Taarey TS kriya is back!!- COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awsome starting...
love the concept...
feelng bad for taani...
taani is not an option...
plzz updt soon and pm me plzzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

PART 2:

Swaron runs behind taani.. and stops her at the college gate.. and gang also follows them...

Swayam: taani, tum aise nahi jaa sakti.. main tumhara bhai hun.. tum mujhe chod ke nahi jaane dunga...

Sharon: haan taani, tum hame aise chod ke nahi jaa sakti...

Taani has tears in her eyes...

Taani: but bhai, ab main yahan kaise reh sakti hun... Aapne dekha na unhone mujhse kuch bhi nahi bola. Infact wo toh mujhe yahan dekh ke shocked hai. And I can see ki he has moved on.. I don't want to create any problems for him.. isiliye achcha yahi hoga ki main yahan se chali jaun...

Sharon: but taani, iska ye matlab nahi kit um hum sab se dur chali jao... haan wo move on kar gaya hai.. but hum bhi tumhare friends hai.. tumhe hum sab ke liye yahan rehena hoga...

Simmi: haan taani, we cant let you go!!

Vicky: haan taani, jab tum chali gayi thi, I used to miss you a lot..

Nil: haan, maine bhi tumhe bahot miss kia, afterall tum hamari friend and prank partner jo ho!!

Amar-bharat: humne bhi bahot miss kia...

Taani is crying...

RH:

Rey is lost in his thoughts...

Kriya keeps her hand on his shoulder...

Rey: I m sorry taani, main hamesha se jaanta tha kit um mere paas wapas laut ke zarur aaogi. But tumhari sagaai ke baad I was lost.. aur fir kriya wapas aa gayi, pehele toh main use bahot gussa tha, but fir mujhe lagne laga ki shayad wahi mere liye bani hogi.. I was wrong taani.. aaj morning mei bhi when I decided to propose kriya, I first thought about you.. I m sorry taani.. I love you. Please mujhe fir se chod ke mat jao...

Hearing all this, kriya has tears in her eyes...

Kriya: rey...

Rey gets shocked and turns...

Rey: kriya??

Kriya: haan rey kriya.. jaiye rey rok lijiye apni taani ko isse pehele ki der ho jaaye, aur wo chali jaaye..

Rey: but kriya??

Kriya: kuch nahi rey.. aap mere bahot achche friend ho.. and haan I accept I love you.. but I know aap sirf aur sirf taani se pyaar karte ho.. and usi ke sath khush rahoge!! Please jaa ke usko rok lijiye... jaiyee...

Rey hesitantly leaves Rh, and kriya smiles...

Kriya: rey mujhe pata tha, ki mai apna pyaar kho chuki hun.. aapka mujhe propose karna mere liye ek surprise se kam nahi hota.. but main janti hun aap taani se pyaar karte ho.. and I m happy ki aapko apka pyaar mile..

And she goes to vp sir's office to complete the formalities before leaving for New York!!

College gate:

Taani: haan bhai, aap theek keh rahe ho.. I should be happy ki unhe apna sachcha pyaar mil gaya.. and main aap sab ko chod ke nahi jaa sakti... and then hugs swayam...

Taani breaks the hug after few minutes.. and says

Taani: but bhai, rey ko ye baat pata nahi chalni chahiye ki main yahan hun... Kyuki.. agar unhe pata chala toh wo fir se khud ko blaim karenge sab cheez ke liye...

Swayam: okay taani as you say, but mujhe lagta hai tumhe ek aar rey se baat kar leni chahiye...

Taani: nahi bhai...

Swayam: but taani, ... (gets interrupted)

By the time rey reaches college gate he sees the gang woth taani.. and gets happy hearing taani is not leaving for US, but then her next set of words angers rey...

Rey: rehene de swayam.. teri behen se ummeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai.. hamesha wahi toh karti hai jo isse achcha lagta hai... kabhi isne mere barey mei socha hai? Jo aaj sochegi...

