VIRMAN FF : Love To Be With You - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
akka super update
loved it
so virat is staring manvi without any shame nd here manvi is uncomfortable with it
aha i loved it akka
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Realy awsum update dear ur 1st chapter iz realy ☺️ 😳 Omg
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Priya,
very beautiful updatepa😛...
virat went flat on his first sight itself.😳...hihi...not bad...
maanvi,she is such a active girl..
loved the story...
but u should give a big update next time...
dont even think of stopping it..continue soon...
btw,thanks for the pm😊..
Edited by shiningstar77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me waiting eagerly for next part..update soon
Edited by shiningstar77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsmmm .
cntnue soonn & pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
this is good,
you should definitly continue...

and please pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey..
Plzzz plzzz plzzz continue soon
What a great start
Like It.. Lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear update was superb
Lykd it
Plz do continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Virat's p.o.v

I don't know what love meant for others, but according to me, love is the most beautiful inner feelings, it can only happen when a boy and girl who understand abt each other, give up with their own nature.. I had made fun of people who believes in love at first sight.. how could he/she can fall in love, just at 1st sight.. its impossible and will never possible in MY life.. and am waiting for my princess and I would get her soon.. (this s what virat's feels in love)

End of p.o.v

Virat : where are you bhai??

Karan : just 5 mins virat, ll be there..

Virat was waiting for karan for almost half an hour, (its so bore to wait for some one na) ..so he thought to make a coffee for him, as he did, he sat on the couch and started to sip his hand made cofe.. then he heard some noice, no no some sweet sound, he turned to the way of the sound comes.. there he saw a girl, sorry her PRINCESS.. he was totally mesmerized by her beauty.. today all his thought of love at 1st was broken by her.. he started to love her at very 1st moment..

Virat : this girl making me crazy

Next day, its seems to be another day of a lyf.. but it was way more special for someone.. and he s looking for his princess to come as he was in karan's house

Payal : hey virat, what are you doing here?

Virat : nothing much, just waiting for bhai

Payal : oh for bhai!! I thought yu were waiting for someone else..

Virat was embarresed by hearing this and rubbed his neck with a glint of smile in his lips.. here manvi came to payal's to pick her up to college.. she looked upto virat, who was already staring at her.. she was totally irritated by his act.. bt she feels her heart beats faster than normal whenever she felt virat's gaze on her.. days gonna very soon

Virat : karan please!! Make a look whether we get a nice house or a mansion in adam's garden..

Karan : y virat, y don't yu stay here with us?? And btw y yur pressurize me to have a look on adam's garden??.. is there any special reason behind it??

(actually manvi lives in adam's garden)

Virat : n.. no.. no any reason behind it.. people here told that adam's garden such a lovely place to live and full of nature.. (he made a quick excuse, but he was so happy, if he would have been landed near manvi's place)

After 2 hours..

Karan : hey buddy!! I had seen a beautiful house for yu rather I should say as a mansion for yu.. yu know what yur house right next to manvi's house

Virat's face was gloomed with joy.. he was so happy to hear that he gonna live beside her.. so that he ws on cloud nine.

It was afternoon when virat shifts all his necessities into his new house. In thought of seeing manvi, he peeped into her house, but for his disappointment, she was not there.

Virat : hello!! Is anybody here??

Mitali : kaun hai?? (as she said and moved out from kitchen)

Virat : hello aunt!! Its virat here, yur neighbor.

Miatali : oh ya! Come in beta..

Virat : yu house was so beautiful, especially these interior decorations were mind blowing, whose thought were these all? (he knws very well that its all his princess work)

Mitali : it was done by my pyari bachchi.. Btw yur alone here??

Virat : s aunt. I was here alone.. actually my mom and dad were in Chandigarh, they were looking at my family business..

Mitali : oh Chandigarh?? Yu knw beta,there I have a best friend of mine.. hope she does well..

Virat : its ok aunt.. next tym I ll take yu with me, when I go to Chandigarh. And btw wats yur frnd name??

Mitali : vanshika .. vanshika vadhera..

Virat : what????

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I thnk ths s too much to eat yur brains by reading my work.. if yu people like it or not, please leave ur comments here

Edited by priya_nishal - 11 years ago
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