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-Aurora-

@-Aurora-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Wuuhhh!!

I just knew it that Khushi couldn't be a prostitute. It was so obvious, she was Khushi - she was born to survive.

Now it all seems so clear. Khushi is working with NK, to wipe out those slimy creatures - human wouldn't be a right word - from the world. She is backing up with NK and blackmailing those clients to back off or she would make sure that their business is known to the world. Ahh!! Oh how I loved it. This is how I have always imagined Khushi - strong, determined, fierce, intimidating - Speaking of which - I loved her dress and also I would be damned if I didn't mentioned the peck - I loved it - she gave to Aman - could this girl ever stop amazing me?

Arnav is well Arnav - bottling up like he always does. I doubt the pent house fire was also one of Adi's trick.But nonetheless it made the leads come together, albeit they didn't literally come together but something that would lead them to do so, and I couldn't stop thanking Adi for it.

Khushi's pregnant - wuuhhh!!! I knew this would be coming,so wasn't much shocked. This plot relates to the theme. Khushi was considered a child out of fling - atleast that is what her father thought and Arnav not knowing who his parents - who left him to beg - were. So, the child here - an outcome of a rape, not similar to the lead's story of birth but still similar in many ways - would serve a crucial turning point. According to the theme, they would keep the child because they havn't resented anything as much as their childhood and no matter what they wouldn't let the child suffer so because the sub theme of the story is kids suffering because of their parent's decisions or thoughts - the main reason the child is here to stay.

I am happy that finally Arnav is realizing the signs and in the prologue - they have told, vaguely, each other what they think about the baby's father; though they keep fighting in the hospital but when they cool down I am sure they will realize what the other is thinking and this is how most of the misunderstanding would be cleared.

Crossed fingers!!!Hoping for the best.

Do update soon and send me a PM too! 😊

Edited by -Aurora- - 11 years ago

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nonie3081

@nonie3081

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Currently both are victims. I don't blame Arnav , he felt betrayed , neither do I blame Khushi for her next step . They are acting per the situation demands . She is trying to fight with people who demean women and/ or cheat their better halfs ... Even once te truth is out it will be devastating for both . He will feel defeated that he was unable to protect her and she will feel cheated . Hopefully it would strengthen their bond .

Thanks for the update ...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Since I know your from Chennai I guess this line suits just too well

* unnai inrodu naan marapeanea naan marapeane* vinmadhi vinmadhi eh nilla..superb song selection man and added the fact those lyrics I prefer the tamizh one :P

Now to the update!! Thank you so much for portraying Khushi this strong and in the right way without hurting a readers sentiments about their favorite characters. I know its your story and your way of giving it is totally justified.. But as a reader we tend to connect with the story as ours this shows how much you captivate us by your work so I guess that is why the different different reactions.. But apart from that each time I think something with what you have ended the chapter with you outshone me with the next way of taking it..I mean how you make me feel I was totally wrong in assuming.. Brilliant man..

Now to the update wonderful..what is she? Seeking revenge. Guts man she's definitely a warrior.. Kudos to the effect..

And how is altogether another wonder you have scripted it so well..

I'm just going to enjoy what's served I'm not going to go about with my POV coz clearly I'm proved wrong :D

Cheers man

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Hey Deepthi

Another great update ..

But first...regarding the opinion you expressed about PROSTITUTES... I agree them being very brave...the salary thing is true as much heart wrenching as it is... But not being judgemental...is ideal..but how many of us can be so...? No matter what they do for lively hood... They deserve respect and dignity... If anyone must be detested or looked at with disgust...it should be those who force them become ...it should be those who come to them..

My respect for Khushi just increased immensly... I. Love the fire in her...her determination to set all the prostitutes free... But the way she is showing it to Arnav is just too good.. After what he accused her off.. He deserved to love with how it feels like when she became what he wanted her to...

Arnav and Khushi still love and care for eachother...it's sooo evident...no matter how much they try n believe to hate each other...

But I wish she told him it was him that night who bruised her... How deep did Adi hurt her...her bruises were still there even after 2 months...? A real monster..

By the way... How did the pent house catch fire...? Did Arnav do it purposefully to burn Khushi's memories...? Or was it really an accident...?

One more thing Deepthi..

Who will come to know the truth first..? Will it be Arnav or Khushi...?

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Congrats for new thread! I am glad Khushi has come out strong. Only if life wasn't so unfair to her and Arnav. Can't wait for Adi's truth to come out. Also, waiting for Arnav to become "The Valiant Knight" for Khushi... pls cont soon

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Congrats on the new thread!!! Awesome update!!!! You did an amazing job 👏

Thank god Khushi is not a prostitute, I would have been really surprised if she did something like that totally out of her character even if she was doing it because of Arnav!!!!

I am sure she is using all the money for something to do with social service!!! Cannot wait for both of them to find out the truth...

Please update soon Deepthi!!!!!

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Superb parts... One big misunderstanding changed everything. I thought khushi is going to give back to Arnav... I don't think her being the prostitute has affected Arnav in any way. I will look forward to know what khushi does with the money.

Arnav's concern was really touching. The way he backed out when he came to know khushi visited him in the hospital. The way he asked her who hurt her so much ... Very nicely written.

Please update the next chapter soon. I will be eagerly waiting for Thursday.

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Did she have bruises and scars from 2 months ago?

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

when will he realise that his own brother ruin her ..awesome

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201
ok for starters thnx for the big lecture on prostitute ...i feel exactly d same about dem...n abt khushi's situation i dont think i can think abt khushi as u think she is ur character ...no one can know her better den u
i was right abt 1 thing dat she may pretend to be a prostitute but never did i thought dat she will do dis ...but i didnt get one thing how is she helping d other gals ...she is just getting money blackmailing ...or i guess only half d story is out as we still dont know wat NK do wen he enters d man's room ...so io guess we hav to wait for dat ...n wid u i think we cant guess much

right now m feeling proud of khushi for wat she is doing n d way she is treating men, dey deserve it , whether NK or the b******s she is settling ...gals hav to be cold n bitchy to protect der dignity

i loved dat slap ...i dont know whether he deserve it or not but i loved it

arnav is broken i agree but still dis is wat one should get wen one choose to not trust his wife cauz he hav seen sumthing very worst in his past

p.s ok one question ...m not married so dont know much on dis part , how r dose marks still on her , doesnt dey go away wid tym

They are not love bites which go away in 3-5 days...Those are BITES real animal bites, and when a man r*pes, he doesnt give love bites, he gives animal bites...😕...

an year ago, my daughter got bit by her friend in day care, the mark became permanent shoiwng the teeth print...so yeah some scars never fades away with age

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