Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Thanks for the update and PM.

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Engrossing update Inspired.

Intriguing intermix of their parents death.. both at the same time..you do complete justice to it ..

and forgot to add last time..

your taste for these art pieces is impeccable..😊

that pen earlier and now the necklace.. truly looks a royal lineage...

enjoyed much..

oh yes you can expect this soul sis to read promptly..😊

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mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Hope they bothare safe... loved it

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#544

So something big did happen on the night of khushi's parent's accident. Khushi's past is entwined with arnav's past & family.

Wonder if khushi will feel betrayed when she realises that the man for whom she risked even her life was not honest even about his name.

Thanks for the pm

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Wow, IS! What a terrific update, my heart was beating so fast as I was reading it,

We now know that Khushi's past and Arnav's are linked, a fact that Arnav has worked out, though he, like us, does not know how they are linked.

Linking their pasts was such a clever stroke of narrative technique! The structuring of the narrative is such a large part of the thrill this story gives me each time I read an update! That is what sets this story apart from others.
I've noticed that my heart starts beating faster by the time I have finished reading an update!😃

Oh and your vivid description of places and things! As terrific as your narrative technique. The description of the necklace was as brilliant as the diamonds in it.😃

Edited by Japonica - 10 years ago

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#546

new ff liked it :( totally different and lovely one

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Khushi's past is somehow linked to Arnav's.

The story gets more interesting with every update as the mystery deepens.

Will be waiting to read the next part of this chapter.

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docs

@docs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Oh wow the mystery continues... Cant wait to read the next update...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

loved the way Khushi let him enter into her world without even knowing him... beautiful ArShi moments... so much more to know yet... waiting for it to unfold step by step... loving it... thanks for the PM...