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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Congrats Deepthi for new thread.

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samarablog

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

i am craving for more, that much i liked it

it is so difficult to predict where does the story go, even from here..

you are doing a great job of exploring this plot..

i only hope both of them atleast talk sensibly once for all..they jst are predicting and predicting.. what is aman and nk doing?!

:) good!

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Aisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Congratz on new thread 🥳🥳
Awesome 👏👏
Superb update 👏👏
Loved it 😛

Eagerly waiting to read more 😊

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

first of all i am so proud of you deepthi... the way you have written about Prostitutes and prostitution is just commendable. hats off to you... and now the updates well i just loved it.. both characters are so strong.. felt sad for both of them but really like the way khushi is dealing with things.. i really want them to communicate and clear the misunderstanding but i guess everything will happen when the time is right,, oh god now can't wait to read the next part. very nicely written chapter dear... loved it as always:-)) take care

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Tanmaya

@anuarshi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Can you turn the story more worst than this???😭

You said that it doent matter whether arnav was her first o not but the love b/w thm is all thats imp...

But now bringing a child in their lyf???!!!!

Seriously????!!! by making a innocent thing suffer will u uphold their love story😡😭

And what about the actual culprit?????!!!

Sorry if i was harsh to you but i mean it...

Plz plz plz let the misunderstanting get awy soon

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Emotional update
next update will be mahaupdate right ?
plzzz update soon

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Sweety012345

@Sweety012345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

This chapter was everything I didn't expect. I expected Khushi making decisions in haste and then her regretting, but she chose to do something to teach rich a**holes a lesson.

I am guessing that Arnav will use his brain and will try to find out what has happened and Khushi might also get an inkling that Arnav wasn't there that night.

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Mind blowing. Always knew Khushi will never do anything immoral and she is doing a great job even though she is suffering herself. He may wear the mask of indifference but Arnav can't stop loving her. Hope the truth about Adi comes out soon. Will wait eagerly for the next updates

Edited by sudhalata1 - 11 years ago

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

i am unsure on how to react...they are still misunderstood souls who burn in their own hell...

now Kushi is pregnant ..i wonder how Arnav will react to that...

they have to accept each other for what they are and there in no changing that ...

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ankitamishra201

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

ok for starters thnx for the big lecture on prostitute ...i feel exactly d same about dem...n abt khushi's situation i dont think i can think abt khushi as u think she is ur character ...no one can know her better den u

i was right abt 1 thing dat she may pretend to be a prostitute but never did i thought dat she will do dis ...but i didnt get one thing how is she helping d other gals ...she is just getting money blackmailing ...or i guess only half d story is out as we still dont know wat NK do wen he enters d man's room ...so io guess we hav to wait for dat ...n wid u i think we cant guess much

right now m feeling proud of khushi for wat she is doing n d way she is treating men, dey deserve it , whether NK or the b******s she is settling ...gals hav to be cold n bitchy to protect der dignity

i loved dat slap ...i dont know whether he deserve it or not but i loved it

arnav is broken i agree but still dis is wat one should get wen one choose to not trust his wife cauz he hav seen sumthing very worst in his past

p.s ok one question ...m not married so dont know much on dis part , how r dose marks still on her , doesnt dey go away wid tym

Edited by ankitamishra201 - 11 years ago