Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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Rattyswami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

great update..

i'm glad your Anjali isn't a blind as the one in the show..

she can finally spot the inconsistencies and the facade behind that snakwa😡

just HATE Shyam😡

He's probably the most hated character in all the TV history😆

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Recently found this story and am really liking the concept.

Anajali is an impressive woman here...this is the woman I wanted to see in IPK. She is able to intuitively pick IPK that something is not right about Shyam and able to logically assess a situation and see the cracks in his mask.

The picture of Arnav and her childhood where he listened to her dreams and wishes and gifted her the pen was very emotional and again captured the brother sister bond perfectly.

Looking forward to more.

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aafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Just read the story. Really liked it..., loved Hw strong arnV is

Please continue

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

inspired soul,

a young woman pondering the fate of a man dear to her and wondering about the man she loves. very nice chapter, anjali you see very interestingly... yes, her mother's experience might have taught her the value of being independent and having her own life, in fact, we can't control our fears sometimes and the reactions to them can be very telling.

i like the way you have written her character. and her love for her brother is possibly her primary emotional tie. her husband is very important, but she has decorated that relationship with what should be, she seems to still be at a distance from it, it is still not deep in her belly a gut thing, like her relationship with chote.

the pen... very very very nice. and what it says about her and her life as a child and her and her brother's very bro sis but extremely intense relationship.

waiting for the next. thanks for this one.

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

I'm so happy to see a strong Anjali, who doesnot trust her husband blindly.

Waiting to see how she will react to Shyam's implicztion in the abduction of her beloved brother.

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

A Thank You Note to my wonderful readers!

Your as usual late writer asks for your forgiveness - dil se! Had more unexpected guests, and that disrupted my already crazy schedule.
But I am almost done writing Part 2.
Iam kind of afraid to promise this time, but keeping my fingers crossed and hoping to post by tuesday evening.

I cant tell you how overwhelmed I am with your wonderful response for Part 1 of Chapter 7! I was very apprehensive about a post entirely dedicated to Anjali. But this was something planned from the beginning and an integral part of my story. Anjali had to be defined before bringing Shyam into focus, and both these characters are very relevant to Arnav and Khushi's present.

Anjali in Submerged! took a lot of thinking on my part to craft. I know I am satisfied with it as a writer, but to see my readers understanding and appreciating it gives me a big boost of confidence. Thank you for liking her!

And I am very happy that you liked Arnav's gift to Anjali - I did a lot of google research to find it 😃 As unique as their bro-sis bond is, I wanted the gift to be a thoughtful one too. A gift that underlines her past dreams, and connects now in the present to her character.

Well, enough said about Anjali - I know there is only so much everyone can bear about her, thanks to the unfortunate way she was portrayed in the show.
And to reward all of you for your patience, Part 2 is all about Arnav and Khushi, and is really, really looong!😊

See you soon,
IS