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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Needless to say! Congrats and you definately deserve an applause!
The story if so gripping. I wish to write so much more, and will try to do that ahead.

Right now, I'm waiting for the Update. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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⭐️ Congratulations for the new thread ⭐️

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Can't wait for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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Part 27

Germany

A gush of emotions ran down her body as she saw Arnav inside the house with his bags and hugging Shashi who just greeted him for coming here.Prachi was standing right beside Khushi staring at her and then at Arnav not believing he was here.

Shashi: Had a safe flight ?

Arnav : Yeah Mr Gupta. Just little tired. Thats all

He moved his gaze on her and she passed him a warm smile which just made all that tiredness go out of the door.

Shashi: Khushi, just show him your room and get him settled. Go.

Khushi had butterflies in her stomach as if this was the first time she was meeting some prospective groom finalised for her. She didnt wait to show him her room, to be more precise, their room. No words exchanged. It was just as formal as it could be and Prachi was watching all that.

Khushi showed him the room and kept his bags aside. He stretched his arms taking off the coat and then saw his Son Arsh sleeping peacefully in the craddle. He couldnt ignore him. He swinged the craddle kissing his son once on his forehead which Khushi kept admiring him doing and the moment he turned to her, she diverted her gaze to the closet for taking out a Towel so that he can freshen up and get some rest.

She was wearing a loose white salwar like she did in Delhi too at night. That made it easier for her to feed Arsh too when required. Without making any sound of his footsteps he came behind her and wrapped his arms securedly around her wait.

It needed enormous self control for Khushi to not react at his innocent touch on her waist. She could feel desires bubbling up inside her. Electric sparks of his touch crackling her skin forming goose bumps all over her arms . He realised her state and moved back breaking the most needed hug which could assure him that he was finally with his wife and Son, in Germany. The moment she lost his touch, she turned around to see what made him detach from her. He seemed to be smirking looking at her arms and then her face.

Arnav: Fever mujhe hai and goosebumps tumhe aa rahe hai Khushi. Isnt that strange? (I have fever and you are getting goosebumps. Isnt that strange?)

So he was in a playful mood or was he hiding his romantic side not to make her feel uneasy?

Khushi: Aap hi se aaya hoga warna hum ab tak theek hi the. (It must have transferred from you because I was fine yet)

Making an effortless movement, he leaned in, she closed her eyes involuntarily taking in whatever he wished to give her today. This feeling was very powerful and unexplainable. His hot lips touched her forehead for a kiss which lasted for some seconds. There was nothing else he could do at the moment to show her how much he missed her in these 2 weeks.

The door knocked and they opened their eyes turning behind just to check who witnessed this and surprisingly saw Prachi standing there with some medicine. Khushi moved towards her.

Prachi: Dad gave these medicines for him.

Khushi: Thanks.

Prachi: Is Arsh sleeping ?

Khushi: Yea. He didnt even wake up at his father's touch. Seems like he is in deep sleep.

Prachi: I am in the kitchen.

Khushi: I will join you in a minute. Lets cook together.

Prachi left and Khushi was coming back inside when Arnav gestured her to close the door. She didnt understand it at first but when she did she stopped and asked him why.

Arnav : Some people have no manners.

Khushi understood whom he was pointing at.

Khushi: She had knocked.

Arnav: Thats right. Even after witnessing what we were doing, she knocked.

Khushi: She got your medicines Arnav. You should be thankful.

Arnav: There was no hurry. I am sure Mr Gupta wouldnt have told her to pass it to me right now. He knows we need time to settle here.

Khushi sighed and pushed him towards the bathroom.

Khushi : Your voice will wake up my baby and then he wont let me cook. Go and get your shower , I am in the kitchen.

He chuckled seeing the way she was changing the topic. She can never hear bad for Prachi even when that same girl was the reason for all her miseries. He stopped at the bathroom door.

Arnav: So. Uhh. Just Arsh and Mr Gupta were missing me? Nobody else?

