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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepthiya, Awesome.. I totally agree with your thoughts on Prostitutes..your writings and thoughts are definitely providing food for thought to most of the readers. I'm happy that Khushi is trying to create an ecosystem such that no one man thinks of f**king a woman... she is caching on the weaknesses of the rich socialites and probably wants to help the woman victims who were made prostitutes..Khushi came to know that she is pregnant... Khushi and Arnav came face 2 face after that night for the first time..So Arnav started to think from his mind, and he is feeling that she might be loyal to him... these thoughts will help him to seek out the truth..He is still caring about her, why not, she is still Mrs. Raizada, right? Would the bruises/bites on her body, make him see that she was assaulted and he tries to dig further...I'm sure he will be shattered after hearing what Khushi said...

I slept with so many men that I have no idea who did this to me, if this is what you wanted to hear. Unfortunately I dont remember what and how they do things to me, old time habit you see. She taunted him of the night he took all hers.
Whatever you made me into...A Prostitute in one word.

How will be his next encounter with her, which will land her in hospital and he getting to know that she is pregnant...He is taunting her with her known words of sleeping with men, and she not even aware of whose child it is..Arnav should start controlling his angers, words hurled once can't be taken back and it hurts the recipient.. Looking forward for the next update..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum update hats off to u n this stry tnough m currently not vry happy with this misunderstanding n hope it clear soon enough it gud that atleast they having douts in there mind ohh i dont know how will they react when truth will b out dear eagerly waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved to see this khushi in a new avatar... wondering when will they be able to understand each other...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will read than commant 😳
Am sooo excited to read this chapter...
Ro ro kar tissues bhi khatm ho gay hain 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RealityTruth

Deepthiya, Awesome.. I totally agree with your thoughts on Prostitutes..your writings and thoughts are definitely providing food for thought to most of the readers. I'm happy that Khushi is trying to create an ecosystem such that no one man thinks of f**king a woman... she is caching on the weaknesses of the rich socialites and probably wants to help the woman victims who were made prostitutes..Khushi came to know that she is pregnant... Khushi and Arnav came face 2 face after that night for the first time..So Arnav started to think from his mind, and he is feeling that she might be loyal to him... these thoughts will help him to seek out the truth..He is still caring about her, why not, she is still Mrs. Raizada, right? Would the bruises/bites on her body, make him see that she was assaulted and he tries to dig further...I'm sure he will be shattered after hearing what Khushi said...

I slept with so many men that I have no idea who did this to me, if this is what you wanted to hear. Unfortunately I dont remember what and how they do things to me, old time habit you see. She taunted him of the night he took all hers.
Whatever you made me into...A Prostitute in one word.

How will be his next encounter with her, which will land her in hospital and he getting to know that she is pregnant...He is taunting her with her known words of sleeping with men, and she not even aware of whose child it is..Arnav should start controlling his angers, words hurled once can't be taken back and it hurts the recipient.. Looking forward for the next update..




You are right..I think Arnav being the one who always believed in what he saw and what he heard, he will have tough time to understand Khushi atleast until the prologue is over. Prologue will be the main turning point and an eye opener for both
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant chapter...I appreciate your efforts to bring this brilliant work...I read the author's note and can't stop appreciating you...the message is going to go straight into the heads of everybody who reads this story...each chapter is window showing the things happening around us...after reading the last chapter me too was one of the readers who did not want khushi to become a prostitute...we love khushi so much and we are biased with khushi should have a lovely life with Arnav and all that stuff...so you can understand why the outburst saying no to prostitution...I wondered why I could not think of this angle after reading this chapter... I loved this story from the beginning... khushi was a tough woman and she struggled a lot in her life...she felt that her husband has used her... I have to appreciate her to take such a decision to protect all the woman who had no other option but to get into prostitution... after happening so much between them, she went to the hospital as soon as she knew that Arnav was not well...she still loves him and she is confused and angry why Arnav has abandoned her... Arnav too loves her and it showed up when he was concerned about her... she is pregnant now and would like to see Arnav's reaction to this...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepthi, the writeup about prostitutes was really touching.


So Arnav had collapsed after setting fire to the bed and apparently he was rescued by paramedics from the burning apartment. For once I am happy that the apartment burned down. Atleast when Arnav and Khushi come to know the truth, they can start afresh at a new place. (Already counting the chickens before the eggs are hatched 😆)

If you love someone it wont vanish just in one moment. I guess thats the reason Khushi visited him in the hospital and also Arnav asking her about the bruises.

Now atleast Anjali treats Arnav like her brother. In one of the earlier updates Anjali had told Adi that she became a gynecologist so that she can help women get an abortion who have been raped by men ruthlessly which had gotten them pregnant. Somehow that statement stuck with me and I keep thinking that will Khushi go to her once the truth comes out requesting her to perform an abortion.


He even ignored various media speculating her presence with other men in several parties until proven.

The above statement from today's update again takes me back to the prologue. Is that what he meant when he told that she is famous now a days.

Khushi's confidence has grown so much. She pecked Aman's cheek right in front of Arnav. And poor her, what are all the bruises on her body? Are they given by men like she met today and who slapped her? Or are they the bruises given by Adi on that day which ruined everything for them?

Hats off to her bravery and courage. I know that she is playing a big game which you will tell us in the next update but still cant stop appreciating this woman.

So the next update is the Prologue 1. Waiting for it.

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Erhmmm you leave me speechless. the way you have described each detail must be so hard for a writer to write through...hats off hun!!!
those bruises I am assuming are still from dat B****D Adi
thanks for the pm xx will wait for the next one..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
We are almost close to the maha update. I cant wait to find out what Khushi does with the money. Poor Arnav stopped thinking ever since that night. Thanks for the update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww...just loved it..after all my thinking what's goona happen next,u give the best...feeling so greedy..so asking when will b the next update???simply love the new khusi...and yes asr's redemption will b like hell when truth will come out.n what will happen to ksr...I knw u will make it hell intense dear..

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