Swayam: yaar rey tu ...

Rey: nahi swayam.. bahot sun lia maine teri behen kibakwas, ab main bolunga, aur wo sunegi...

Rey holds taani's shoulders and turns her towards himself in a jerk...

Rey: so miss taani shekhawat... what were you saying, mujhe pata na chale kit um yahan ho!! Hmm.. ab mujhe pata hai, now what will you do?

Taani: rey aap..

Rey: DON'T!! just listen to me... haan chalo maine maana ki jab tum pehele baar college aayi thi, I treated you as swayam's sister... but still I never knew the reason ki main tumhe leke itna protective kyu tha, hamesha sochta tha ki shayad tum mere best friend ki behen ho , and swayam busy reheat hai so its my responsibility to keep you safe.. and then tumhara 6th dancer banna, n then ye pata lagna ki u cant dance, and tumhe sabse chup ke train karna... maine toh dance chod hi dia tha but then tumhari wajah se I again started dancing...

Swayam, nil, Vicky tumlog ko yaad hai na, boys locker room mei tumlogo ne pucha tha ki maine achanak se fir se dance karna kaise start kar dia... and swayam tune hi kaha tha, ki achcha hai job hi wajah se main fir se dance kar raha hun, wo wajah hamesha meri life mein bani rahe.. us time main yahi sochta tha ki agar tujhe pata chala ki wo wajah teri behen hai toh pata nahi tu mera kya haal karega... And chuckles...

Swayam: iska matlab tu taani ko dance sikhane ke liye fir se dance karna start kia tha??

Rey: haan.. and taani., then you out of nowhere confessed your love, and tried to become like kriya.. I know I was very harsh towards you by rejecting your love, but main us time aise situation mei nahi tha kisi ke sath bhi relationship mein aane ke liye.. uske baad you changed and suddenly u were completely detached from me.. as if I m no one to you... and then that shivam use tumhari friendship started affecting me... Mujhe nahi pata tha ki kyun mai nahi dekh pata tha kit um us shivam se baat karo ya fir uske saath kahi jao.. and then tumhara AGS banna I was feeling so relieved ki ab tum us shivam ke sath nahi reh paogi... But still I cudnt find the reason...

Gang was shocked listening all this...

Sharon: rey itna kuch hua tha, tumne mujhe bhi nahi bataya,...??

Rey: nahi Sharon.. main khud hi itna confuse tha, main kisi se share karta bhi toh kya keheta.. isliye.. and taani. Uske baad job hi hua wo sabko pata hai... but when u pretended to be with shivam to save my image I started feeling jealous, I started finding reasons to be near you, Istill I cudnt understand what was the reason... and then whatever happened between us in RH (taani was rememring RASIA scne) I realized I have fallen in love with you...

And then basket ball, and our confession. Swayam's MU.. and then finally goa trip...

Taani had teras in her eyes remembering everything...

Rest all are shocked to say anything.. rey too...

He again holds taani's shoulders..

Rey: u say, u love me... is this ur love.. that u cannot trust me, my love..?? I know I did a mistake by faking our break up and I hurt you a lot.. but I was hurt too taani. I was hurt too.

Rey breaks down crying...

Rey: tumhe khud se dur karna nahi chahta tha main, tumhe sirf career banata dekhan chahta tha.. tum world sirf aas paas ghumni lagi thi... u were not urself.. wahi karti thi, jo mujhe achcha lagta tha, kabhi apne mann ki baat nahi batati thi...

Ye tha tumhara pyaar.. main apni asli taani ko khone laga tha... Khone laga tha main apni taani ko...

