Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 11

thank you very much it was

another great piece

Adi is adorable and so cute....i just love it ur story....plz continue...

~sweta~

hey u know what i dreamt abt something like this last night n wanted to write my fan fic abt this but today, i see that u have written one as good... so gr8 job, plz continue!

you haven't continued yet I can't wait no longer

PART-15

Khushi and Adi go home, they watch TV, play games and finally Kripa comes home. Adi jumps off of the sofa and hugs Kripa. Adi goes on and on about his day. Kripa just smiles and listens to him.

Adi: "and u know wat mommy, I met this uncle today, and I really like him. Me and Masshi are going to meet him again tomm."

Kripa: "really and wat's this uncle's name."

Just when Adi is about to tell her, Khushi comes and changes the topic. She knows that if Kripa finds out she's never gonna let them meet angad again.

They all go have dinner, talk a bit afterwards and then Kripa makes Adi go to sleep. She then goes to her room and turns the tv on, and Angad's song is being played: "mera dil jis dil pe fida hai, ik bewaffa hai, han mahobbat ki yeh saza hai, ik bewafa hai." Kripa switches the tv off and gets tears in her eyes. She runs to Adi's room, trying to escape her emotions. She looks at Adi and thinks, "Angad our Adi is growing up wat will I tell him when he asks about his daddy. Angad why did u do this to me? Angad if u had trusted me, trusted in our love, our relationship, then today Adi would have his daady's as well as my love." She slowly walks back to her room, opens her drawer and takes out her mangalsutra that Angad had put on her. She holds it and cries even more, "Angad you left me when I neede u the most, I hate u, if it hadn't been for Adi I would've been dead by now." She puts the mangalsutra back and tries to sleep. Angad is also trying to sleep, but can't. He thinks, "Kripa why did u cheat me? What was wrong with me? If u hadn't done that then today we would've been living together, with a cute kid like Adi." Basically they're both complaining to each other.

Next morning

Kripa goes to work and Adi and Khushi are getting ready to go to the beach.

Khushi asks Adi to make a promise that he would never tell his mom the name of our Uncle. Adi asks why, Khushi is confused herself and says, "listen bachu uncle is a star and ur mommy doesn't like him"

Adi: "ok then but can I call Uncle star (got that from Kareena Kareena) then?"

Khushi: "as long as u don't take his real name, ok"

Adi: "ok"

They go meet him and when Adi sees Angad he runs to him and Angad picks him up and hugs him tightly.

Adi: "Masshi now u can go"

Khushi: "haa go where?"

Adi: "anywhere, me and star have to talk about something personal ok"

Khushi "whatever, I'm going grocery shopping, umm Mr. Angad can u please take care of him. When should I come back?"

Angad: "I'm gonna be on break for an hour, so come back in an hour and don't worry I'll take good care of Adi"

Khushi leaves and Angad gives Adi his chocolate.

Adi kisses him and says, "thanku star"

Angad (confused): star?

Adi: ha Khushi told me u were a star, and u also r a star to me so that's why."

Angad smiles and says ok then.

Angad takes Adi to his recording studio just to show him around. Adi is in Angad's arms still. He is holding him up. Everybody is really happy to see Angad smiling and talking, coz they haven't seen Angad like that for a long time. Mannan comes up to Angad and says, "sup Angad, and who is this little one"

Adi: "hi, I'm Adi."

Mannan: "oh hi Adi"

Then he looks at Angad and then at adi.

M: "I don't know why but u guys look alike. Adi beta u have the same eyes and smile like Angad"

Angad smiles and says really.

They then go back to the beach and Khushi picks Adi up. Adi and Angad start meeting everyday and become really close. Now Angad can't live without seeing Adi. Even Kripa knows about this, but doesn't know that its Angad, she knows him as "star".

One day Angad calls Adi at his house and Kripa answers, They both feel that they've heard this voice before but don't say anything.

Kripa: "hello"

Angad: "hello, um hi can I talk to Adi please"

K: "umm yeah who is this?"

A: "Actually I don't think u know me but Adi calls me star"

kripa smiles and says, "oh so u r Adi's star. Hi I'm his mom, hold on I'll just get Adi"

They both feel weird after talking to each other.

The next day Kripa gets invited to some big producer's birthday party.

She wants to take Adi and Khushi wid her but know that its gonna get really late and Adi has to sleep. She she goes by herself. She wears a black saree, looking really pretty in it.

Angad of course is also invited; he also goes there all dressed up in a black suit.

Kripa reaches there and reporters come running over to her asking her about her new album. Kripa finally gets away from them and goes to the producer (Mr. Sharma) She wishes him, turns around and comes face to face with Angad. A lot of pain and emotions come flowing back to both of their faces as they get flashes of old times. Kripa excuses herself and goes away. She starts talking to her company's producer. Angad has his eyes on her ("I got my eyes on you") Then everybody starts dancing, and now the slow dancing starts. Some guy comes up to Kripa and asks her to dance, she agrees. While Angad is dancing with some girl. The announcer announces that everybody has to switch partners now (typical bollywood style) with the couple next to them. Angad and Kripa have no choice but to dance with each other. The song "tumse kitna pyaar hai" from company is playing.

Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo - 2Na yakeen aaye to phirNa yakeen aaye to phir dil badalkar dekh loTumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh loHumne apni har saans par naam tera likh diyaEk tujhe paane ki khaatir khudko paagal kar liyaIshq mein tum bhi sanamIshq mein tum bhi sanam had se guzarkar dekh loTumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh loJaane kyoon saare jahan se ho gaye hai bekhabarJab se tum aankhon mein aaye jaagti hai yeh nazarApni raaton se meriApni raaton se meri raatein badalkar dekh loTumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo - 2Na yakeen aaye to phirNa yakeen aaye to phir dil badalkar dekh lo

Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo

They don't look at each other, but are really close, Angad has her in his arms. They don't talk either. Tears start flowing from Kripa's eyes. Angad sees them, his heart tells him to wipe them away, but his ego comes in the way. When the dance ends Kripa practically runs out of the hall, leaving Angad in a confused and angry state.

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

Enjoy u guys and I just wanna thank u all once again for reading my fan-fics. Luv u all. Take care and don't forget to smile.

awww so lovely--> this reminds of Kuch na kaho movie.. Adi!