Saffron Fields #4(Arshi FF)/// Index & link to next thread on pg 1 - Page 19

was the sms from khushi... well i soo hope so ...

hi Jenny

nice update...Khushi conjuring La as an evil person is so normal... thats what we all wud want her to be...but somehow i feel that isnt so... La seems like just a normal person...bitter cause she still loves Arnav n wants him back...

But then Arnav doesnt want her in his life...not just now (after meeting khushi), but since a year...all his early thought process shows that though he was in the process of legally separating from La, he wanted to stay away from Khushi...that tells me that the issue is deep rooted...

Khushi thinks she is just a rebound girl, but ofcourse she doesnt know Arnav's thoughts...cause she never let him explain...but even if she thinks its what it is...being friends with him, is a sensible way...and to see if this goes somewhere in the future...makes sense

Arav must be the second shock to Khushi...wonder where he is, atm...

Originally posted by: sman

twist pe twist..fir se read karne ka padi..even I assumed it was Kushi but was confused why will she reply when she is so disappointed finding him about havign a kid..awesome Jenny..

How often in life, one comes across a particular point in time, where everything you've once believed in, starts showing unexpected cracks, the very foundation you've proudly stood on, starts shaking, compelling you to look deep inside of you and doubt if you really know yourself...WOW Jenny!!

Originally posted by: Kishmish

😭😭😭 Who then Jenny ?!

Oh, they were just lines added in the end as Arnav's POV (instead of a song) I just make it clear in the update..:)

Sorry for the confusion
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How come I missed the separating line kind of a thingy between poem lines and previous part of this chapter, may be it was late in the night and I wasn't as awake as I thought I was😆

Originally posted by: MEsw

How come I missed the separating line kind of a thingy between poem lines and previous part of this chapter, may be it was late in the night and I wasn't as awake as I thought I was😆

Or did it appear today?

But now at least it is clearer😆

I just added it after reading confused comments;)

Originally posted by: IPK007

I just added it after reading confused comments;)

Jenny, I like how you write from both women"s perspectives. I have been in Kushi's shoes (he was not married but about to propose when we met). The guilt is huge and the desire to think of the other woman as a b**** even greater as you try to justify a reason he is leaving the other person for you. My husband's ex is the sweetest person on earth as I found out very quickly and I could not hate her no matter how hard I tried. What saved us was the knowledge that however great the past relationship was, the feelings between them were not there anymore and they were still together because it was convenient. This is why I wish Kushi had listened to him so she could put things in perspective as opposed to grasping at anything and everything. She can't blame herself and neither should he. We can't plan our love relationships as I truly believe it is written in fate. I sure hope her text back to him was a way to communicate and get the full picture as opposed to putting an end to something that has not bloomed fully yet.

My readers' POV: confusion hi confusion hai, solution ka pata nahi 😛

Well, all I have to say is 'Aal izz well' or will be well !! 🤗