *khushi ki aansu*

Haha! Thanks Saffidi! Hehe... I just love Sandhir and reading... and both of it combined is cherry on the top.

Really?!?!!? You wait for my reviews... 😳 (you have no idea how huge my smile is) 😃😃... yaar, *khushi ki aansu* hahaha! no, seriously, that was the sweetest thing! you wait for my reviews and you feel like not posting because you want to see my review! AAAWWWHHH! 😳😃🤗

"You'll get to know soon, but Randhir doesn't even believe it. 😆 They haven't done it yet, but they WILL eventually... LOL. If that makes you keep reading the fic, then I'll tell you right now that they will have sex some time in this story. Okay, I gave away tooo much. "

^ THIS PART! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!😆... this sounds like I am a creepy😕 person! ahahahah😆!
But naw yaar, what I meant by that part about them doing it... is that Randhir was in so much pain. I felt like that if they would have done it, then he would have those memories at least. That's what I meant!!! hahahaha!😆
But then I said, you kept it real though. Because honestly, any girl would want that her boyfriend be responsible in those types of situations and tell her that it's dumb to do it just because she doesn't want to loose him or whatever. So I basically reasoned it through and thought, 'no the way you kept it was best because they are real and if none of the separation happened, the way Randhir handled it was the way it should have been. And since your writing is perfect, you did it that way!😃
But no yaar, making them do it isn't what keeps me reading this.😲... you know that too! 😆... It's your awesome writing yaar!!!! 👏👏👏

Hahahaha! You said team Kri!!! *khushi ka aasu...* ahahahah! This is adorbs! 😳😳

Part 2

WWWHATTT! SANYU?!?!!? She didn't get married! YAYAYAY!
You know, deep down... I felt like you wouldn't have made them get married. It's just too heartbreaking. And deep down, you also know that I would have killed you! 😆

But yaar, Sanyu's choice of her mom over Randhir was tough. And Randhir's gonna understand it. Eventually!😉

GOSH GOSH GOSH! This just revealed the purpose for the climax... it all makes sense yaar...

you smart gal. every small detail that you wrote in the last chapter is somehow conveyed and proven wrong in this one. 😉😲 you knew exactly how each of those details would play in this chapter...

That's a sign of a perfect writer!👏👏👏

YAAAR CHAPTER 10! NOW NOW NOW!




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar



LOL move on? Wife? Family? Thanks for the idea. 😆 Just kidding. You'll see soon. 😛



THERE IS NO IDEA! HAHAHAHAAH! 😆 ... i'll kill you! hahaha! jk! but you know it!

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