Taani: waah rey waah.. aapne ye toh dekha ki meri world aap ban gaye the, and main wahi karti thi jo aapko pasand tha, but aapne kabhi jaane ki koshish nahi ki, ki main aisa kyun karti thi.. toh suniye rey.. aap hamesha apne friends and apne dance mein busy rehene lage the, mere liye toh aapke paas time hi nahi tha.. isiliye job hi time mujhe aapke sath milta tha, main usme wahi karti thi jo aapko pasand tha.. kyuki main aapko apni tension nahi dena chahti thi.. main nahi chahti thi ki aap mere wajah thode se bvhi tensed ho... mujhe laga ki hume itna kam time milta hai khud ke liye, ki agar main wo karungi jo aapko achcha lagta hai, toh aap khush hoge.. but aap ... naah, aapne kabhi mujhe samajhne ki koshish hi nahi ki...

Rey: nahi taani, aisa...

Suddenly taani faints... And falls..

Rey: TAANI...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Amazing update
Reys outbrust
Amazingly written
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
soo pathatic prt
lvd it
plz cnt soon
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome updt
Loved the chapter
Rey realised His feeling s for taani
Taani is staying
She faints
Curious to know what happened to her
Updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Interesting concept
Taani comeback n poor rey confuse to choose taani or kriya 🤔
Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
wow awesome update
it was superb of rey and taani saying about their feelings
it was nice
but why taani faints?
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Super lovely
Finally Rey ne bola... Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

PART 3:

Rey: taani...

Swayam: taani.. taani... Rey taani ko medical room le ke chalte hain...

Rey picks up taani and runs towards the medical room...

They call the doctor and asks him to check taani,...

After the doc comes out...

Reyam goes to the doctor...

Rey: doc, kya hua hai taani ko...

Swayam: wo aise faint kyu ho gayi..?? sab kuch theek toh hai na?

Doc: dekhiye, taani is very week. Shayad usne subah se kuch khaya nahi hai, and shayad kal bhi kuch nahi khaya tha.. isiliye stress ki wajah se wo faint ho gayi hai.. there is nothing to worry about, and haan maine kuch vitamin tabletslikh diye hain, unhe kuch khilane ke baad de dijiye ga.. and she needs to take her meal properly...

Reyam: thank u doc.. kya hum use mil sakte hain??

Doc: yeah.. she is conscious now.. go and meet her...

Reyam: thank u doc..

Reyam, Sharon, and the gang goes in the room...

Rey and swayam goes and sits on each side of taani... and holds her hand...

Taani opens her eyes...

Taani: bhai...

Swayam: shh.. taani, tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho.. subah se kuch khaya nahi, and doc bol rahe the shayad dinner bhi nahi lia... tum apna dhyaan kyu nahi rakhti ho??

Taani pouts...

Gang: awww...

Taani: bhai.. wo main aap sab se milne ke liye itni excited thi naa, kuch khane ka mann hi nahi kar raha tha...

Swayam: koi nahi.. ruko hum tumhare liye kuch khane ko bhejte hain...

Sharon: haan swayam theek keh raha hai. Tumhe abhi kuch khana chahiye, hum leke aate hain...

Swaron goes to get some food for taani...

Gang: get well soon taani.. hum abhi thodi der mein aate hain, VP sir ne bulaya hai,...

Gang leaves...

Meanwhile, with taarey

Rey: I m sorry taani, please mujhe maaf kar do.. I love you, I really love you a lot.. and starts crying..

Taani also has tears in her eyes... and then holds rey's hands...

Taani: please rey kuch mat boliye.. kuch mistakes aapne ki toh kuch maine.. aap bhi mujhe maaf kar do.. I love you too rey.. main apke bina nahi reh sakti...

Rey moves forward and holds taani's face...

And slowly kisses her on her lips...

Taani too starts responding.. and the slow kiss turns into a passionate one...

Taarey has their eyes closed...

Rey feels taani is out of breathe, so he breaks the kiss...

Rey: taani..

Taani opens her eyes...

Rey: I love you..

Taani: I love you too rey, and hugs rey...

Just then swaron comes there, and understands that their MU is cleared now...

Swaron: *ahem* *ahem*

Taarey breaks the hug, and taani is blushing...

Swayam: Sharon, ab main rey ko chodunga nahi...

Sharon: haan swayam.. u r right.. isne itna kuch humse chupaya...

