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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

IS that was a deeply ruminative take on Anajli. Wonderful attention to detail and how extremely well crafted your characters are in this tale. She has been noticing the gaps and holes.. intelligent woman.. those childhood memories.. curbed by dadi.. of chote reading while she watched movies.. in fact the entire chapter..beautiful...

And do I see a hint of potential matchmaking since unknown to Anjali her prayer has been answered and a new girl has entered her chotes life.. Reading this chapter almost makes me wish i was writing an FF of my own...

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Awesome update waiting for part 2

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Lovely update, im glad Anjali can sense that there is something wrong in her marriage, her character in the series had be baffled as how she never suspected him, no matter how many times he asked for money, or made a quick exit , not to mention those out of town business trips. She brought her brother up, yet she was portrayed in the show as the forever forgiving pati pameswer wife.
Chotay loves his sister no doubt wow that's a pen and a half, yet it probably still takes the same refills as a normal monteblsnc, im just jealous, being a pen person myself, add to that rose gold and my birthstone of diamonds..a

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Very interesting. Though the characters are same,with new additions, the story is more realistic and logical. Read all parts today and would love to have pms.

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Inspired, tight hugs my friend for that very well knit update, crisp characterization of Anjali, how we all wanted/ expected her to be. A complete woman she felt.. not a single nuance for a smart, sensitive and supportive wife and sister is being missed. Absolutely wholesome writing..

Aww the Mont blanc pens.. no idea about this limited edition.. but a classy gift for his sayani di from her connoisseur brother..

great update IS .. look forward...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

wow... i m in love with this Anjali... now thats how the sister of Arnav Singh Raizada ought to be... superb update... waiting to read more... thanks for the pm...

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Very well written IS👏

First I love the pen.A wonderful gift from a brother to his sister.😊 Very sentimental attachment to it.

Now I absolutely adore the characterization of Anjali in this story.Very well portrayed and balanced it with the elements we want to see.

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

i know this chapter was very imp n the way u canvassed anjali's character, its nice... but i seriously cannot take a whole chapter on Anjali n her monologue... hope u dont take my comment negatively...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Chap 7 Part 1

I like this Anjali...in fact i like her a lot. She has a good set of heads on her shoulder and i love the way she has lead her life so far. In spite of the fact that her childhood emotionally scared very badly she lead her life very positively. Its heartbreaking to realise that she placed her trust in a man who didn't deserve it at all.

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Inspired ... Hugs my friend for such a beautiful narration ... You gave us an Anjali that should have been. So beautifully crafted ... Your writing as quietly, strongly elegant as the woman you are describing... My favorite parts ... Princess Grace pen ... Exactly the kind of gift Arvav would have given her ... Quietly graceful, feminine with a steely inner strength and deep intellect that she should have had. A true woman of substance. A doer ... Thank you so much for the Khalil Gibran verse. Read it years ago ... How poetically he describe absolute necessity of individuality in a union ... Inspired a beautifully constructed, intelligently characterized and once again, a quietly restrained piece ... I love what you do with words ... They flow like a quite stream ... A smooth silky flow ... A kind of reading that is effortless ... A big applause my friend, for your exceptional talent ! I also loved that you gave us a Shaym who was there ... Was he always the snake ? Or was boredom with domesticity and his greed that make him take such drastic steps ... Hard to believe that a person can be so two faced but that what he was .. Looking forward to the next part ...

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