Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#531

aww...that is not enough for me...need to read more of arnav and khushi...was arnav there in sheesh mahal, when khushi had come there as a child...

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#532

hope they escape soon superb

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Khushi as a child has used the wardrobe as her hiding place which leads to the estate through backside gate in the garden . Since its a palace their are many hideouts which is an advantage to Arnav-khushi .

khushi has told her life history to Arnav . For now they are safe

Shyam has a master , for whom he is working . Some antique jewellery is in the possession of Shyam .

mystery continues

nice

loved it

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#534

too good..may b Kushi's parents were friends of Arnav's parents

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#535

That was wonderful update...

Poor Kushi, her past was painful... Glad that Arshi found solace in each other's company...

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#536

love the update.

but im not a hindi speaker. nor can i read hindi fluently.

So the hindi words in one paragraph while she was talking about getting in the secret place is a blur.

pls do consider writing future updates in full english or provide translations for easier understanding.

hope you will consider this! 😊

cant wait to read more. 😳

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: SilentShadow
love the update.
but im not a hindi speaker. nor can i read hindi fluently.
So the hindi words in one paragraph while she was talking about getting in the secret place is a blur.

pls do consider writing future updates in full english or provide translations for easier understanding.
hope you will consider this! 😊

cant wait to read more. 😳

My apologies, SilentShadow! I do write english translation for hindi dialogues in brackets in all my updates. Somehow missed it in this post - will edit the part 1 right now with the translations.

Thank you for bringing it to my notice! If you don't mind, check back in 5 minutes to read the updated post.

Hugs,

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#538

interesting update..!!!!!11

so i guess khushi's parents were killed by someone who is related to sheesh mahal..!!!!!1

she share her past with arnav...!!!!1

and shaym is after that jewelry or that diamond..!!!!!

pls update next part soon..!!!!!

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#539

so Arnav's and Khushi's past is connected.

What's this Shyam up to now? Is he after the diamonds or is it something more?

And what why is that phone call so important to him?

I'm loving this story!

Can't wait for part 2!

Thanks for the PM!

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

My apologies, SilentShadow! I do write english translation for hindi dialogues in brackets in all my updates. Somehow missed it in this post - will edit the part 1 right now with the translations.

Thank you for bringing it to my notice! If you don't mind, check back in 5 minutes to read the updated post.

Hugs,
IS

Thank you so much for making the changes!

I appreciate it. 🤗