VIRMAN FF : Love To Be With You - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start...
Loved it...
Update soon..
And thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Nice start...
Loved it...
Update soon..
And thanks for the PM...


thanks , wil update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1:

Manvi : Mamma!!! Mamma!!! where are you??

A loud chirpy voice echoed with the sweet sound of birds all over the house..

Mitali : Am here mannu, as she shouted back from kitchen.

Manvi : Thanks god!! yu r here, am leaving now bubye mumma.. while saying ths, she arranged her bag and marched out..

Mitali : Have yur breakfast and go beta

Manvi : No mamma, payal must be waiting for me..

Saying this she stormed out of the house, tuk her scooty and drove to payals house.. since manvi s nt new to payal's family, she knew nook and corner of the house.. so she entered without knocking.. while search of payal, she saw a man of nearly 23 wth handsome look, sipping his coffee.. she engrossed in a thought of who must be he is.. and here tat young man s continuosly staring at her.. which didn't went unnoticed by manvi.

Karan : Hey mannu, come here..

(karan and payal were the siblings)

Manvi : yes' bhaiya, where s payal?

Karan : I think she must be getting ready.. btw meet Mr. Virat, my best buddy, poiting the young man.. and virat, ths s manvi, payal's friend..

But our hero was shamelessly staring at her, manvi felt a hot gaze on her and soon she found its owner.. Manvi waited for payal to come, as soon she came, without wasting another moment, she moved out of the house without looking back at him..bt here virat looking at her until she disappear out of his eyes.. and smiles by himself saying her name "MANVI"

Karan : Hey virat, "where yu are lost my buddy"?? asked in a teasing manner..

virat again smiled and said "no where".

Then they both continued with their business talks..

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How is it???

Good or worse??

should i stop it by here?? i know it s so short, 1st tym na so nervous

Edited by priya_nishal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nice update dear
thanks for the pm
and do continue soon!!!
dont stop this!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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obviously it is good readin ma 1st virman story it was awesum ya luved it continue soon n thx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing Update Dear !!
Virat was gazing manvi ;)
lovely update !!
cont soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice update virat flat on manvi seeing her
first time update soon and continuous
want big update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wow what an update
Fabulous
Amazing
Loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome update..
Loved it...
Awww Virman meet..
Virat likes Manvi...
It was a superrbbb update..
You should continue..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM..

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