Swayam: isne hi nahi, meri behen ne bhi mujhe kuch bhi batana zaruri nah samjha...

Taani: nahi bhai, aisa nahi hai.. un dino aap already bhabhi ko le ke bahot pareshan the, isiliye maine aapko nahi bataya...

Swayam: waise, maine bhi tumse ek baat chupayi thi...

Sharey are confused...

Taani: kyaa??

Swayam: wo ye ki charity event ki raat ke baad se dance camp tak main and Sharon trial relationship mei the!! And closes his eyes fearing taani's reaction...

Taani: KYAAA? Aur aapne ye sab mujhe nahi bataya??

Swayam: tumne bhi toh nahi bataya tha na.. toh now we are equal...

Taani: waise ye baat aur kisko kiako pata thi.. (eyeing rey)

Rey: arey, mujhe aise kyu dekh rahi ho.. maine inse promise kia tha, ki main kisi ko nahi bataunga.. isiliye maine kisi ko nahi bataya.. but u know whats funny...

Taaswaron: what??

Rey: tum teeno ko mujhse ek hi din, ek hi time pe baat karni thi!!

Taaswaron: what??

Rey: haan, swayam n sharon ko ye batana tha ki wo trial relationship mein hai.. and taani ko ye batana tha ki ab wo sixth dancer nahi ban sakti...

Taani: ohh.. toh isiliye aapne mujhe wait karwaya tha...

Rey: haan...

Taani starts laughing, imagining rey's condition...

Swaron and rey joins her...

Suddenly there was a knock...

Kriya enters...

Taanin swaron are uncomfortable seeing kriya there.. but rey has smile on his face...

Rey: arey kriya, achcha hua tum aa gayi... mujhe tumse thanks kehena tha...

Taaswaron are confused...

Kriya: koi baat nahi rey, we are friends.. and friendship mein no thank yous...

Rey: but still kriya.. I want to say it.. thank u so much meri help karne ke liye.. agar tum nahi hoti toh main taani se kabhi apne dil ki baat nahi bol paata... and wo fir se mujhe chod ke chali jaati.. and sorry tumhe hurt karne ke liye...

Kriya: nahi rey... aapko apka pyaar mil gaya, and u two remail with each other.. I m happy with this.. and waise bhi agar aap mujhe propose karte toh main naa hi keh deti...meri mom chahti thi ki main unki friend ke bte se shaadi karun...

Swaron n taarey: kya??

Kriya: haan, and maine toh kal affiliation milne ke baad hi apni NY ki ticket bhi book kar lit hi. Mera yahan aane ka objectice pura ho gaya... and main aaj college sirf formalities complete karne aayi thi...

Taani gets up from the bed, and hugs kriya...

Taani: I m sorry kriya. Agar main aapke and rey ke...

Kriya: no taani.. main and rey toh kabhi sath mein the hi nahi.. pehele bhi whatever it was it was secret, sirf swayam ko pata tha... and main dil se khush hunk i rey ko meri wajah se apne pyaar se dur nahi hona pada...

Triya hugs again...

Rey, n swaron also hugs kriya...

Kriya: okay guys, meri aaj rat ki flight hai.. and I hope tum logo ko problem nahi hogi, mere sath airport tak aane mein...

Swaron n taarey: no, not at all...

Kriya: okay then, c u all in evening...

Taarey n swaron also leaves college and goes to swayam's place... and informs the gang to reach there...

Later in evening.. kriya leaves...

Taarey in car back from airport...

Rey holds taani's hand:

Rey: I still vant believe tum mere liye yahan wapas aa gayi, and now we are together...

Taani: haan, even I cant believe... mujhe toh laga tha ki maine aapko kho dia,

Rey: taani.. aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta.. rey taani ke bina incomplete hai

Taani: and taani rey ke bina...

Taarey look look

Rey: I love you taani

Taani: I love you too...

Rey leans towards her, and they kiss :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
superb update
nice and lovely end😊

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