ARSHI FF: PAYBACK ~ THREAD 3 ~ Part 19 (12/03)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Payback


Thread 3?????

I am Already on Cloud 9 because this is the first fiction of mine which reached Thread 3 today . Heehhehehehee 😆

Thanks everyone for your lovely response on this fiction. I hope to keep you glued to this plot even further. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sneak Peak of Part 15

She was still unconscious and Arnav had not moved away from her and his baby since the time he had got her back in his room, away from that sister of hers who was the reason for her sufferings. How could she try brainwashing her mind at this stage? Prachi killed her first baby which was his child and now she was punished by this unknown force which they termed to be God who snatched her second child again before its birth. This surely doesn't give her any right to come and spoil Khushi's happiness and his child from her.

He caressed Khushi's cheeks with his thumb wiping off the stains of her dried tears and then something took over his mind and heart. He leaned on her and kissed her forehead once.

Seemed like he had no intentions to move his lips off her skin after that. She breathed hard with this sudden contact of his lips on her and then relaxed again when he moved back.

Prachi who was standing at the door from past few minutes couldn't believe what she just saw and felt. This man was getting tender in his actions with Khushi. Has this contract marriage between them changed anything in their relationship? Most importantly will this change remain forever in his actions even after the baby was born and handed back to him? Will he allow Khushi to leave him and their child and walk out of his life? All these questions were necessary for Prachi to get answers from Arnav because even if she hated what he did with her sister, she wished to know if by any chance he had plans to make things better ahead.

Edited by tintin_ruble - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What exactly is Prachi's intentions?
Waiting to read the convo. between Prachi and Arnav.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is prachi looking out for khushi or what?
Hope khushi n her baby r fine.
Looking forward to the next part :)
Also congrats on the new thread! 👏😃
Edited by Swaran13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What exactly is prachi's intention? 😕
Update soon..
Edited by ..Neha.. - 11 years ago
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Congrts on new thread
nice teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really gripping the sneak peak.. amazed.. now arnav is confused about his own feelings towards khushi, and khushi has not echoed any such feelings whatso ever towards him. she is just hell bent to payback what her father and sister did to him.. i think she may just quietly walk away...
nice update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why is prachi eager to know??
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eagerly waiting for the update

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