Love can be hard sometimes--A Swaron story(updated on page 12) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
It was beautiful!
Jaldi update Karna..
Mere liye ye perfect he😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hey sorry but can only update on weekends... Have office on weekdays... Will try to update this Friday night...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: widowmaker


Hey sorry but can only update on weekends... Have office on weekdays... Will try to update this Friday night...


thanks dear...
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Loved it bhai!
Sorry for the late comment!
I loved Swayam getting up just coz of the name SHARON
Update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Loved it bhai!

Sorry for the late comment!
I loved Swayam getting up just coz of the name SHARON
Update fast

Will surely do bachha.. Maybe this Friday or on 13th defo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Here is the update...sorry i am late
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
This update is on the occasion of someone special's b'day

Swayam-Bhai Sharon ke saamne jaa raha hoon...aab bhi agar tayar nhi hua toh kya tri shaadi par hounga.

This dialogue made both Rey and Swayam laugh their wits out.

Rey-Ruk bhai main Kriya ko call karta and tera jugad fit karta hoon.

Rey dials Kriya's number and Kriya receives the call

Rey-Hello mera Shona.Kaisa hai??Kahan tha?Soo gaya tha kya mera baby?Main aa raha hoon milne bahar aao na and kuch bhi karke Sharon ko bhi lao.Yahan ek aashiq ki jaan nikli jaa rhi hai.I will be in campus of girl's dormitory in 15 mins.

When Swayam heard 15 mins his heart raced as if it will come out of his mouth.He started ironing his t-shirt which he was going to wear.

Rey-Bhai raat hai koi nahi dekhegi aabhi.

Swayam-Bhai jisko dikhana hai vo dekhegi since u have called her she will come.

They both reached the girl's dormitory and saw both Kriya and Sharon waiting there. The girls were sitting on a bench and a single light was falling on them. Rest all the places were dark. The boys were dumbstruck. It looked as if though two angels were sitting there and the lord was shining his light on them. They were the angels of both their life.

The boys moved forward towards the ladies...When they reached them both the girls raised their eyes and were met by the gaze of the boys.

Swayam was lost in those beautiful eyes of Sharon.One word which was racing through his mind was "Mrignaini". He was so lost that after a minute he uttered the word"Mrignaini" which brought Rey and Kriya out of each other's eyelock and they saw Swayam looking like a man possessed by the dreamy eyes of Sharon.

Sharon after listening to the word broke the eye lock and looked towards Rey.

Sharon-Rey Kriya ne bola kuch important baat discuss karni hai tumhe.

Rey was dumbstruck as he was not prepared for this.Kriya understood Rey's situation and said

Kriya-Kya Sharon itne time baad mujhe Rey se baat karne ka time mila hai thoda ruko..

And she dragged Rey away from them to spend some quality time with him.This left Swayam alone with Sharon.

Swayam-Hi Sharon.

Sharon-Hi.

Swayam-How are you?I know we never had an opportunity to converse and hence I can understand that you might be feeling uncomfortable.

Sharon-No it's not like that. I just feel that I don't know you even though we are in the same class and also cultural team.

Swayam-Well let me introduce myself formally then.I am Swayam Shekhawat.

He forwarded his hand but was having two thoughts that whether she will accept his friendship or not. He was shocked and his happiness knew no bounds when his friendship was accepted as she forwarded her hand for the handshake. The words moving in his minds were"Dosti pyaar ki pehli seedhi hoti hai"

Hum tumse pyaar iss kadar karte hain jaanejan

Ki tumhari dosti mein bhi humein jannat nazar aata hai...

Swayam sat down on the ground leaning on the bench on which Sharon was sitting.Sharon saw this and took a place beside Swayam on the ground.This surprised Swayam but he was also happy as he was correct that Sharon was just masking her true self behind all the attitude. It was getting quiet late and Sharon was feeling sleepy and there was no sign of Rey and Kriya. She was so sleepy that she rested her head on Swayam's shoulders and slept.

Edited by widowmaker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
reyam convo is tooo goood yr..
swayam kirne efforts lga rha h...

mrignaini...lovely ...

sharon swayam k shoulder p sar rkhkar so gai...
swayam ke maan me laddoo foote..

loved it dear..
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Wow update finally 🥳

Reyam convo is very nice
Swayam take time to get ready ... To impress Sharon ( before rdx's party ki yadd ayi mere ko 😆 )

Mrignaini - 😛 yeh Accha n unique word for tariff

Humm, chalo friendship ki starting hogai ... Ab hopefully swayam impress Sharon soon

Sharon slept resting her head on swayum's shoulder, haye swayam ...tik tyo hoga na 😆
How he will control his heart beat !!!

Overall nice update

Thanks for pm Archit 🤗
( now happy ab baat Karo 😛 )
Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
The only thing I can say is WOOWW
Bhai this was completely awesome!!
mriginaini?? Whr did u get this word frm!! But Jo bhi ho It suited perfectly!
Sharon sleeping on Swayams shoulder ..
Aww


This is tooo good bhai
loved it
waiting fr d next part

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