The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED! - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Craziness123

Hey brilliant update... The way u portrayed the gluttony thing was awesome...update the next part ASAP.. Pm me wen u update..


Thank you!

N of course,,,
I will 😉

Love ,
preetika!!🥱😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Wow!!!!! wht a concpt yar...i did'nt know about these seven sins tilll now only for u i came to know about these...so pls pls update soon i am waiting eagerly for it


nd after all thr nxt sin is lust ...

so it will have to be more intrsting...

PLZ UPDATE ASAP

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Ciao!!

M back with the third installment of the SINS !!
Gluttony and this one are fully related!

Dedicated to ayesha,,,, she did the proof reading and she is my first friend on IF!!! Thanks yar,,,u saved a lot of my time and mehnat! ;)

LUST : - The need to fulfill unspiritual desires (not just sexual desires, but this is usually what lust is associated with.)

He dragged her to the store room..
Practically threw her towards the wall and locked the door!

He was angry ??
WRONG!!

he was furious enough , he thought , his head would start burning in the next few seconds!

What was the effing problem of this girl!?!

She was stupid enough ( Wrong!) His mind corrected ,,, fine ! She was BRAVE enough to do M.E. ,, pig headed enough to argue with him but he never thought she would be dumb enough to play with her health!!

She was looking childish! Her eyes wide and her mouth stuffed with gulab jamun!

RANDHIR : SPIT IT!
SANYUKTA: NO!!

RANDHIR : SPIT THE DAMN SWEET AGARWAL!!!!!

she quickly spit it out!

RANDHIR : WHY DID YOU DO THIS!!!

SANYUKTA : I DONT THINK ITS NECESSARY TO ANSER YOUR QUESTIONS!

RANDHIR : DAMN YES,, IT IS !!!

HE pinned her to the wall...his hands gripping her shoulder tight...

Sanyukta : OUCH!!

RANDHIR : TELL ME!

SANYUKTA : OUCH RANDHIR!!

RANDHIR : TELL ME FARZI!

Tears started brimming her eyes...

Suddenly the truth hit him! The whole flashback of the TnD game was in front of his eyes...

His expressions changed from angry to understanding to guilt to love in a matter of seconds!

His hands moved from her shoulder to cup her face...

RANDHIR : Did you ...?

''NO '' she cut him ..

RANDHIR : don't lie to me farzi!

Sanyukta : NO ! ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!!

she removed his hands from his face ,, wiped her tears and pushed him away ...

She started to move only to be hauled back by him,,
RANDHIR : m so sorry sanyukta .!

Sanyu: WHAT!?!?! it was the first time he had apologized!

RANDHIR : I had no idea you have diabetes...

Sanyu: so .?! Why are you saing sorry ?!?
U never told me to eat oll that!!

RANDHIR : I never knew this would happen ...
A tear escaped his eyes,..

Instinctively her hand shot up to wipe it ...she realized she still had cream on her fingers so she wiped it from her wrist...

What was the matter she wondered,.. She had never seen RANDHIR so vulnerable! Why was he blaming himself for her stupidity!?

RANDHIR: sanyukta,,, i really ...

''Shhh... '' she put her hand on his mouth to shut him up...

Sanyukta : " OOPS"

now he had cream on his lips!

'Hahahaha' sanyukta was chuckling,,,.

Suddenly RANDHIR grabbed her hand..

He licked the cream of her forefinger,...
Her chuckling came to halt..

He went on to the ring finger..
Breathing became a difficult job for her,,.

He did the same with her left hand...
She was panting by now,...

''Randhirrr'' she literally moaned...

He plastered her lips with his,...
His hands were all over her...
She was pinned beneath him...
His heart beat was clearly audible...
His cologne was mesmerizing enough it made him edible to her,..

Not an inch was to be seen between them...
The only sound audible were her small gasps of pleasure and his manly growls...

He kissed her with weeks of pent up desires...with all the hate in the world and all the love in the universe,...

Her hand were tugging at his hair.,.his were all over her body...
Their lips meshed ,,, their tounges tangled...
It was erotic...

When she pulled out for oxygen ... He started assaulting her neck...
Placing hot wet kisses near her collar bone , on her jaw...

He was purposefully leaving marks all over her body...with an unconscious desire to declare her his property!

His hands went to her back and the other second he snapped her string.,.
She was frantically opening his shirt buttons...

The kurti was in two pieces by now,,..

''TRING TRING'' rang his phone..,
He froze!
So did she...What the hell had happened,..

The next second,, he snapped back to reality...

Damn! How could he ever loose control like this!!

He pushed away sanyukta from his tight embrace and took 5 steps back!
Avoiding her gaze oll the time...

He turned back and started going out...
Just then he realized something,,, took out his olready opened Shir and threw it at her and went out...

Parth was sitting on the window of an empty classroom playing his guitar...

RANDHIR was in the ROBO MODE... HE was walking mechanically...

He crossed parth...

Seeing his condition.,, the whole ground floor was gossiping...

No shirt,, unkempt hair,, partial lip gloss on his lips and nail marks oll over his shoulder,..

Parth just gave the "I-KNEW-THIS-WAS-GOING-TO-HAPPEN"wala look..and went back on playing the tune he was playing ,.. Grinning...

'Uljhan meri suljhade...
Chahoo mai yaa na,...
Tu hi ye mujhko bata Dee...'


Done!! So liked it ?
Precap : SLOTH... Poor RANDHIR ...

Sooo till then ,,,
Happy reading ;)

Hugs and kisses,
Preetika😳


P.S. don't forget to comment 😉


Til then you may read my first O.S
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3985737

P.P.S. its a sincere request guys! Please Buddy me if you want PMS...it is difficult the other way round! 😲
Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
This one was Smokin hott one!!
loved it...was eagerly waiting for it since noon!!
fab. one...👏
n i love the way u r treating Parth's character!!!😃

next update is eagerly awaited...update soon!!😳
Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
this is so awsome..better than i expected girl...u made me speechless..thats how awsome it is.. i love their chemistry,physics biology everything..that was so seductively hot..n seriously i love this parth..he is such a observer. love it..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Piya1702

This one was Smokin hott one!!
loved it...was eagerly waiting for it since noon!!
fab. one...👏
n i love the way u r treating Parth's character!!!😃

next update is eagerly awaited...update soon!!😳


Thank god you found it hot!

*Gushing*
Actually this is what I wanted parth to do but can't help the c.v's :(

Bdw thank you once again,..

Thank full,
Preetika !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Sry preetika couldn't be the first one to comment,, but next time 4 sure I'll be the one to like n comment first... Well the update is just mind blowing...

Love
Ayesha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: moonkmh

this is so awsome..better than i expected girl...u made me speechless..thats how awsome it is.. i love their chemistry,physics biology everything..that was so seductively hot..n seriously i love this parth..he is such a observer. love it..update soon



Omigod !! Thanks a tonne dear...

I am happy you found it worth a comment !

XOXOXO
preetika😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Craziness123

Sry preetika couldn't be the first one to comment,, but next time 4 sure I'll be the one to like n comment first... Well the update is just mind blowing...

Love
Ayesha..


The next one will also be dedicated to you ! ;)
No worries ,..

😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
fab update preetika
really luved it
waitng eagerly 4 d next
thnx 4 d pm :)

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