The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Preetika-Sinha

Do you write? Send me the link of your works na ... If you do so...

P.s .. Thanks ..😉

no i dnt write!!
i lyk to imagine stories! 😛

Originally posted by: tiara888

no i dnt write!!
i lyk to imagine stories! 😛

it was amazing

Originally posted by: Preetika-Sinha

Haha ,, not bad...

If you have any pending ideas you can always pm me... I'll try to give it shape!

sure 😃

This is so so sooo awesome!!!
m madly waiting for the next part😳

Originally posted by: soumyamishra

it was amazing

sanyukta wants to attract randhir while randhir cares for her so much

parth is acting like a real sweetheart, just the way i wanted him to be in the show as well

and most awesome thing is this line

He silently took out the same diary and striked out gluttony...

He was about to close it as the third sin caught his eye ,...

Sheepishly,, he striked it out too...,,,,A sweet smile playing on his lips!!

the third sin ,,,, LUST

will be waiting fo it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Piya1702

This is so so sooo awesome!!!
m madly waiting for the next part😳

superb one...pretty different!
do continue soon!

Thank you people ,,, for such a wonderful response !!

Hey brilliant update... The way u portrayed the gluttony thing was awesome...update the next part ASAP.. Pm me wen u update..