Taarey TS kriya is back!!- COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends, i m writing this TS as in three shot... i really want taani to come back to rey..
PART 1:
the scene starts from where rey leaves from taani's engagement.. and till now they have got the affliation and kriyansh are on the edge of confessing their love...

it is the next day and rey is happy as he will finally his love to kriya.. he knowingly doesnt remember taani, coz he knows taani is never going to return, he gets ready and leaves for college unknown to what fate has in store for him...

college:
a girl enters in a back mini dress.. and all the people are staring at her open mouthed...
girl: finally, aaj main apne rey ke paas wapas aa gayi hun.. mujhe pata hai, rey ab bhi mujhse pyaar karte hai... ab main kabhi unhe khud se dur nahi jaane dungi... REYAANSH SINGHANIA get ready to face new TAANI SHEKHAWAT...

(the girl is taani shekhawat)

she goes inside and gets into the RH...
taani: abhi sabke aane ka time ho gaya hai... rey, bhai, sharon, sab aate hi honge.. main sabko surprise dungi...
(confusion: how come taani is wearing short dress...??)

then she sees her reflexion in mirror... gets flashback of she transformed into this modern taani,, from a small town taani...

flashback:
its was almost 6months since the engagement.. vishesh understud that taani cannot be happy with him, and freed her... then her tauji sent her to mumbai and she lived in a hotel for a month and groomed herself and became the new taani, as the girls rey likes)

she comes out of her thoughts, when she hears some footsteps, nearby.. she hides herself...

here the gang comes to college, and enters RH.. and is awkwardly shocked seeing RH gate already open...

nil: yaar, ye gate kisne khola.. hum toh abhi aaye hain??
vicky: hmm.. main bhi yahi soch raha tha
swayam: chodo na yaar, chalo andar chalte hai...

when they enter they face a girl's back...
sharon: excuse me!! who are you??
taani turns and evryone gets shocked!!

swaron: taani????
gang: taani?????
rey is shocked to say anything...
kriya is confused as she doesnt know taani...

taani: haan main!!
and goes and hugs swayam...
swayam excitedly hugs her too...

swayam: taani... tum yahan?? wo bhi aise kapdon mein??
taani: haan bhai... main change ho gayi hun!!

kriya now gets to know that taani is swayam's sister...

now taani hugs sharon...
sharon: welcome back taani!!
taani: thank you bhabhi oh sorry sharon!!
sharon: its okay, now u can call me bhabhi!!
taani: what?? really??
sharon nods...

now taani looks around and finally notices kriya and gets shocked...
taani: KRIYAA????
and then turns towards rey who is equally shocked...

seeing his face she gets to know that rey has moved on, and now is in love with kriya...
she gets tears in her eyes...
she goes towards kriya and hugs her...

swaron sees this and understands taani's gesture...
kriya: ye aap kya kar rahe ho??
taani: then taani wipes her tears...
taani: wo.. kuch nahi hum first time mil rahe hai na.. isliye maine aapko hug kar lia... waise jab main yahan thi, toh bahot suna tha maine aapke and aapke dance ke baarey mein...

kriya: ohh okay...
taani: u r really superb dancer, maine toh aapko copy karne ki bhi koshish ki thi,...
kriya is confused!!

kriya: what??
taani: naah.. nothing!!

nil: waise taani, ye toh batao.. tum yahan achanak kaise?? and vishesh kahan hai? wo nahi aaya tumhare sath??
taani: wo... woo..
simmi: comeon taani, batao na kya baat hai.. we are al ur friends...
taani closes her eyes.. and then says...

taani: actually, vishesh samajh gaya tha that i cannot be happy wid him, isiliye usne sagai tod di... toh main apni khushi ke paas wapas aa gayi.. but ab meri khushi meri nahi kisi aur ki hai...

evrybody understands what taani was saying.. except kriya.. and rey was shocked to know that taani was back for him..

swayam: anywaz taani.. ab chalo ghar chalte hain...
taani: naahi bhai. main pichle ek month se hotel mei reh rahi thi.. main toh yahan sabko surprise dene aayi thi, yahan aake main hi surprise ho gayi,...

gang: whattt????

taani: yeah.. and ab main yahan aur nahi reh sakti.. i m leaving for US tonight!!

gang is again shocked...

swayam: taani but...
taani: bhai, please aap mujhe nahi rokenge, main jo jaane ki galti ki thi, uski punishment toh mujhe hi milni chahiye na.. isiliye please aap kuch mat boliye...

sharon: but taani, tum aise...
taani: nahi bhabhi, please.. i m happy for u and bhai.. but ab main aur yahan nahi reh sakti... and she leaves RH running from there...

rey is still standing there, processing evrything in his mind...

Rey (ST): taani.. taani yahan kaise?? kya wo yahan mere liye aayi hai?? and wo itni change ho gayi hai.. ohh god.. ab jab main kriya se apne pyaar ko confess karne wala tha, toh aap taani ko wapas kyu le aaye.. ab main kya karu?? kisey chunu?? taani ya kriya??



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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Interesting
Thank you for the PM
It seems really interesting to read
So update soon
And do inform me when you update
Thank you
Love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting starting
Waiting for Rey kiske choose karega Taani ya kriya
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept yr nd start too
Not liking Rey even a bit not bcoz he doesn't love Taani anymore but bcoz he is taking her as an option
Taani is a brave one she will face it nd will get a better partner than anyone else
Taani going US :( its not good to run away from ur fear but to face it
Continue it sooon pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg what an concept yr
really loved it
hope if it happens ind3
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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soo intrstng strt
thnks 4 pm
plz cnt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
wow awsm start
loved it
felt bad for taani
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Wow such an interesting concept...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg what an concept yr really loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
awesome concept
interesting part 1
eagerly waiting for nxt part
updt soon

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