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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

I don't know why but this chapter left me feeling rather melancholic ...😕

I think Khushi's feelings rubbed off on me ...

It really is terrible to be in the place Khushi finds herself in right now ...

Seeing the marriage photograph of Arnav and Lavanya and more shockingly of

Arnav with a little child ... seeing the photographs made it all a reality for her ...

Not surprising why Astha was disappointed when Arnav told her about the divorce ...

Lavanya seems like a lost broken soul ... desperate to cling on to Arnav ...

Just hope Aarav is fine ...

Thank you Jenny ... waiting with a heavy heart for next week ...

But loved the message he received on his phone ...

at least it brightened and lightened up the mood ...

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

wooowww this was soo awesome..

loved it..

wonder whether the last text was from Khushi.. since it brought a tiny smile on Arnav's lips..

thanks for pm..

waiting for next eagerly..

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spg1970

@spg1970

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

First of all thanks for accepting my buddy request and sending me the pm for Chapter 11. Had been waiting to read it. Love your style of writing. It feels very believable and real like it could happen to any one of us.

All main characters have been portrayed so beautifully. The tussle in each one's life be it Khushi, Arnav, Lavanya or even Astha has been written to perfection. When I am reading the story I can feel the emotions of each character as if I am present in their world.

I do have a little doubt that has been voiced by one of the readers too...how can Arnav fall in love with Khushi so quickly without even knowing her. It just seems very abrupt that at first he did not even seem to notice her and then suddenly he was so drawn to her that he told her that he loves her. I am hoping there is more to it than you have told us thus far.

Lavanya seems to be mentally disturbed for sure, one minute emailing Arnav that she will not let him go that easily and the other minute pinning for him to come back. Waiting to read more of her story.

Arav the baby is a mystery, don't want to contemplate that piece of the story but hoping the mystery will unravel itself very soon and we will find out what really happened between Arnav and Lavanya that is leading up to him separating from her and

filing for a divorce.

Beautifully written...superb talent you have!

Keep writing.

Cheers,

Sapna

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Those lines at the end are not Khushi's text. Sorry, I shd have made that clear :/

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ravalisharma06

@ravalisharma06

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

super update...

wat abt la...

she is confusing!!

n she wnts him back!!god!!

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

I guess it is going to be long struggle for them awesome update

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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

So what happen between arnav and lavanya

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

jenny...wow...twist pe twist ...cliffhangers...unlike ur other stories this one is lot more complicating at the same time highly entertaining ...

first arnav was a brooding doc , suddenly a husband now he has a son😲

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

awesome update... poor khushi.. arnav has a son too 😲

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: IPK007
Those lines at the end are not Khushi's text. Sorry, I shd have made that clear :/

twist pe twist..fir se read karne ka padi..even I assumed it was Kushi but was confused why will she reply when she is so disappointed finding him about havign a kid..awesome Jenny..