A red blush appeared on her cheeks as she heard that question but as usual she knew how to hide her feelings and demonstrate them at the right time. She didnt respond him but the blush did it all for her. She hurridly left the room and Arnav had nothing more to expect. He had already witnessed a change in her when she asked him to come to Germany and today after meeting her, touching her, kissing her, talking to her it was clear she had the same feelings brewing inside just like he had.

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Dinner

Shashi: I scolded Khushi for calling you all the way Arnav. She knew you had fever, if she would have told me, I would come to drop her myself in India.

Arnav tasted the salad and then his eyes scanned his wife sitting opposite with Prachi. Arsh was awake by now and started crying in the room. Before Khushi could get up, Arnav did and gestured her to finish the food.

Arnav: I am done, I will see him. Finish yours.

Shashi was impressed and Khushi was only speeding to spend her time with her husband and son together. Prachi saw that.

Prachi: He is not running away Khushi. Eat slow.

Khushi: He wont be able to handle Arsh for long, I know. Especially when Arsh is hungry.

She gulped the water down and wiping her face with the napkin, she excused her father and sister and went to the bedroom to feed Arsh, this time definately locking the door behind her which only made Prachi's heart burn. Arnav had taken Arsh in arms and was trying to put him back to sleep but he was hungry and that made him scream for his mother to come and feed him as soon as she can.

Khushi: He is hungry. Give him to me.

Arnav placed Arsh in her lap and she was about to unzip her dress when she realised her husband was there too. Hearts beated rapidly when they looked at each other but the baby's screams were increasing.

Arnav: I will be out.

She caught his hand before he could go away.

Khushi: You dont have to Arnav. Just. Just be here. With me.

He felt on top of the world today. This showed she had started accepting their relationship now. There was nothing she wished to hide from him just like he wanted her to do. He tucked her hair behind the ear and sat beside her as she reached her hand behind to unzip her dress. Arsh was quiet and so was his father with Khushi's sudden acts. He pulled the Dupatta to cover her front which made her calm down her breathes and feel easy for feeding her son before her husband who like a gentleman never stared anywhere except in her eyes. Arsh got what he wanted and started sucking milk while Khushi and Arnav kept admiring each other's face. He caressed her cheeks with the back of his fingers as tears dropped from her eyes.

Khushi: I am sorry Arnav. Sorry for making you wait for this moment. I dont know what I was thinking. The conditions of the Payback and your sudden change towards our relationship throughout my pregnancy months just made me confused if I ever had to give our legal marriage a chance or not. It was normal for us to feel for each other because we stayed under one roof and the baby was a medium which got us close. I thought only this is the reason we want to be with each other even after Arsh was born, thats all. But when I came here, I realised just staying together and Arsh were not the only reason that holded our relationship. There was more to it. Which probably I never tried to understand.

Arnav wiped her tears.

Arnav: It was Love Khushi. The love which eventually developed between us binded us together forever. I know just a Sorry wont be enough to compensate all the ill I did with you. You were never at fault but I didnt care. I asked your womb for giving me my child who once your sister killed. Today when I think of that day, I feel, was it even necessary? Wasnt that cruel from my end to make an innocent girl like you suffer so much? I overtook your father's business, made him homeless until you agreed to stay with me in Shantivan. I introduced you as my Mistress and broke your engagement with Karan. Will I ever get a forgiveness for those sins Khushi? You are still too kind enough to feel for me, but will I be to face that almighty God you believe in and earn forgivness? I dont think so. What will I tell Arsh what his reason of birth was? Will he accept he was not because of our love but our revenge? His existance in this world was not by his parents love making but some scientific method? I will be guilty my entire life Khushi for doing all this with you and your family. Only by staying with you I realised what wrong I was doing. I cannot change those events, I cannot go into the past and reverse my doings, but all I want to do right now is change our future. I am ready to face any ignorance and hate you throw upon me if you dont wish to accept our relationship. I will wait for my entire life to give you my share of love which I can never think of giving anyone else. And if you wish to give me chance, I want to prove a best husband to you and erase all those hateful days between us , showering my love.

