FF: Wedding Scars ~ Thread 3 ~ Part 12 (13/06)

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Amazing update 👏👏

Loved it ⭐️

Now let see arnav will agree on her this last last conditions

Eagerly waiting to read next part 😊

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

wow..check mate Arnav...he is out of moves...he has to accept..ncie update...😊

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

awesome update, love khushi's conditions! what will ASR do!
thanks for the update

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

awesome update.
really loved it.
superb.
fantastic and fabulous.

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jinsindian

@jinsindian

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Amazing...cant wait to read next part..
Nd arnavs reaction

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

What eh story!! My god!! Gawd insecurities and jealousy can do so much to a human!! Such an insensitive jerk he's become!! Is it because he lost his mom and then he thought his dad was snatched by Garima in the form of second wife and Khushi as a kid?? Poor soul!!

Amit and Garima should have worked earlier on changing him rather than now forcing the responsibility on Khushi!!

Sheetal why do you try to claim what's not yours?? Girl get a life not a life of a parasite!!!

Khushi I'm glad you thought wise and your conditions prove that!! Two manjur hair!!

What about the third and important one?? I guess he will accept it too!!

Cheers

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Wow! Great update! Am sure arnav would agree to it!
But would sheetal tempt him away?

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Amazing one

Don't think arnav will agree so easily

The guy who is a womanizer can never stay with ine woman..unless he has fall head over heels for her...

But in his case ..love has still not come in to picture

Thanks for pm

Well written

Update soon.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Now where do I start, as ever I love your style of writing the situations you come up with leave the reader just asking for more and all I want to ask you is what happens next????? Does he accept!? The timing he has picked to question her conditions is of such advantage to Khushi, he wants nothing more than to bed his wife and so I think he will say yes BUT.. but then I think again and feel maybe he'll turn back into the more unreasonable ASR and disagree. Not sure..this is why you need to update !!Lol
Even if he agrees, will he keep faithful during the time she is in the USA..? too many questions.
Okay so Khushis conditions were nice and I liked the way ASR asked during foreplay. An idication that he wasn't just blinded by the prospect of sex but very much aware of a deal that he had made. Very much liked that. I actually liked the whole interaction between the two they have some good dynamic both characters. I would like to see how things turn between them if they do go ahead..if he agrees and they consumate then what. Hes not very predictable is he.

Thank you.. look forward to this next one, impatiently !

Edited by jagrutid - 11 years ago