Love can be hard sometimes--A Swaron story(updated on page 12)

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widowmaker

@widowmaker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: -bLEu98-
Yo!
You updated!! Wo bhi Fifa wc ke beech... thanks a ton for that. 😳
As I told you earlier, faadu likha hai boss.
I'm loving the flow of your story.
It has some very authentic moments, which are very amusing too.

Iss bar jaldi update dena.

Pakka agla update jaldi aayega and thanx for such a nice comment

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Edited my comment on pg 7 😊

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

this was a lovely chapter... i must say finally swayan had got a great due to which he
can go on persue his dream and will be happy do it and now all have gone for a cultural
trip arrange from school for an event and finally all the meet and amazing and interest...
do continue soon and pm me

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Kab ayega Sharon part ..., 😒 mere ko update chaiye ...

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widowmaker

@widowmaker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
this was a lovely chapter... i must say finally swayan had got a great due to which he
can go on persue his dream and will be happy do it and now all have gone for a cultural
trip arrange from school for an event and finally all the meet and amazing and interest...
do continue soon and pm me

Will defo pm...

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widowmaker

@widowmaker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Can anyone be more cute than my Swayam?Can anyone????No no no...He is the cutest of all :)Swayam in cultural team and his Dream come True. . .Lol!!!!!I so loved Swayam in this update...And then rey-swayam Convo on Ciggerate...Bechara swayam...N then rey's plan to make Swayam come for outing was superb...He so knows our LOVERBOY!!!!!!N finally the last scene...Oh My God!It was hillarious...The way he is getting ready...Teri shadi nai hai...hahahaha...Awesome update...Worth of wait 😳

Thanx chitra for such a lovely comment... I too laughed my guts out when I remembered the line...tri shaadi ki baat karne nhi jaa rahe hain...

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@Slayerkajal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Wow...nice update...
Swayam join cultural team for sharon...hayee my majnu...
Then that cigarate part was nice as swayam can do anything for sharon...but they all should not have it...its not good for health...
Reyam all part were nice...rey know how to convince him...liking reyam friendship...
Last part swayam bichara so raha tha but sharon ke naam se jaag gaya ...it was hillarious...rey's dialoge. Was just on lovd it...butya this is sharon's loverboy...
Thanks for the update and pm
P.S. sorry for the late commemt...vvo actuallyaajkal d3 ki news ki wajah se i was really pissed...i hadn'tread any pms...only todayi read them and firstly came to here...sorry again..

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Bhai padh kar mazza aa gaya..It was Amazing one,loved the way story is progressing..So finally swayam ko License mil gaya sharon ke sath rehne ka and moreover a license to persue his passion of singing n music..Bhai yeh trip wala idea is damm expressive..I liked the dialouge delivery between Swayam,rey n his chunnu munnu (nil n vicky)..That was amusing one..Now swayam..Bandha bohut efforts daal raha hai..Sharon ka naam sunte hi bandha eveready cell ban jata hai,no thakaan n all,Shayad this is true love..Anyways bhai i liked rey as a cool catalyst here..Ab bas bhai aur bhabhi ka collision dekhna hai,i mean to say SwaRon Exclusive first meet..I am waiting for that bhai..Aur haan teri update karne ki speed bada yaar..Story bohut interesting ho rahi hai..

Thanx for the PM n Sorry for the late

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Ok first.and.foremost meko iss os me.sirf archit dikhta hai swayam nahi😆

Ok swayam is the singer here.accha hai.dancer Swayam bahut dekh liya. 😛

The trip.reminded me of d3 trips swayams promo whre he says main kam se sharon ke paas toh rahunga something like that😆

Sutta in class 7.rey ko jail.me band karore 😡

Swayam was cute there.giving space to them and all.so papluiah

I liked the whole flow.it was. Beautiful

Ab bas hume bhabhi matlab sharon ki pov mil jaaye bas😉

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Ok first.and.foremost meko iss os me.sirf archit dikhta hai swayam nahi😆

Ok swayam is the singer here.accha hai.dancer Swayam bahut dekh liya. 😛

The trip.reminded me of d3 trips swayams promo whre he says main kam se sharon ke paas toh rahunga something like that😆

Sutta in class 7.rey ko jail.me band karore 😡

Swayam was cute there.giving space to them and all.so papluiah

I liked the whole flow.it was. Beautiful

Ab bas hume bhabhi matlab sharon ki pov mil jaaye bas😉

[/QUOTE]AGREE , need sharon ki pov jaldi se😛

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