Originally posted by: jagrutid
Now where do I start, as ever I love your style of writing the situations you come up with leave the reader just asking for more and all I want to ask you is what happens next????? Does he accept!? The timing he has picked to question her conditions is of such advantage to Khushi, he wants nothing more than to bed his wife and so I think he will say yes BUT.. but then I think again and feel maybe he'll turn back into the more unreasonable ASR and disagree. Not sure..this is why you need to update !!Lol
Even if he agrees, will he keep faithful during the time she is in the USA..? too many questions.
Okay so Khushis conditions were nice and I liked the way ASR asked during foreplay. An idication that he wasn't just blinded by the prospect of sex but very much aware of a deal that he had made. Very much liked that. I actually liked the whole interaction between the two they have some good dynamic both characters. I would like to see how things turn between them if they do go ahead..if he agrees and they consumate then what. Hes not very predictable is he.
Thank you.. look forward to this next one, impatiently !
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