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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Congrats on the new thread

Superb update

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Loved it, specially the increased length. Could not wait to devour the update so reading it at 5:00 in the morning ...lol.

I knew you would do full justice to the multi faceted issues of falling for a married man and you did it brilliantly. The pain, the guilt, the hope, the secret yearning and above all the curiosity that kills was beautifully depicted. Feel so sorry for Khushi who sees herself hoping for something that goes against her every principle and who she is.

Khushi getting a glimpse into Arnav's past via the photo album was such a beautiful scene, sad but beautiful...I felt like I was seeing Arnav's past and present along with Khushi and experiencing all her emotions with her.

Lavanya too is shown as someone who is torn and has almost a split personality, her rage giving way to her soft desperate weeping was again heartbreaking.

I don't know how I will manage to wait for next part and I am so refraining from guessing games.😆

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

something is fishy here...investigate kadegi padi!!!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Arnav might have left long ago, but his melancholia seems to have rubbed off on Khushi. Her struggle with her thoughts focusing again and gain on Arnav, the difficulty in carrying out a normal conversation with Astha; such things do not have an easy and ready answer and I wonder how it is that her heart is going to find peace again. It makes me feel she was better off back at her home where she was disappointed with her relationship with Aman but at least not dejected to this level.

This chapter sure has the wheels of my mind in motion. Till now it was easy to assume and tag Lavanya as the bad woman, but somehow this chapter paves way for another theory. Arav's existence (it remains to be seen if he is there; something makes me feel he isn't) does provide a different perspective. Also, there was a human touch to Lavanya that was shown; one which failed to be showcased earlier.

I guess it is back to us being on square one. there is a possibility of there being no love between Lavanya and Arnav and that Arnav's feelings for Khushi are true. Also, I think Lavanya might be at fault to some extent...but the basic summary is that all this is a big entanglement , solving which is going to prove to be a daunting task

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

awesome update !!! lavanya enjoys to see him suffer then why she wants him home now make him suffer more?? its complicated as life of four people are involved 3 adults and one child.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

That last piece was so beautiful. ...

i wonder about lavanya...it seems she was a selfish woman...but then I would wait until you are telling us all about them and arav...

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Whole night even in my dreams I was thinking about SF ..what an intriguing update Jenny..loved it..

I wonder if Arnav loved Lavanya any time in past, he would never confess to Kushi so early and still pursuing her..who is Arav? why didn't Kushi didn't see the wedding picture clearly? My mind knows that Arav is Arnav - Lavanya's son..but filmy mind says that there is a twist ;-)

I donn know what is meant by rebound girl..will do some research on that..

btw am planning to visit Lakewood soon ;-) I live on the other side of Cleveland at Beachwood

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Its not fair but my mind is drawing comparison between A Late Spring and SF.. roles of Arnav and Kushi are reverse in these 2 beautiful FFs by you..

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dumas

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Interesting update khushi wants to hate la but hates that she does asr did not say anything about a child so is it that the child is dead and la seems like she wants him yet wants to hurt him confusing update but waiting for you to drop the other shoe thanks for the pm.

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

This chapter is perfect portrayal of Kushi's inner turmoil. It just shows how we want things to be when we can't accept the facts and confused with the course of events. Till now Kushi always acted mature and thinks very practical. I like this Kushi.

At this juncture Arav character is very mysterious. It seems he is (was) Arnav - Lavanya son and named after his Granddad(?). Is Arav's demise reason for Lavanya's mental condition and therapy?. According to pictures Arav seemed to be Papa's boy. Does Arav's untimely death is the reason behind melancholic Arnav?. Lavanya in her dejected state also wishes for Arnav to come back to her life and home but the way she responds to Arnav's emails is confusing. Right now this story plot is more of thriller and suspense than romance :).

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