Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 35

IS that was a deeply ruminative take on Anajli. Wonderful attention to detail and how extremely well crafted your characters are in this tale. She has been noticing the gaps and holes.. intelligent woman.. those childhood memories.. curbed by dadi.. of chote reading while she watched movies.. in fact the entire chapter..beautiful...

Awesome update waiting for part 2

Lovely update, im glad Anjali can sense that there is something wrong in her marriage, her character in the series had be baffled as how she never suspected him, no matter how many times he asked for money, or made a quick exit , not to mention those out of town business trips. She brought her brother up, yet she was portrayed in the show as the forever forgiving pati pameswer wife.
Chotay loves his sister no doubt wow that's a pen and a half, yet it probably still takes the same refills as a normal monteblsnc, im just jealous, being a pen person myself, add to that rose gold and my birthstone of diamonds..a

Very interesting. Though the characters are same,with new additions, the story is more realistic and logical. Read all parts today and would love to have pms.

Inspired, tight hugs my friend for that very well knit update, crisp characterization of Anjali, how we all wanted/ expected her to be. A complete woman she felt.. not a single nuance for a smart, sensitive and supportive wife and sister is being missed. Absolutely wholesome writing..

wow... i m in love with this Anjali... now thats how the sister of Arnav Singh Raizada ought to be... superb update... waiting to read more... thanks for the pm...

i know this chapter was very imp n the way u canvassed anjali's character, its nice... but i seriously cannot take a whole chapter on Anjali n her monologue... hope u dont take my comment negatively...

Chap 7 Part 1