FF: PAYBACK ~ THREAD 6 ~ Sneak Peak of Part 30 (16/06)

Payback

Thread 6?????

This is the first fiction of mine which reached Thread 6 😆. Heehhehehehee 😆

Thanks everyone for your lovely response on this fiction. I hope to keep you glued to this plot even further. 😳

When I started this fiction never did I think it will reach so many threads and will be liked to this extent. One of the most Liked / Commented story of mine amongst all. Thanks so much everyone. Hopfeully I have done justice here to both the Protagonist. This Story is very close to my heart and even though the actual PAYBACK is over, we will see some Romance coming in Arshi's way now. I may end this Fiction in some 4 - 5 parts.

Index

Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

Thread 4

Thread 5

Part 27

Part 28

Sneak Peak of Part 29

Part 29

Sneak Peak of Part 30

Thread 7

i was waiting for dear tintin'snext post then planned to res

yippiieee...i was waiting for you to open new thread...

Res congratsss fr new thread
Waiting fr update

Congrats on new thread dear...
Waiting eagerly...

wai8in for next part n congo for the new thread

wow thread 6!!!

Just two weeks separation and pay back is over?

Arnav forced Khushi to be mother of his child in the name of payback. By doing this he ruined almost all the relationships of Khushi, he ruined her reputation by let people calling her as his mistress, married to her forcefully just because he did not want people to call his child bas***d...what Arnav had to lose in this relationship? Nothing? Khushi lost everything. For me two weeks separation is not enough as payback from Arnav.

But as Khushi is also desparate to have sex with the person who ruined her life. She become despo cheap girl who cannot conteol her desire, who has no self respect...she behaves like a mistress of Arnav who can only think about sex rather than her reputation, dreams, selfrespect than why these two weeks separation? It was not needed. You could have made her forgive Arnav and get her into his bed as they both were desparate to have sex like you were to write romance between them...

This story was close to my heart too but it gas lost the charm after Khushi's delivery... All I can see that flirty despo Arnav who wants to have sex with Khushi and same ferlibg from Khushi...then why two separation? What Arnav realised in these two weeks which he did not realised before? What Khushi realised which she has not before? Nothing...they both wanted to sex before and even after two weekd is the same desire...I DID NOT LIKE THE WAY YOU RUINED KHUSHI'S CHARACTER BY SHOWING HER HAVING DESIRES TO HAVE SEX WITH SAME PERSON WHO RUINED HER LIFE...It was too early for her to have those feelings for Arnav...