She had no reply. Being a girl who was tortured and forced to become a mother without even a proper marriage , was hard for her to accept such changed realities. Arnav was wrong right from the beginning but she had noticed the changes in him as the days of her pregnancy passed. She had seen his hate getting changed to love, she had witnessed his care and concern not only for their baby but also for her. Forgivness was still far off those days but gradually she started accepting him. It was not a one day change , it took months for her to understand his past, his insecurities and notice the love developing in his heart for their relationship. She had agreed to stay back with him for Arsh after he was born but she failed to supress the little love growing inside her for this same man who was her destroyer. He may have made her go through such a huge payback but was he alone at fault? Wasnt she equally responsible?

Khushi: Sometimes I think if I am wrong to fall in love with you Arnav. Thinking from a women's perspective, how can I be ready to share my soul and body with the same man who snatched it from me once for fulfiling his payback? But then when I thought deeply I realised I was wrong too. It was me who insulted you in your office after you took over my father's business. It was me who would have denied becoming your mistress taking Karan's help but my self Pride came in between. I wanted to fight back with you and retain my dignity even if it meant staying with you under one roof. I could have denied you for giving you a baby but I didnt do it since I thought of repaying my Sister's deeds which probably was not needed. And though I agreed to give you a child but on my terms of artifical process, I liked when you didnt force on having it naturally. That was the first step wherin I could see goodness in you. You got innumerous attempts to force me if you desired my body but you never touched me against my will. That quality in you attracted me to the same man who was the reaon of my pain. The world may not understand or agree to our views Arnav. But I know, we both are equally at fault in this entire theory of Paying back, its not just you. We are no Gods to always do right and think right. We are humans who learn from their mistakes. I learnt from mine and you from yours. I dont wish to continue it further and make it more complicated. You and I deserve to be happy henceforth. I dont care what others feel about it, they probably can never understand the phase that Arnav and Khushi share. I want to accept you as my husband Arnav , not just because of Arsh, but because the only wrong person whom I met , is the right one for me. I love you.

He had no words to add up. Everything she said touched his heart. He kissed her knuckles joining their foreheads. None of them wanted to disturb Arsh's hunger and this was the least they could do to show each other how much they needed to embrace and feel loved. They stayed like that for a while until both had confirmed Arsh was full and needed their attention. He was holding his dad's shirt , playing with its button . Arnav took him in arms while Khushi neated her dress, zipping it back.

Khushi: I will assist Prachi in the kitchen and then come back. You lie down with Arsh, you must be tired.

Arnav: Not anymore Khushi. I am fine. Come back soon to us.

Khushi smiled and left the room. Today finally Arnav could take a sigh of relief. His wife was ready to accept their marriage and stay with him forever, not because he pressurised her, but because she too had realised his importance in her life and especially they both had Love bloomed between them which could never allow them to think of further seperation.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome update
Awww such a beautiful
confession 😳😳😳 nd looks like
someone is burning 😆😆😆
can't wait to read more 😊
Yay am first 🥳
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
😊 😊
Wonderful update tintin...
atlast kushi realised her love for arnav...
The confession was simple and beautiful...
Waiting for their wedding bells...
Edited by pravallika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Wow fynally u update long awating update

awesome update

lol seen prachi face is really funny

fynally arshi talk n clear all their MU

hope now prachi dont creat any problem for arshi

loved it

egerly waiting for next update

continue soon
Edited by arshirupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
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Edited.

I loved the update.

Arnav and Khushi together in Germany. And their intimacy is growing slowly.

Lived how Prachi got J and Arnav's response to her disturbing them with the knock 😉 .

The best part of the update though was their communication about their past, present and future.

Loved how Khushi put it that somewhere she to is responsible as she could have easily refused him but she preferred paying back for her sisters mistake and in all this fell in live with the good Arnav hidden behind the cruel and rude ASR.

Like she said the only wrong man she met in her life became the one man meant for her.

Glad that Arnav made it clear that there being together now and further is because he loves her and not for any pay back or the baby.

Khushi rightfully said forgiveness is not anyway nearer but acceptance is. Very happy they both accepted there live and heading toward a future together full of love.
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I was waiting for an update yaaar...
wow lovely update...
will see what will happen next...
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wonderful ..at last they will be husband and wife in true sense

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